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Posted: 16 years ago
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Final part for the series that you guys asked for sequels to. πŸ˜† You guys are so lucky I love you (and I was planning sequels anyways). πŸ˜†

First part | Layi Vi Na Gayi:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1205305#22675839

Second part | The Mixed Tape:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1207252#22742006

Enjoy!

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Meher ran her finger through the tangles in Chahat's hair, wondering how the girl had managed to get so messy within barely an hour of the function. Heer Didi had planned such an elaborate even for Rajveer Bhaiya's wedding to Kasak, and Meher had to play the perfect host. But with Chahat running around like the whirlwind that she was, Meher had her hands full. She let her niece go, telling her to behave sternly. Chahat grinned mischievously up at her aunt, making no promises. Meher's heart ached. She got that grin from her youngest Chacha. It never failed in making Meher melt.

Iss Pal Main Hoon,
Ya Tum Bhi Ho.
Ya Dono Ho Ke,
Bhi Na Hain.


Preet wondered why he had had to come for the wedding, glowering at KulDi for dragging him along with her. PB had managed to avoid the happy occasion, but he had been dragged away from his work (and his thoughts) to the wedding of a girl who was his sister's friend. Not his. He paused though, when he read the sign next to the guestbook.

'Rajveer weds Kasak'

He shook his head. There were many Rajveers' in the world, this could be anyone. Rajveer was a common name.

Still, he wondered.


Kyon Ho Kya Ho,
Ho Bhi Ki Naa Ho.
Ya Kehna Sun-na,
Manaa Hai.

Kasak called her friend to her, gripping Meher's arm tightly. She was nervous about the arrival of one of her oldest friends', the marks on Meher's arms proved that.

An excited squeal from Kasak as a blur raced towards her caused Meher to jump in surprise. She watched her soon-to-be Bhabhi embrace the petite woman. The person who had entered after the blur caught her eye, and she stopped. She could not believe her eyes.


Tumhe Dekh Ke Yaad Aayi,
Vahi Bisri Kahaani.
Deewane Ka Kissa,
Ya Phir Ik Deewani.


Preet had rolled his eyes when KulDi had grabbed Kasak into a big hug. It was only the familiar figure beside the bride that kept him from heading straight for a corner. The long hair partially covered her face, but Preet knew, as sure as he knew that he was 6 foot 3, that it was his Meher next to Kasak. When she turned to face him, her hair swaying slightly, his every prayer for the last six years was answered. She paused, astonishment covering her face.

He could scarcely dare to breathe, to utter anything.


Dono Sang Sang Rehte Hardum,
Aisa Yeh, Maine Suna Hai.

Meher found herself taking a step forward, then another, and more after that until she was standing barely a hair's breadth away from Preet. She raised her eyes to meet his, wonder in them.

"Meher," he breathed, seemingly unaware that he had spoken aloud.

It broke the spell that had surrounded her. She flung her arms around his neck, burying her face in the crook of his neck. He could feel her smile, where her mouth was pressed against his skin. He laughed, fully and freely after so long.


Iss Pal Main Hoon,
Ya Tum Bhi Ho.
Ya Dono Ho Ke,
Bhi Na Hain.


The world around them ceased to exist. Never mind that people were staring at the display they had put on, or that KulDi had given a short gasp, and then spotted Heer, who had also seen the couple reunite. For Meher and Preet, all that matters was that someday had come.

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Do let me know what you think! And there shall be no more in this series. πŸ˜†

*edited*

It was just pointed out to me that I had put two different names for the bride. I changed it now. Thanks Rakhie!

Love,
Radz
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indiandoll89 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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mine! πŸ˜›

*edited*

So I lied when I said I wouldn't do anything except comment on MHT first...but oh well, I never keep proper promises! 😳

Anyways I love the way you showed Meet one ness, you always talk about Premeer....but this time I saw more between Meet and that made it even more romantic! πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ The whole feeling thing between both of them was perfect, how Meher was all blah, and Preet was even worse! πŸ˜†

I've got to say the line about Chahat's smile being like Preet's had me grinning! 😳

Love you,

Meera😳
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago
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*mouth drops open*

That was beautiful. I don't even know what to say. Just all six years of pain they both lived through came rushing in this shot. And then the way she just ran at him and hugged him so tightly. (is that by any chance inspired by Mayur? :P)

Awesomeness di!

--shabz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aw bless. That was perfect. Thank you so much.

Incidentally, wasn't the brides name Sneha in the first paragraph? Then it changed to Kasak?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwwwww that "someday" finally did come for them..yayy!!!!!!!!

i read the previous ones as well they were very nice radz
loll u should continue on with it see thats how much i luve it =D
hehe
luv rumsha<3
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ohh waitt sorri i just read that this part was the end of the series
butt it was so0o0ooo00oooo good loll
i lovedd it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesum one-shot
loved the title name
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey! nice work!! πŸ‘πŸ‘ the lyrics really went with the whole settting! loved it!!!!!!!!😊😊😊
Cheerx,
Maham
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Totally forgot that I hadn't even read this, let alone commented on it. So here I am! Be glad. 😎

I loved how reluctant Preet was about going to the wedding, and then he saw Meher...I hated how they hadn't seen each other for six years. WTH were you thinking, keeping them away from each other for SIX YEARS?! What, Prem-Heer are allowed to have a kid but Meher-Preet aren't? XP

Anyway, yeah, you know I loved it. πŸ˜›

P.S. Did you go for orientation?
Love,
Bhav (:
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you: LilyGurl, pRinc3ssRZxJT, firza, premeerrock, tasnime, Aaliyah01, sourpuss, -Pooji-, indiandoll89

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

mine! πŸ˜›

*edited*

So I lied when I said I wouldn't do anything except comment on MHT first...but oh well, I never keep proper promises! 😳 At least you've edited MHT na? πŸ˜†

Anyways I love the way you showed Meet one ness, you always talk about Premeer....but this time I saw more between Meet and that made it even more romantic! πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ The whole feeling thing between both of them was perfect, how Meher was all blah, and Preet was even worse! πŸ˜† Aww, thanks! The two do have some connection, comes from being friends for so long. πŸ˜‰

I've got to say the line about Chahat's smile being like Preet's had me grinning! 😳 Are you sure you weren't thinking about Prem? πŸ˜†

Love you, love you too!

Meera😳



Originally posted by: shabo24


*mouth drops open* *closes mouth* Don't want the flies to come in. πŸ˜†

That was beautiful. I don't even know what to say. Just all six years of pain they both lived through came rushing in this shot. And then the way she just ran at him and hugged him so tightly. (is that by any chance inspired by Mayur? :P) Aww, thank you! (Erm, maybe? πŸ˜†)

Awesomeness di! Thanks Shabz!

--shabz



Originally posted by: Rakhie_08


Aw bless. That was perfect. Thank you so much. Aww, thank you!

Incidentally, wasn't the brides name Sneha in the first paragraph? Then it changed to Kasak? Whoops. πŸ˜† I changed that when I read your comment. Thanks. πŸ˜†



Originally posted by: pRinc3ssRZxJT


awwwwww that "someday" finally did come for them..yayy!!!!!!!! Yup! It came!

i read the previous ones as well they were very nice radz Thank you Rumsha! πŸ˜ƒ
loll u should continue on with it see thats how much i luve it =D Haha, no more ideas for this. πŸ˜†
hehe
luv rumsha<3



Originally posted by: -Pooji-


awesum one-shot
loved the title name Thank you!



Originally posted by: rankanrock


hey! nice work!! πŸ‘πŸ‘ the lyrics really went with the whole settting! loved it!!!!!!!!😊😊😊 Thanks Maham!

Cheerx,
Maham



Originally posted by: sourpuss


Totally forgot that I hadn't even read this, let alone commented on it. So here I am! Be glad. 😎 I am. πŸ˜ƒ

I loved how reluctant Preet was about going to the wedding, and then he saw Meher...I hated how they hadn't seen each other for six years. WTH were you thinking, keeping them away from each other for SIX YEARS?! What, Prem-Heer are allowed to have a kid but Meher-Preet aren't? XP No comment B. Aren't you glad we started the leap with Meet scenes? πŸ˜‰

Anyway, yeah, you know I loved it. πŸ˜› Aw, thank you!

P.S. Did you go for orientation? You know the answer to that already. πŸ˜†
Love, love you too!
Bhav (:



Love,
Radz


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Posted: 16 years ago
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I one my favorite song and that for Meet, my favorite couple.............thanks for a beautifully written shot

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