FF--KHWAISH part 35 &36&epliouge pg 65 july 21

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Angie

@angel82

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#451

wow lovely ending......

loved how you wrote both the parts....how prem supported heer in the hospital , how ash called prem jiju in front of everyone and Meher telling everyone the truth....I was expectng prem to tel everyone himself...but this was a nice chnge....and how the diya -misunderstanding was cleared and finally anadi...lol....but why did u name the kid anadi? it means illeterate or something rite?

looking forward to ur next FF

luv

angie

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aaminaman

@aaminaman

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#452

nice it was really nice i liked the ending very much thanks

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Fatima

@-Fatima-

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#453

Hi how r u now sis?
i just finished reading whole last update.firstly u r such a great writer👏.its one of the best ff.i start reading it again😳.i already missing khwaish😔.
*back to update*its awesome update diya is not married to premshe married to piyush great.but prem should tell all this to heer b4 he wait 2 years😡but wateva i love the ending its just great.
i always love happy endings.
thanks 4 the pm.
Luv
Fatima

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 16 years ago

#454

shrutu tune part post kar diya aur main aagayi apne comments lekar..thoda sa late hogayi, is baat ke liye tu mujhe phone par daant le na..okie..hehehe..chal ab story kii tarag badhthi hoon, mujhko is baat kii khushi hai kii chah theek hai...waise bhi usko tho theek hona hii tha na, abhi joh usko chot lagi hai, yeh ek taraf se us upar waale ka ishara hai kii chah kii wajah se heer prem ko ek dusare ke kareeb aana chahiye.. aur dekho na dono aaye bhii ek dusare ke kareeb..aise mushkil waqt mein heer, prem ek saath the, yahii tho hothi hai sachche pyaar kii taakat, unke pyaar ke prateek ne un dono ko awaaz diya aur dekho unki zindagi phir se ek dusare par dependent hogayi, isse kehthe hai pyaar kii pyaar..hahaha.. waahh... waahhhh..waahhh...kya baat hai shrutu yaar... tussi tho ek dum chah gaye....chalo issi khushi mein mere naal bhangda kar lo...karoge na..hehehehe...chal ab meri punjabi bohat hogayi...aage badhthi hoon...waise mujhe ek baat samaj mein nahii aathi yeh heer itni ziddi kyun hai..prem bechara uske peeche pagalon kii tarah laga hua hai, usse sach batana chahtha hai lekin heer madam tho kuch bhii sunne ko taiyaar hii nahii, aur uski ghatlatfaimi kii wajah se woh prem se durr bhaag ne kii koshish karthi rehthi hai baar, baar... lekin is baat par mujhe heer se kehna hai, heer tum chahe jahaan bhii chale jao prem tumhe wapas laakar hii rahega...good kii harman & ash kii shadi hogayi...aur all the scenes where very well written too good.. lekin yeh kya heer chali gayi chah ke saath kisiko bole bina... mannn.. yeh tho problem hogayi..aur bechara prem pareshaan....finally ash ne prem ko bata hii diya kii heer sabse durr jaa rahi hai aur sabke saamne heer aur prem ke rishthe ka khulasa bhii hogaya.Thank God for it.. ab koi taakat prem heer ko alag nahii kar sakthi..then prem ka heer ko uski baatein sune bagair ghar laana, this shows prem kitna tadap utta just with the soch kii heer aur chah usse durr ho jaayenge...i can understand..koi bhii prem kii jagah hotha tho woh hadbada jaatha..then the volley of words between, heer prem & dher aaye durust aaye piyush aa hii gaya, ufff....gooddd....& heer kii saari misunderstandings durr hogayi aur prem heer ke beech phir ek baar sab theek hogaya..absolutely cool..the songs you have written is very nice...& apt...the last scene of heer, prem was very sweet...aur phir hona kya tha sab apni zindagi mein khush the mere hero ko uski kashish mil gayi...prem, heer with chahat & anadi lived happily ever after... too good yaar...fabulous... amazing.. awesome.. great..rocking.. superb..marvelous...excellent..par excellence...too sweet.. cute... perfect...yeh kahani teri zubani phir ek baar padhkar dil khush hogaya.....kehthe hai all good things in the world should end one day or the other & you have given your fanfic a wonderful, fantastic, absolutely beautiful ending...👏 love you...🤗

Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago

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mithalio

@mithalio

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#455

Excellent, very beautufuly written. Now waiting for your new story.

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Shruti

@Shruti11

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#456

Originally posted by: meghaparti
Thanks for the lovely update dear..Great job as usual dear!⭐️

thanku so much

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Shruti

@Shruti11

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#457

Originally posted by: buttercup123
Wondddddddddddeeeeeerrrrfuuuuuuuuuuulllllllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!You're a brilliant writer!!!!!!!!!!!!👏And I'm so sad that the FF ended,but it's soooooooooooooo goooooooooooodddddddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!This FF is the best FF i've read so far and please do post you're new FF because you're just brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanku u s much ur words mean a lot to me

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