Mayur FF|EverLasting Love|Intro PAGE1

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys i have written ff on Ar but this is the first that i would be writing an ff on Mayur.....so please bear with me and forgive me if i go wrong anywhere. I will update the intro by tomorrow evening.
Do leave your comments..they mean a lot to me😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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EEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE MAYUR!!!!!!!! <3 i cant wait!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thats gr888....i am eagerly waiting
u starting two mayur FF.,...wow...
plz include me in ur pm list :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyyy...when are u updatiing it...?????
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Posted: 16 years ago
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INTRODUCTION

'You have no idea what it costs to mess with the highness.' Said an angry looking young man.

'Oh Really! I'm so scared of the highness'. Said Mr. Rakesh Bhushan- the most successful businessman in Delhi.

'You are trying to insult me.'

'No dear, I'm not trying to insult you I'm actually insulting you.'

'And for this you'll have to pay a huge price Mr. Bhushan. The highness won't spare you. I promise you'll regret it and will regret it pretty soon.'

'I'm waiting for that Mr. Rannvijay…do whatever you want to. I'll be least bothered by all your childish and immature acts.'

'But I assure you, you'll soon regret…for insulting the highness.

With this he leaves the office angrily.

Rannvijay bangs his fist on the table very hard.

'Relax RV, there's no need to get hyper beta.'

'How can I relax uncle, that bloody oldie insulted me...Me-the highness.' Said Rannvijay to Mr. Vijay Sharma-the most successful businessman of the town and an arch rival of Rakesh Bhushan. He once was a business partner of Ramesh Bhushan and his best friend but today they both are enemies.

'I did warn you beta but you were adamant in entering into partnership with that ******.'

'I won't spare him uncle. He is going to pay a huge price for not giving that contract to my company. You just wait uncle.'

'but what will you do?'

'I will think of something pretty soon.'

'I'm always with you RV beta.' Said Vijay.

Suddenly an idea struck his mind. He thought to himself a perfect plan for taking revenge from that Rakesh Bhushan and said to himself, 'Oh uncle I'm so sorry but you too will soon regret your decision of supporting me. Because RV is faithful to no-one. Not even to his maternal uncle. I loyal only to money and nothing else. And in taking revenge from that oldie I would be using you or rather I will be betraying because you both are going to suffer from my plan but what to do I am not seeing any other option.'

'What happened RV? Where are you lost?'

'HUH...Nothing. I think I'll have to take a leave now. Catch ya soon.'

With this RV leaves with a sly smile on his face.

Excel college:

Staircase:

'Mujhe aise ghoor ghoor ke kya dekh rahe ho. Padh hi to rahi thi class aur kya kar rahi thi main.' Said a girl who is in her early twenties.

'Management ki class mein Shah Rukh Khan ke bare mein!' said a boy sarcastically.

'Haan toh!' said the girl as if she has done a great job.

'Forget it. It's of no use. Tumse baat karma matlab bhens kea age bin bajana.'

'haan to kyun kar rahe ho mujhse baat ….Mr. SADU MAYANK SHARMA.'

'Aree tumse baat karma hi kaun chahta hai. Majboori na hoti na to main to tumhari shakal bhi na dekhta. Project mein hamein saath rakha gaya ahai isiliye tumhare saath baithna, bolna padta hai. Ms. NUPUR BHUSHAN.'

And their bickering goes on and on and on until some teacher interrupts them.

So guys this was the intro to my ff. You will soon come to know the storyline. Hope you guys liked it. Do leave your comments and do mention it if you want a PM from me.😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwww......thanx a lot dolly intro seem to be really interesting yaar i hope RV is not gonna harm nupr..... love mayur fights...they are awesome with it... thanx a lot for the pm update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its awesome yaar......u should write more............update soon.....pm me.

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piyu
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ

its awesome yaar......u should write more............update soon.....pm me.

love
piyu
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Thanks dear..😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey awesome part. It was superb. Do continue soon. Thnks for the PM!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great intro
cont soon
can you pm when you update
Javeria

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