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OH.. u left me crying.. it was beautiful....

thanks

Yay! You posted it! *hops around happily*

I loved loved loved it Me! You know that, right.

The way you described Meera's reaction when she realises she's not having a baby was so touching. Especially, the way she tries to ignore the tears...*sobs*

I loved this sentence:
'Meera's eyes closed tighter as she desperately held onto the moment. If it was just a dream she couldn't let him go.' Beautiful Me!

And "of course," he whispered back" Oh! Prem is awesome!!!!

I was so melancholic after reading that ending but there was a haunting sense of calm that their love would live on..forever....

Pre-Me rockkkkk!!!!!!

BBB hugs!
Loadsa love:-Nonee

wow! thats so sad! i know what prem must be going thru! loved it! hope u write more!

I don't get it - what number shot is this? 101?

And i wanna die now. That was so beautiful. You can't hog all the death! Gimme some!

But dude, I'll have you know, you left me in shock. One of the best pieces you wrote. :) Can't wait for more!

--shabz

Thanks everyone....I'll comment back after! 😛

@Shabz: *sighs* long story, but no...it's like # 104 or something! 😛

Already told you my feelings for this one...the melting ice part was SUPERB!

I loved the ending...so sad.

Not in the best of moods so deeper comment later :D

Beautiful meera
but VERY VERY emotional

My goodness!!!! This made me cry like ALOT!!! I loved it Meera!!! Totally awesome....and I kept on thinking you would end it on a happy note...But you killed "Meera"off!!!! That was VERY emotional!!!!

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

You already know how much I love it =) And you changed Anjali to Arushi? 😆

Aww thanks Ravs! 😳 And yeah I did! 😛

Originally posted by: lovely_lady

no prob..

anyways, im sure u probably dont mind that they like u with prem..

lawls..

anyways, u should make one from prem's POV after um.."meera"'s death..

how's he's coping..

i dunno..

Awww thanks! 😳 I definitely don't mind! 😳 Hmmm I don't know if I'd be able to write it! 😳

Originally posted by: LilyGurl

ill say it was brilliant

IT had so much emotion it made me have tears. Kinda scary meera.

Wow how can u put so much emotions in ur own death.

LOve Lily

Awww thanks so much Lily! 😳 Sorry for making it scary! 😳 Umm....probably cus it is mine! 😛

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Ohmygosh M! call me insane, but that must have been so much fun to write! You know, killing yourself off. 😆 Maybe it's the weird mood I'm in, but now I wanna kill myself off too!!! 🤣 You're not insane! It is kinda fun to be honest! 😳😛 And no..I don't wanna read it! 😳

Anyway, loved the emotions in this one...Did Meera know that she was going to...you know...when she sent Prem out? 😕 You just made me think of this, and I kinda wanna say yes..😛 Because of the way initially I said he shud go if he didnt wanna see me dead! 😛

I should probably go have breakfast now... Yes you should! 😃

Love,

Bhav (:

@Kavita: thanks! 😃

@Radz: you're right! 😳

@Aati1429: Thanks so much! 😳

Originally posted by: noneeM

Yay! You posted it! *hops around happily* It was all because of you hun! 😃😳

I loved loved loved it Me! You know that, right. Awww yes I do! 😳

The way you described Meera's reaction when she realises she's not having a baby was so touching. Especially, the way she tries to ignore the tears...*sobs* Awww thanks! 😊 I tried...😳

I loved this sentence:
'Meera's eyes closed tighter as she desperately held onto the moment. If it was just a dream she couldn't let him go.' Beautiful Me! Awwww thanks! 😛😳

And "of course," he whispered back" Oh! Prem is awesome!!!! That he is! 😛

I was so melancholic after reading that ending but there was a haunting sense of calm that their love would live on..forever.... Awww *hugs*

Pre-Me rockkkkk!!!!!! *hides face*

BBB hugs!
Loadsa love:-Nonee

@Kashish: thanks! 😃

@Shabz: They're labeled completely wrong...cus of all the other ones I can't post yet! 😛 As for dying, it's more fun killing myself! 😛 OMG😳 Thanks so much for liking it! 😛 That compliment really means so much to me Shabz! *hugs*

@Maddz: don't worry about leaving a longer comment! 😃😳 I'm just glad you liked it! 😛

@Poonam": Thanks so much! 😃

Originally posted by: sweetness4eva

My goodness!!!! This made me cry like ALOT!!! I loved it Meera!!! Totally awesome....and I kept on thinking you would end it on a happy note...But you killed "Meera"off!!!! That was VERY emotional!!!! Awwww sorry hun! *hugs* I didn't want you to cry, but yes I killed myself off! 😛

Question? Did Meera send Prem out purposely so he wouldn t see her slip away? (Damn its tough to talk about death) Yeah, I thought about it after, and thought it would seem better that way! :P]

Very beautifully written Meera, and to tell you the truth, all day today I needed an excuse to cry, and i just found it...This oneshot is tragedy big time!!! And i thing I LOVED was, when Prem said No to the idea of even falling in love again:) Loved that...Beautiful bonding between Prem and you:) Awww thanks! 😳 Really? I'm sorry! 😳 Hope you're okay! 😃 And thanks again! 😳

Keep writing...Great work!!!!