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Posted: 16 years ago
#91
Hey everyone!

Thank you for all your beautiful comments and for reading my FF and liking it!

It means alot to me... havent been here for a long tym now... Sorry but i stopped watching Choti bahu because of the way the story was moving... i hardly watch it anymore so i had lost interest in writing about them aswell... PLEASE dont feel bad, its my opinion, i'm sure theres still loads of RaDev fans out there... Sorry to keep you all waiting for so long but heres the next part:


Part 9

Ganga takes radhika home, everybody instantly forms a bond with her. they all have dinner and ranbir comes home, radhika sees him and gets a shock, ganga sees this and gets up.

"attention everyone! Main aap sab se kuch kehna chahti hoon! Mr. Ranbir walia… kaafi thake hue lag rahe hain aap" she grins and he notices radz and gets worried, "obviously thake hue honge after all itne interviews jo liye hain… and im sure ek na ek ladki ne to haan keh hi di hogi" everyone looks at ganga shocked "aap sab aise kya dekh rahe hain? Aap jaante hain interview lekar ladki se kehte hain ke unke saath ek raat guzaare for work… radhika aaj interview dene aayi thi na?" she asks and he gets totally embarrassed.

He tells the truth and everyone is shocked, rashi is heartbroken and jai shouts at ranbir and warns him "one word about you and you are out" he tells him while jigyasa looks at radz with anger.

Jai checks radz file and appoints her… next everything is going well…

************

Few days, weeks pass by… radz starts missing dev for some unknown reason they hadn't met for two weeks, she was thinking about him after she left from work, lost in his thoughts she almost got hit by a car and it was dev, he comes out and sees her, he was very happy he was also missing her.

"HI" he shouts excited and she gets out of the trance and sees him, shocked or surprised…

"aap… kaise ho aap?? Kahan the itne dino se? hum aaye the aapko milne par chaukidaar ne kaha aap vrindavan chale gaye…. Jaante hain humne aapko kitna yaad kiya" she says then feels embarrassed… he just smiles.

"coffee?" he asks and she smiles… they go for coffee…

"so aap humein yaad kar rahi thi?" he asks with a smile and she blushes…

she tells him the whole story from the day she left till today… they chat for a long time then he drops her to the walia mansion, shocked to know that she was living here… he's marriage was fixed with ganga and they were getting engaged next week…

"uh… radhika…" he calls but before that she had already stopped and turned and said "uh… dev" they both laugh…

"tum pehle kaho" he says

"nahi aap" she says then after a while they both say "hum kal mil sakhte hain?" and then laugh again and decide to meet.

*********

next day ganga goes for shopping, no one had the time to join her so they told her to call the guy home but she insisted that she'll go herself and left in anger…

"koi ke paas time hi nahi hai… as if I care main khud akeli bhi shopping kar sakhti hoon" she twitches her nose as she enters the mall, she starts looking at the shararas [or ghagras] she tries one then the other, she cant decide just then rishi sees her and smiles, she sees him through the mirror and he tells her the outfit was okay… she agrees and tries the other one, he says its not great… then the other one, it was a silver and blue outfit, she tries it and comes out, he gets mesmerized and lost, she looks at him and smiles, he gives her a sign to say it's the best and she smiles and takes it…

"hi" he comes.

"hey, kaise ho??? Aaj kal kahin milte nahi mujhe??? Warna to jahan main jaati thi wahan pohonch aate the… kya baat hai?" she asks and he smiles.

"to kissi ne humein miss kiya… right:" he winks and she gives it a thought she did miss him… but why??

She gets confused and starts to stammer " uh… nahi… wo… actually"

"accha choro wo sab… waise koi shaadi hai kya??" he asks pointing at the outfit and she feels that she shouldn't tell him.

"uh… haan… mujhe kuch jewelery bhi khareedni thi, tum meri help karoge??" she asks and he looks confused but she holds his hand and takes him to the jewelery store… he chooses the simple and the most elegant set in the store, she also likes it and buys it… he also helps her choose a ring for dev… then they go for coffee…

after coffee, while walking out:

"Thanks a lot… today to u saved my day! Thank you sooo much" she says and kisses him happily and runs out "okay bye" she goes while rishi stands stunned… then he blushes and hits his head and leaves aswell.

************

Few days passed by and they kept meeting… Rishi and ganga had become good friends… she invites him and tells him there is a surprise… she didn't tell him she was getting engaged…

Vishaka had also come to Mumbai and was here already for two weeks, she never inquired about her parents in the two weeks, they were worried about her… where as radhika send them a maney order and letter the second time… and also told them where she stays… they are very happy, ammaji feels really bad fo how she treated radz and today she was the one helping them and remembering them where as her ladli didn't even bother to reply to there letter, she was too busy shooting for her music video…

They all decide to go to Mumbai, to find vishaka and see radhika…

On the day of engagement… rishi was doing the catering, he was happily instructing the people what to do, while Dev was getting ready at home… he looks at himself in the mirror sadly and sees radhika behind him, he turns to see no one… he looks sad…

Radhika is helping ganga get ready, who is all excited, she keeps praising her would be husband, since radz had told her not to take his name… radhika gets ready and was looking stunning in a cute pink ghagra… with silver stone work, her hair left loose… ganga had bought the outfit for her…

"dulhe raja aagaye hain" some girls come and inform them, ganga blushes and radhika takes herdown… while walking down, she's talking and laughing with some other girls teasing ganga… dev sees her and has a smile on his face… she was looking stunning, for a moment he forgot that he was getting married to ganga not radhika… as soon as it strikes him he feels sad… radhika finally looks at the dulha who was sitting on the chair, his back facing her…

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Okay thats it for now😉 Hope u like it! hit the LIKE button if you do😛


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Posted: 16 years ago
#92

Part 10

Radhika brings ganga down with a smile and sees the dulha… her world is like snatched away from her, her life was meaningless all of a sudden, she keeps staring at dev sadly and ganga tries to call her… finally she comes back to reality and gives a false smile and says she has some work to do… she goes to the bathroom and cries… she tries to smile falsely and comes out while dev gives her those looks, showing how much he still loves her… on the other hand rishi sees that ganga is getting engaged and feels bad…

After the ring ceremony is over ganga calls rishi and forces him to sing… he looks sad but sings:

Mere dil mein aaj kya hai, tu kahe to main bata doon [he starts sadly staring at ganga]Na chaahoon sona chaandi, na chaahoon heera moti [then lie lie trys to be happy, ganga feels awkward.]Yeh mere kis kaam ke [he congratulates the two, ganga feels wierd]Na maangoon bangla baadi, na maangoon ghoda gaadiYeh to hain bas naam keDe di hai dil de badle mein dil ke [he looks at her seriously and she feels a awkward connection between the two] They force Radhika and she goes to rishi as she understand that he loves her because he turns and rubs his tears…Ghe ghe ghe ghe ghe, ghere sahiba pyaar mein sauda nahin [she tells him and he smiles]Jhoot bole [ganga goes to them and starts]Arre jhoot bole kaunwa kaate, kaale kaunwe se darriyoMain maike chali jaaoongi, tum dekhte rahiyo [she says to dev and he just smiles and looks at radz] Rishi starts singingLe jaayenge le jaayenge, dilwaale dulhaniya le jaayengeHaan, le jaayenge le jaayenge, dilwaale dulhaniya le jaayenge Ganga tells him:Yeh galiyaan yeh chaubaara yahan aana na dobaara - 2Ab hum to bhaye pardesi ke tera yahan koi nahinKe tera yahan koi nahinLe jaa rang birangi yaadein, hasne rone ki buniyaadeinAb hum to bhaye pardesi ke tera yahan koi nahinKe tera yahan koi nahin Dev looks at radz hurt and sings: jane hai kitna bechen maan

jane hai kesa deevana pan

deevana pan

kabhi na sakun aya [he looks at her hurt and sings, she feels bad]

kabhi na karar aya

jab se hai tum pe

mujko pyar aya

kabhi na sakun aya

kabhi na karar aya

jab se hai tum pe

mujko pyar aya, pyar aya [he says looking at her and she is lost in his eyes]

Dev was dancing with ganga and holds radz hand from the back and looks into her eyes… she has tears in her eyes and looks back at him with passion:

tu tasuvur mein mere to hi baaton mein [she says to him]

tu afsane mein mere tu hi yaadon mein [he smiles and she continues]

kabhi na sakun aya

kabhi na karar aya

jabse hai tumpe mjko pyar aya [she looks at him and says then moves away]

bekarari bhari kab kese yai dil na samaj na paye [she thinks]

badla badla lage yai alam anjana nasha chaye [she smiles thinking of there moments]
Ganga starts singing and RaDev get back on earth… O, pardesiyaPardesiya yeh sach hai piyaSab kehte hai maine tujhko dil de diyaPardesiya, pardesiya yeh sach hai piyaSab kehte hai maine tujhko dil de diyaMain kehti hoon tune mera dil le liya - 2 Dev says to radhika and she just looks down embarrassed:O dilwaalon, dil mera sunne ko beqaraar haiKaho na pyaar hai, kaho na pyaar hai - 2Chaahat se hum tum hain, chaahat se sansaar haiKaho na pyaar hai, kaho na pyaar hai - 2 Radz starts singing with a smileAjeeb daastaan hai yeh, kahan shuru kahan khatamYeh manzilein hai kaunsi, na voh samajh sake na hum [she tells him and takes his hand]Mubaarake tumhe ke tum kisi ke noor ho gaye [she pulls him to ganga and joins there hands]Kisi ke itne paas ho ke sab se door ho gaye Ajeeb daastaan hai yeh

Rishi asks ganga for a dance and she agrees, they dance, he was looking ta her passionately while she was just being normal:

seene mein dil dil mein dhadkandhadkan mein kya hai He looks at her passionately and starts, she turns and gets lost in his eyes:teri pyaas hai [he smiles at her and she just stares at him]har pyaas meindard hai sanam [he tells her and she notices the truth in his words, she starts getting uncormfortable]yeh dard tera ehsaas hai)[she tries to move out but he holds her and pulls her back, close to him, his hand on her waist…] oh dilojaanateri tamanaahar saans ko [he tells her and she looks at him with a smile lost in his eyes]maine hai dekhamehsoos karkeiss pyaas ko [he tells her and she still keeps smiling still lost, remembering there meetings] --FEMALE--seene mein dildil mein dhadkandhadkan mein kya hai [she starts to think then after hesitation she continues]teri pyaas haihar pyaas meindard hai sanamyeh dard tera ehsaas hai(honthon pe dabi raastan koi [she starts smiling at him and telling him]aankhon mein hai koi sapnaajnabi sa ek dard hai magarlag raha hai apna) [she thinks not knowing what this feeling was]She realizes what she was doing and leaves him and goes back to her seat thinking whats happening to her… finally the party was over and she sat in her room thinking about rishi… The pundit decides the wedding date should be three days later or six months later, they decide on three days later… everyone is excited and busy in preparations… ganag is not allowed to go out of the house… she's worried for some unknown reason, she feels something wrong is happening… but why?? She was marrying the guys she loved?? What could go wrong? But every time rishis thought came in her mind and she got worried.Radhika was sad and thinking about how dev looked at her and she realized he was in the room.."aap yaha???" she starts stammering and gets worried, he goes close to her and closes her mouth… he pins her to the wall…"main jaanta hoon tum bhi mujhse pyar karti ho… Radhika main kabhi kissi aur se pyar nahi kar paoonga please ek baar kehdo ke tum bhi mujhse pyar karti ho… please radhika… sab theekh hojayega… dekhna… Love will find a way please radhika" she gets upset and pushes him."yeh kya batameezi hai?? aap aisa soch bhi kaise sakhte hain?? Aapki shaadi hone waali hai parso… please aap yahan se jaayiye" she says angrily and he looks angry.."radhika bas ek baar kehdo… jab tak tum nahi kahogi main nahi jaaoonga" he says and she looks at him angrily "hum aapse pyar nahi karte… jayiye yahan se""meri aankhon mein dekh kar kaho…" he says holding her close to him, she gulps feeling uneasy then looks at him angrily "Nahi karte… hum aapse pyar nahi karte… samjhe aap… ab jaayiye" she says angrily and he hits the mirror in anger, he starts bleeding and she gets worried… tears flowing from her eyes,s he runs to see the hurt but he moves her and goes away… she sits and cries… ganga sees him leaving from the window and gets suspicious…They inform radz that her parents are here, she gets happy and runs down… she sees them and her eyes are filled with tears she hugs her dad and cries… he gets worried and senses something is wrong although she says she's just happy to see them… ammaji also hugs her and says sorry… she's worried when they tell her about vishaka and decides to look for her…Next day it's the wedding… all preparations are on high but ganga is not happy… she doesn't know what to do… she knew now that she was in love with rishi… rishi on the other hand was trying to be happy "rishi kya baat hai?? you look upset" rohit asks him and he just smiles "kuch nahi yaar… meri kismet par has raha hoon.... kya kismet leke aaya… ab jaake pyar hua wo bhi uss ladki se jiski shaadi hone waali hai…" he says and rohit looks at him shocked "maine tujhse kaha than a… that u love this girl tell her par nahi… you were being stubborn… lekin ab bhi kuch ho sakhta hai… go tell her" rohit suggests and rishi looks surprised."kya keh raha hai? uski shaadi hai aaj…""rishi kehte hain agar pyar sacha ho to wo apna raasta dhoond leta hai… Love will find a way man… just go tell her" he suggests and rishi smiles "sach??" he says and goes to knock at ganga's room…"arre rishi tum?" she asks shocked and he enters the room hiding from the people surrounding the outside of the room…Ganga was dressed as a dulhan, sitting on her dresser stool… she was looking nice but a little too over done… [like kaajol in kkhh] he smiles at her, she turns and sees him "rishi… tum yahan?" she asks surprised and he goes closer smiling… he removes some of the heavy ornaments and smiles at her "now u look nice" he says and she agrees…"rishi wo…" she starts to say but he puts his finger on her lips… he bends down and tells her by actions that this jodi looks good… in the mirror she smiles… "I love you ganga" he says in her ear and her smile fades… she's shocked and he just smiles and leaves…**************

Okay guys that was part 10... I hope u liked it! If you did please hit the LIKE button and leave a comment😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Last part
Dev arrives at the wedding house' everyone is dancing happily but he's sad' radhika finds vishaka and puts some sense into her' she regrets her actions and asks for forgiveness' radhika feels bad but pretends to be happy and brings ganga down' she makes her sit in the mandap and dev looks at her' rishi smiles st ganga' who was looking at him every now and then'
"ab var aur vadhu pheron ke liye khare hon" he says and they both get up' dev looks at radz and ganga at rishi' they start going round but even before the first vow, rishi walks out of the hall' she stops and opens the scarf "main dev se shaadi nahi kar sakhti" ganga says and everyone gets shocked' dev seems happy' without saying anything she runs out to rishi' "RISHI" she calls and he stops shocked and turns to see her' he's shocked but happy' she runs to him "tumne jo kaha'" she starts and he looks surprised "mera jawab to suna nahi' bilkul duffer ho tum' aur ab kahan jaa rahe ho mujhe chor ke??" she asks angrily and he says "wo main'" she just hits him and the hugs "I love you too rishi' I love you" she says and he hugs her back excited' he carries her and takes her back in the house' and tell everyone' dev is extremely excited and radz is worried'He goes to her, in front of everyone "I LOVE YOU Radhika' tumhi mera pehla aur akhri pyar ho' Maine jabse tumhe dekha hai, I just knew ke tumhi ho meri sahi jeevan saathi' Please aaj sach mat chupaao' sabko batado sach kya hai' I love you radhika aur main tumhaara intezaar puri zindagi kar sakhta hoon" he says and she looks at him with tears "will you marry me?" he says bending down on his knees' she just smiles with tears and nodds her head' he smiles and gets up and carries her around' he's family is also happy to see him happy' Next thing four of them sit in the mandap and do the rasams and finally the pheras are over' dev and rishi smile at eachother then carry there respective wives'"sacha pyar bohot asardar hota hai'" rishi starts and radhika completes his sentence "moth ke mun se insaan ko nikaal laata hai" she says."to iss duniya ka kya hai" ganga says and rishi smiles "love always finds a way' main jaanta tha that our love will find way" dev says and radz hugs him still in his arms'

They say True Love always finds a way'
I hope you enjoyed reading my FF' I'm very sorry If I disappointed you with anything! If u liked the end please hit the LIKE button and/or comment!

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Edited by nadz_J - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#94
hi... i have read all ur parts.. everything was really really very nice... i jus want to say.. i didn't expect the story to finish so fast.. like all the way, it was very exciting and i was reading and suddenly i felt that it jus ended like tht?? u can really write well.. i was actually expecting more to happen and more twists... but still this ending part was also very very gd.. i really njoyed reading.. thanks alot for ur time to write and share something with us.. i appreciate ur effort.. =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#95
aww yay!!!!
great ending
but what's this its over 😔
aww im going to miss reading your writing
hey if you ever regain interest in the show and start another ff then let me know
ill definitely read it
luv
raji
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Posted: 16 years ago
#96
i really liked the ending wish tht they could use your story in the show to make it intresting
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Posted: 16 years ago
#97
Nice three parts.So sad that you wind up story..End is really good..

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