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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks everyone! 😃 I'll comment back soon1 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Meera that was brilliant. Utterly, painfully, brilliant.

I have no other words.

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Pooji-

me
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whoa
that was emotional one-shot
but i love it
meera you are a wonderful writer



Thank you so much Poonam! *hugs* Yeah it was....just to see if I could write tragic or not! 😉 Thanks again!😃

@meiskan: Thanks a lot! 😃 *hugs*

@ektay11: Thanks! 😊

@Muqu: NO! 😛 Then I wouldn't be able to drool over Harshu...UNLESS...that's why you want to? 😳 *jk* Thanks though hun! 😃

@Nirali: Firstly you didn't offend me...Shifs calls me that all the time! 😛 but I'm glad you liked the way I wrote it! 😃

Originally posted by: *Shifali*

Honestly Meera, this has to be the ONLY one-shot other then another one Shabo wrote on Premeer that made me cry. Like really cry.

It was just...😔
Sorry but the ending was just too perfect that I couldn't help it!



Awwww I didn't want anyone to cry! 😔 But I'm definitely glad you liked it! 😳

Originally posted by: pRinc3ssRZxJT

o0oohh Meera, i actually had tears in my eyes 😭

it was so0 beautifully emotional...seriously i dont have enough words to praise your heart-touching oneshot
and the song u used just perfectlly fitted in this ...i guess that was another reason that caused tears in my eyes, i just saw MJ(R*I*P) memorial and when usher sang the song while crying near his casket, i felt so sad ....i cried when MJ's daughter started to cry on stage 😭😭
but again u are so0 good at this, gettn ppl emotional huh loll
poor Meher and Preet
luv rumsha<3



I know what you mean Rumsha....I held my tears till then, but when Paris came on stage it all came out..I think more than anything it hurts to see what his children must be going through! 😔 Yeah...I loved the song since today and that made it even more beautiful! 😳 Aww thanks! 😊

Originally posted by: Dark Love

That was soooooooooo depressing 😭

But veryyyy well-written! 👏👏👏

And that song is nice :D



Thanks a lot Madz! 😳 Oh...I wrote TONS of sad ones! 😆 Sanya enjoys the happy ones more! 😉😛

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Oh my god. You killed him. Because of Ash. And to a lesser extent because of Meher. You killed Preet. *nods sadly* I did....It was actually REALLY hard to write it...I blame Ash more...but Meher for being too much like her sister and Prem jiju (idiots who never wait to hear the truth)

I love you! *hugs Meera* ILY2!!! 😃 *hugs*
Love,
Bhav (:
P.S. Don't get me wrong, I'm not glad Preet died, but I just can't believe that you killed Preet off and for some reason it's making me so proud of you and all I wanna do is hug you and I think I'm high. You know I'd never think that....and I'm glad you're proud! 😃 See...I can write...tragic too? 😳 (not that I'm proud of it! 😛)



Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Meera that was brilliant. Utterly, painfully, brilliant.

I have no other words.

Love,
Radz



Thank you....*hugs* That really means a lot Radz! 😊
Posted: 16 years ago
#14
You killed Preet? *thinks*

You rock. 🤗

Now that I think about it, that shot could have been so easily ruined but you stuck with that raw emotion through out the thing, and it was awesome - my fave part; the slap!

--shabz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@Shabo: *pouts and nods* I don't know why I killed him! 😔 But thanks for liking the slap! 😛

@mani: thanks! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aawwwwww!👏 👏 👏

tht was awosome but i didnt like the part of preet getting killed 😭 😭

ur an excellent writer......WOW!!!!!!! 👏 👏

this one shot actually got me to shock 😲 😲

n also it managed to make me cry 😭 😭 😭

gr8 one shot........do continue 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aww that was so sad!
Cant believe Preet died because of stupid Ash's action
That was brilliantly written!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: natashaa46

aawwwwww!👏 👏 👏 Thanks! 😳

tht was awosome but i didnt like the part of preet getting killed 😭 😭 Awww Sorry! *hugs*

ur an excellent writer......WOW!!!!!!! 👏 👏 That means a lot thanks! 😳

this one shot actually got me to shock 😲 😲

n also it managed to make me cry 😭 😭 😭 Wow! 😊 Thank you!

gr8 one shot........do continue 👏



@Aaliyah: thanks so much! 😃😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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No...........Preet can't die, you are sooo mean, any hoo, you write brilliantly and yet you killed Preet....why I ask why. On a lighter note, you should've done a public service announcement after Preet's death..........."look both ways before you cross the street, no need to die rushing" 😆😆😆


fantastic shot, sad, but great story..........btw the saddest part of MJ's memorial was Paris Jackson's speech...very moving
Edited by fungrl - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: fungrl

No...........Preet can't die, you are sooo mean, any hoo, you write brilliantly and yet you killed Preet....why I ask why. On a lighter note, you should've done a public service announcement after Preet's death..........."look both ways before you cross the street, no need to die rushing" 😆😆😆
I'm sorry Arpita! 😳 It seemed to flow with this one...and na....😛


fantastic shot, sad, but great story..........btw the saddest part of MJ's memorial was Paris Jackson's speech...very moving That's when I cried...😔

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