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Posted: 16 years ago
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Okay,girls,this is not an FF(There are many awesome ones already here!)These are just certain conversations I wanted YuRa to have-b4 & after their marriage.Those tracks were lovable,yet, I was always left thinking 'If...'This is not purely romance,though(I am no good at it anyways).If anybody doesn't like it,I can always stop.Oh & I love criticisms of all kinds.Okay now enough Bhaashan

Rani sat thinking in her room that night of Kunwarji for what might be the umpteenth time.Doing so had become a habit of hers especially after he had come over to their village.Right now,she was wondering as to why she always got tongue-tied in front of him every-time.He had done so much for her & had every right to know about her & talk to her. She decided that it was high time she started opening up to him.

Determined, she went off into a deep,dreamy sleep.She got up early in the morning & finished all her chores by the time everybody else had woken up. She untied her plaits & stood in front of the mirror.

Two small hands crept up from behind & before she knew it,her ribbons were gone amidst the naughty laughter of her brother,Munna "Never mind,I have other pairs",she thought to herself & opened her drawer.

"Huh,baaki sab kahan hain?"

"didi aapko kya laga hum aapko itni aasaani se tang karna chod denge? Humne aapke saare ribbons chura liye!Yeh dekhiye",Munna showed her about 5 pairs of ribbons dangling from his hand.

"Munna,idhar aao aur hamare ribbons hume waapas karo",she ran after him,her hair flying with the wind.

While running,an idea crossed Munna's mind.He took an abrupt turn & went towards Yudi,thrusting the ribbons in his hands.

"munna kahan hai aap?hum aaoko dhoondkar hi rahenge"Rani followed him & found herself standing in front of Yudi.

Rani immediately lowered her eyes.Munna hiding behind Yudi started running away.Rani noticed that his hands were empty.

"woh..aapke ribbons hamaare paas hain.."Yudi gave her a grin to which Rani could just simply stand & stare
"Hume de dijiye Kunwarji,"

"Sirf ek shart par"..Rani was flabbergasted.He took a step closer

"Agar aap hame kunwarjee bulana chod dengi toh.Ham ab Rajparivar ke sadasya nahin hain Rani"

Rani almost turned away.An idea crossed her mind & her eyes twinkled.She turned,facing Yudi
"kunwarjee?"Yudi looked away disappointed.
"Aap Rajaprivaar ke sadasya ho na ho..hamari spanon ki duniya ke rajkumar aap hi to haain naa.Isliye humare liye to aap hamesha kunwarje hi rahenge".

Yudi was surprised & glad to hear speak like that.He merely held out the ribbons without saying anything.She had won him over again-now because of her words not her silence.

"Rehne dijiye kunwarjee.."She put just 2 clips in her hair which she brought along.
It was Yudi's turn to be flabbergasted.


P.S-Kaisa tha?If bad,I am sorry,I could stop.Actually thoda lamba ho gaya
Ignore the typos
Edited by andromeda_kia - 15 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Purva,
Bahut bahut bahut achcha tha! 👏👏👏
It was Just awesome girl!⭐️👍🏼
Rani ne sharmana chod diya?😳
Aur Munna ne toh Ribbon chura ke achcha hi kia! Wow Iam loving it!
Please do continue!
Yaar mera Yudi toh kitna achcha hai! 😍
Now include Yudi! in maximum scenes warnaa comment kam ho jaayegi....I mean the length!😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Very very nice Purva, really enjoyed the read. Waiting for more! 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Purva,
That was fantastic. I always thought that RKAB left a lot to be desired in terms of romance. I really like your conversations. please keep them coming.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww purva that was great!!
and worry not.. it was NEVER too long.. in fact us devoted rkabians all need long FFs or short stories as a form of escapism for the current shambles that is known as RKAB!
thanks so much for cheering up what appears to be a collectively depressed d frustrated(by this stupid track) forum xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks Purva enjoyed it and we welcome all your creativity. These moments of intimacy which have been missing from the serial is what is so romantic really. Keep these dialogues coming Purva
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Purva ,

U were awesome..🤗
Beautiful scene and dialogues.... 👏 👏 👏

Munna was really cute...😛

Yar tumnay buhat acha kaam kia kay uski pigtails khool din.....future main uskay haath kabhi woh ribbons nahin lagain gay...mujhsay waada karo 😆

Aur we are missing Yura scenes to please yaar continue such romance ...i am really appreciating these updates..

Excellent scene yaar , waiting for your next one...plz update soon 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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purva so cute. aur lmba to bilkul nahi hai. I like Rani without ribbons already. Continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😍 That was such a joyous read Purva, loved it.
Now, keep bringing out the hidden writer within you. Looking forward to the next conversation.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank You all.I will personally thank each one later,Sorry-no disrespect meant!
I am gonna continue from the village again.

Yudi was flabbergasted. How did Rani know that he liked her with her hair open?He didnt wait for any answer-whatever it was his love for Rani was increasing in leaps & bounds.He knew that there were no limits to his love for Rani.
Since coming in to the village, he had known more of her which endeared her to him even more.After all,he himself was coming round to the fact that Rani was only his & nobody else's to be.He would ensure that personally.

Today,however,he had got an inkling of rani's feelings for him-it was a lovely feeling.he loved her even more for the fact that she was making a conscious effort to open up in front of him.Help her he would! He looked at the place around him.Everything seemed to hold something of Rani in it.He wished he could stay here forever.
"Beta,kya soch rahein hain??"
"Amma woh.. kuch nahi.Ham yehi soch rahe the ki ganv ka vataavaran kitna shant,komal aur swacch hai!(Bilkul mere Rani ki taraha)"said a voice in his heart.
"Bete aapko kisi cheez ki kami to nahin na?"
"kaisi baatein kar rahin hain aap Amma.Hum yahan bohot khush hain"
"Dost, aaiye na hamaare saath,Hum aapko kucch dikhaana chaahte hain..Dadi bhi hai wahaan..chaliye"

Yudi allowed himself to be led by Munna.He entered the hall & saw dadi with her specs & a book propped open in front of her.He went ahead to have a closer look.It was an album.

"Aao beta" Dadi went on showing a photos of Rani & Munna's childhood.She stopped by one photo & caressed it lovingly with her hand.
"Yeh kaun hai dadi?"Yudi asked.He had so seen so many photos of this man.Here he was with a girl of 10 years old. "Yeh Rani ke pitaaji hain bete.Dekhiye.." The girl in the photo was unmistakably Rani.The same big,brown innocent eyes,2 plaits, the perfect bow lips curved into a smile which radiated through the photo into Yudi's heart.Yudi was seeing a smile which he had never seen before even on rani's face.

He thought of something & got up to leave.
"Dadi,Rani kahaan hai?"
"Woh kuain ke paas hai,bete!"Dadi didnt bother to stop him. Rani was by the well bringing up water.
She suddenly felt a strong pair of hands holding her own.They gave a tug & the water came up in a trice.Rani didn't need telling as to who was standing behind her.She turned to see Yudi giving her a boyish grin which created flutters in her heart.

"Rani,aap bhi to hamaari sapnon ki rajkumaari hain"

"Lekin aap to hamein Rani hi to kehte hain na Kunwarjee."

Yudi was caught again!Rani looked at the pot full of water.She was overcome with so much love for this man in front of her with such a lovable look on his face that she couldn't stop a smile.

Yudi realised as to what EXACTLY he had come looking for-the same smile.He felt elated -no honoured that he was giving her true happiness.

In that moment at that unlikely place by the well,both Yudi & Rani realised their love for each other which was beyond anything mortal,yet just as real.


I hope you all like this one as well!
Edited by andromeda_kia - 16 years ago

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