LETHAL INSTINCTS - new rn fic - Page 43

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Truely gr8 ending. Simply luved it. Raj was so emotional in the hospital but agian so romantic. And Naina is just gr8. She took the drugs despite her pregnency. I luv this lovely couple. I

really liked Naina's interrogation to Navin as to y he shot Raj. Even I had the same ques. And it was gud dat all confusions regarding Navin wer sorted out. That scene was really nice.

I cant blv Raj n Naina named their child Aalekh. But then they r too sweet to be angry wid him all their life.

Raj ka "mamu ko pareshan kar" wala idea was gud. And the funniest thing was Aalekh's singing. How sweet!!!!

I really loved this ending. I guess the other ending is tragic n so u r ryt dat it will be chosen over dat. But anyways, I'd luv to read that as well.

Pls continue soon.

I write this comment as a tear is trickling down my cheek.......i have no words.....speechless........ i loved the earlier ending but this one can just not be compared......if u ask me i will say the earlier ending was better but maybe because we all want happy endings......this very fact biases my opinion.....maybe i am human to want the earlier ending but i guess this end will be etched in my mind for a long time to come...........

Originally posted by: sweet.dreamz

I write this comment as a tear is trickling down my cheek.......i have no words.....speechless........ i loved the earlier ending but this one can just not be compared......if u ask me i will say the earlier ending was better but maybe because we all want happy endings......this very fact biases my opinion.....maybe i am human to want the earlier ending but i guess this end will be etched in my mind for a long time to come...........

And as this fic ends here, i would like u tell that it feels like losing a friend.....waiting for its update was equivalent to waiting for ur best friend's call who is about to tell u a secret.............hehe.....

Do come up soon with a new Fanfic......i am now kinda used to expecting ur PMs of update..........

And finally MARVELLOUS work......u r a brilliant writer......[i know i must be just one of the many who would think the same.....but still why not express it!!!!!!!]

luv,

Rajita........

Originally posted by: srojaleen

veri nicely writtin by Deepika...!!! 👏

par mujhe pahlewala end jyada achha laga tha...!😊!! kyoun ki is end se dukh hua...!!! vaise bhi real LRL baht dukh de chuka hai dear...!!! 😭

yeh last ending ud bhaaaat achha tha...magar sad ending se dard hota hai na...!!! is se to yahi laga na...ki itne sacrifices k baad bhi raj aur naina ko kuch nahin mila...!!! 😭

isiliye mai is k first option se baht khush hun...!!! mujhe first end jo tum ne post kiya tha...vo baht acha laga...thanx😊

Deepika se kahna...jaldi aur ek fic start kare...aur haan...us ka bhi ending...happy happy hona chahiye...!!!😊