Pehli Nazar Mein (AR/RM/AN) Imp note pg20!

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Hello everyone, I'm Reema some of you already know me. Well I'm starting a new FF called Pehli Nazar Mein. I know I already have one incomplete FF but I can manage writing both at the same time. I'm not a good writer but i gave it a try.
If you would like to read my first FF here is the like - Realization
This story is about 3 sisters (Muskaan, Riddhima, and Nikita) and 3 brothers (Rahul, Armaan, and Abhimanyu) and their cousins (Sapna, Atul, and Anjali). The three brothers and sisters meet for the first time in Atul and Anjali's wedding. Atul is Rahul, Armaan, and Abhimanyu's cousin, who lives in Mumbai. And Anjali and Sapna are Muskaan, Riddhima, and Nikita's cousins.
Muskaan, Riddhima, and Nikita live in Mumbai. The girls know Atul, as he is in Sanjivani with them and often come to their house. Muskaan and Riddhima have just started their Internship in Sanjivani and Nikita is in her last year in college. Atul, Anjali, and Sapna had started their internship 6 months ago.
Rahul, Armaan, and Abhimanyu live in Delhi. Rahul and Armaan had just started doing their internship in Delhi's hospital, but then Atul tells them about Sanjivani and his wedding so they decide to move there during Atul's wedding. And Abhimanyu is in his last year of college and he will also move, because he doesn't want to live without them. Living without the sons is not possible for parents, so they also decided to move to Mumbai. So the whole family is moving now.
Intro
Gupta's House
Naani: Riddhima? Muskaan? Arey kisi ne Anjali ko tayar kiya ki nahi?
Nikita: relax Naani Anjali Di ko toh sab se phele ready kar diya, after all unki aaj engagement jo hai'
Naani: aur tujhe ready nahin hona kya? Chal ja ready ho kar aa'ghar mein bohot kaam hai sirf ek ghanta reh gaya hai larke waalon ko aane mein.
Nikita: ji naani..
Naani: aur sun' Riddhima aur Muskaan tayar howe ki nahi?
Riddhima&Muskaan: hum toh tayar hain!!
Naani: arey waah tum dono toh bohot khubsurat lag rahi ho!
Riddhima: thanks naani, aur aap bilku tension mat lo, mein, Nikki, aur Muskaan aesi tayari karein ge ki larke waale dekhte reh jaayein ge! Right girls?
Nikita&Muskaan: absolutely!
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Malik's House
Atul: Rahul yaar mein acha toh lag raha hoon na? (Said while fixing his sherwani)
Rahul: don't worry, you look prefect bhabhi ke toh hosh ud jayeinge..
Atul: thanks yaar!
Armaan: tum sab ready?
Abhimanyu: hum toh kab se ready hain, bas aap hi ka wait kar rahe the bro, larkiyan bhi itna time nahin letin ready hone mein! (He chuckled)
Armaan: abbey chup!
Ananya: Armaan idhar aao?
Armaan: ji mom?
Ananya: tumne ring toh rakhi hai na? aur kuch bhul nahi jaane warna problem hogi!
Armaan: calm down mom, sab kuch ready hai'aap ko fikar karne ki koi zarrorat nahi hai' (Said while hugging her)
Rahul: ab chalein warna late ho jayeinge?
Ananya: haan chalo..
So guys this was the intro, if you would like me to continue this FF then please comment. You will get to know details about each character in Character Sketch. Do tell me your views.
Love Reema
~*Index*~
Character Sketch Page 2
Part 1 - Page 3
Part 2 - Page 7
Part 3 - Page 10
Part 4 - Page 14
Part 5 - Page 18
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Hey lovely start!! Do continue soon plz!!
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❤️ hai dear❤️ Congrats For The New FF❤️

❤️ The intro is really very Nice❤️ continue soon n plzz pm me when u update the next part❤️
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Ridhima to Armaan
"I want some who will never leave my side,
I want someone who will say 'I love you' and mean it,
I want someone who will watch a Friday night movie with me,
I want someone who will put me in a happy mood when I'm in a bad one,
I want someone who will hold me when I'm scared,
I want someone who will give me there jacket when I'm cold,
I want...............you (Armaan)"

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Character Sketch
Armaan Malik- He is 21 years old. And he is heart throb of millions of girls. He is very caring and understanding. He is the most handsome son of Malik's. He respects girls and can never hurt their feelings. He loves his parents and his brothers a lot. And he love playing basketball. And he strongly believes in Love.
Rahul Malik- He is 22 years old. And he is really hot, many girls' falls in love with him when they see him. He is very caring and can't hear a word against his family. He is the oldest son of Malik's and he also believes in Love.
Abhimanyu Malik- He is 19 years old. He is the youngest Malik's son. Everyone loves him very much. And he is the coolest dude in the college. He is very respectful. He is different from his brothers and he doesn't believe in love.
Atul Joshi- He is 23 years old. He is very loveable. He is a good natured boy. Nobody can be upset, when Atul is around. He is Armaan, Rahul and Abhimanyu's cousin but he treats the as his own brothers. Atul use to live in Delhi with them but he came to Mumbai for his internship and there he met Anjali and fell in love with her. His parents died when he was 10 years old in a car accident.
Muskaan Gupta- She is 21 years old and she is Riddhima's twin. She is 13 minutes older then Riddhima. Muskaan is very talkative and she is a bubbly girl. Everyone loves her. Nobody can tell that Riddhima is her twin coz she is totally different from her. She loves her sisters very much. She is really sweet and caring. She believes in love and knows that one day her prince charming will take her away with him.
Riddhima Gupta- She is 21 years old. She is warm-hearted girl. Everybody loves her. She respects everyone and she loves her sisters very much. She is simple and shy, but mischievous at the same time. And she is really pretty. She loves playing pranks. And she also loves playing basketball. She is loved by everyone. She is very kind and friendly. And strongly believes in Love.
Nikita Gupta- She is 19 years old. Gupta's youngest daughter. She is also simple like Riddhima and she is very beautiful. She loves her sisters and shares every single thing with them. She knows how to make her sisters happy when they are not in a good mood. She is also talkative like Muskaan. Being the youngest daughter, she is treated like a baby, which she hates. She is like her sisters, she also believes in Love.
Anjali Malhotra- She is 23 years old. She is very beautiful. Loves Atul very much and is happy that she is getting married to him. She is kind and understanding. She gets whatever she wants. She loves her sister Sapna and her cousins. They all live in the same house. Anjali gets angry really quick, but she can control her anger easily.
Sapna Malhotra- she is 22 years old. She is loved by everyone, especially Naani. She is a very quiet and good natured girl. She respects everyone. She is very friendly and caring. And she is also very appealing. She loves her family very much. She also believes in Love.

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