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Posted: 16 years ago
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i think it was really inappropriate. you are more focused on their 'nights' there wasnt really a STORY behind it. i think it would be better with a story outline, rather just each day, them being bored and decide to fornicate.
not trying to cause any problem, you have my opinon, its your choice, what you want to do with it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
Wow Kiran!! It's really amazing!! It's soo besharam!! That was just soo sexy!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Some parts were a little over rated..so please...work on that...cause alot of people reads these stuff...even SD might...i liked it..and all but it was too besharam for the public..thats my opinion
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh my Kiran... Isssh...you should have seen how I was blushing while reading it...☺️
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg!!! mushtari di!! wow, haven't seen you since the longest time!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: bmtdluver

omg!!! mushtari di!! wow, haven't seen you since the longest time!!

HEYYY how are you lol, i m still alive. loll. i finally got my account to work. im still thinking whether or not i should continue my FF. what do you think?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mushtari

HEYYY how are you lol, i m still alive. loll. i finally got my account to work. im still thinking whether or not i should continue my FF. what do you think?



OMG u have those awesome FFs..please continue with them..i am addicted to them😆 pleaseeeeeee
😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Manusha_LuvSD



OMG u have those awesome FFs..please continue with them..i am addicted to them😆 pleaseeeeeee
😆

i want to continue. and ill try. the last time i updated, was i think in December 😕 YIKES.
i was reading the whole FF, and i noticed i stopped at a very suspensful scene, should not have done that lol. ill try to fit in an update. if only i could FIND my topic. loll😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yesss...u killed us with that suspense..lol..used the topic search u will find it there..lollll...yayyyyyy...update pleaseeeee
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mushtari

HEYYY how are you lol, i m still alive. loll. i finally got my account to work. im still thinking whether or not i should continue my FF. what do you think?

im fine, u?? well, taht is nice to hear..
am sooo glad u are continuing it!!

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