A Fan Fiction~ Young Hearts ~(AR)(RM)(Updated Pg2)

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Fan Fiction 'Young Hearts

Nina (Sukirti) 21

Cute and bubbly girl, an intern in Sanjeevani hospital. She wears western clothes and is a big believer when it comes to love. But she also has a fragile heart and tends to get hurt easily. She loves her family which includes her sister Shreya and her dad.

Shreya (Drushti)23

A beautiful girl with ambition in her life ' To become a successful doctor in the hospital she is working as intern. She is a shy and calm type of girl. Her belief in love is not as deeper as her sister.

Rohit (KSG) 22

The cool dude that works in Sanjeevani, as an intern. He is just like Armaan from DMG. Very flirtatious and a girl changes her life forever.

Aman (Mayank )23

He is also an intern in the same hospital. He is very happy in his life and gives a lot of importance to his work.

Varun (Amit Tondon)23

He is a doctor in the hospital. He is always very reserved in his work. He doesn't have a family' What he does is by himself, for himself, and with himself.

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"It's the first day of work, make a good impression. You won't get a second chance to make the first impression". Nina repeated the same words her father had said last night before going to bed.

She took a peek at her sister, who was calm and quiet, like her usual self. Shreya stood up from her chair where she was doing her hair and went to Nina's closet, which didn't have any clothes hung properly. Judging from the closet's condition it looked like Nina had tried the entire outfits.

"When you say something like that, who won't panic?" she asked herself in a whispered tone.Shreya just smiled and stood besides her sister with a blue T-shirt and a pair of skinny jeans. Nina liked that,but another idea popped in her head. Nina took the clothes from Shrea's hands and examined it for a second and put it back where it belonged. Nina saw a confused look on her sister's face. She took a couple of steps toward Shreya.

"Di mere paas ek bahud accha idea hai" Nina said as she took a seat on the bed .

"Aur who kya hai"?asked Shreya sitting besides her sister on her bed.

"Papa ne kaha he ki first impression bahud hi important hoti hai. Haan ki naa?

"Haan"

"Toh aaja ke liye me aap ki ek salwar kameez pehenti hoon"

"Idea bura nahin hai"

"Mujhe pata hai, aakhir Nina ki idea hai"

Shreya gave an approval look, and Nina twirled her way to Shreya's closet to pick a new outfit. She took a white one out of the closet and showed it to Shreya for her permission. She said yes, and then Nina went to change.

"Ab mein T-shirt aur akirt pehenti hoon" Shreya said sarcastically. She got up from her bed and started digging for an outfit in her closet. She spotted a black and white kameez and thought that was the for today. Nina came out of the bathroom, with a new avatar. It looked like she went from Mallika to Sati Savitri. Shreya chuckled at her own thought.

"Kya hua"? Nina asked.

"Kuch Nahin, tum bahud khubshurad lag rahi ho" Shreya complimented her sister's new look.

"Ab sirf ek kaam baanki hai?" Shreya asked.

"Mughe mere baal straighten karna hai" Nina said as she plugged in the cord.

'Of course" Shreya said as she rolled her eyes.

"Jaldi karo warna hume late ho jayega" replied Shreya.

"Haan haan dhik hai karti hoon" said Nina

Nina had straightened her hir nly once in a while .. whenever there were some functions with the wedding and all' or else Nina would always have her own curly hair. Shreya too had her hair curly' but that'll be the only similarity between these sisters.

Edited by music_l0ver036 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Intresting intro!!!
The part was really nice..
continue soon
and pleasse PM me when you update.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice intro Aaisma!!

please continue soon!!!

also if you can .. please pm me when u update!!

thanks!! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ibdt2004

nice intro Aaisma!!

please continue soon!!!

also if you can .. please pm me when u update!!

thanks!! 😊

Thanks Shilpa
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey beti ji really nice concept..cant wait to read more...pm me everytime u upadate..
❤️MONA
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Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.

hey beti ji really nice concept..cant wait to read more...pm me everytime u upadate..

❤️MONA

🤗🤗🤗 Thank You Mommy
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"Ab nichein chalen? Hume breakfast bhi karna hai", said Shreya Smiling, but a little irritated that Nina took forever to

straighten her hair.
"Whatever .... chalo", said Nina .
They walked downstairs quickle and halted to a stop seeing table full of food.
"Oh no", said the sisters simultaneously as then walked a couple of steps and took a seat.
"Chinta karne ki zaroorat nahin hai, khaana maine hotel se order kiya hai", said MR. Khanna ignoring the rude comment made by

his daughters. Sheya and Nina breathed a sigh of relief, slighly embarrassed.
"Aaj kaam ka pehela din hai, socha encouragment ho jayega", concluded Mr. Khanna. He sat down and picked up a paratha and

took his first bite.
"Thanks Dad", they said at the same time yet again.
Then the next few minutes were silent as everyone was busy with the food.
Nina was quite surprised that her dad hadn't noticed about the change on her outfit today. Well, in fact Mr. Khanna was still

in shock.
"You're looking nice today", said Mr.Khanna smiling, and swallowing his food at the same time . Now that her sister and her

father had said it, she believed that she did looke different today. Not the kind of different with not matching shoes with

red dress, different as in beautiful in salwar kameez. But what was annoying abt the outfit was, the dupatta. She had already

worn it in 5 different ways.
"Thanks dad", smiled Nina.

Nina exchanged a look with Shreya and they bothh got out of the chair.
"Barish ho raha hai, chata lane ke liye mat bhul na" suggested Mr.Khanna. Nina's smiled dissapeared as a frown and a little

frustrationg covered her face. Shreya smiled knowing the obvious thought that Nina was thinking. Nina hated rain. Whenever

she went out on a cold rainy day her hair would be like frankenstines drenching from the water.
"Chal hum careful hoke jayenge, tumhare baal mein, baarish ke rk drop bhi parneh nahin denge", Shreya consoled her sister.

"Dhik hai" replied Nina. Her smile reappeared.
"Why are you so worried, yahan se bus tak 5-10 minutes hai aur wahanse 5-10 minutes", both of them turned to Mr. Khanna who

was still biting his last piece of paratha.
"Haan ayesa hi kuch", Mr. Khanna said, as he remembered the first day of his internship...which was almost 5 years ago.

Looking back, now it seemed like he was passing his job to the next generation.

Shreya and Nina said bye tto Mr. Khanna and headed to the front door. Each opened an umbrella, put on their shoes and

walked outside.
"Aaj bada maja aayega na? asked Nina after a couple of moments, turning back just to see Shreya not listining to her. Nina

sighed loudly. Similar to Nina, Shreya wasn't a big fan of rain either , but today it seemed different to Shreya. Felt as her

life is about to change. Sure it was her first day of work, but it was different than that.
"Di mujhe pata nahin aap kin khayalon mein doobi huyi hai, par bus aagaya, said Nina skipping a puddle of water.
"Kuch nahin sirf work ke liye excited hun", replied Shreya with a smile.

Nina closed her umbrella as she entered Sanjeevani.
"Di mujhe pyaas lag raha hai, mein cafetaria chalti hoon, aap locker room jahiye, mein aapko woh hin milti hoon", said Nina handing the umbrella to her sister.

Edited by music_l0ver036 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aaisma i just read the intro and first part and this part it was just too good..aaisma i'm so glad u have amit tandon aswell..just miss niki...but it is ok..as i love if abhi falls for nina..u know i love their jodi.

the part was awesome..mhm they don't like rain...i love rain..lol
and lol first day of work...actuly remind me of dmg first day..ust that this was in another way, like rain and all that...but it was so enjoyable to read....do continue soon and pm me..
Edited by KasuPremeer - 16 years ago
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hey nice update...there is something simlir between me and nina i hate the rain..because of the hair and also because of the dirtyness and wetnees it gets on the ground after rain....amezing update...
❤️MONA

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