|| Gup Chup || A Surprise One Shot!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I'll have to be completely honest and say this was the hardest one to think of and that's why it's going to be the last one for a little while! 😃😳 I just hope the person it's for enjoys it! 😳


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Her eyes were closing as she struggled to read one more page. Just one more and then I can sleep, She glanced down at her Fossil watch and saw that it was already 2am. "Crap," she muttered under her breath. She knew it was a bad idea to stay up all night procrastinating before her Chemistry final tomorrow—but she couldn't help it; she'd open the books and her eyes would drop shut. Right then her phone started ringing and so she jumped to get it before anyone else woke up. "Hello?" she whispered still in a groggy tone.


"Oh sorry, were you asleep?" Preet asked on the other end.


Hearing his voice immediately sent her heart beating fast and her eyes widened, all evidence of sleep gone. "No—I was just studying." She whispered again.


"Why are you whispering?"


Gup Chup Gup Chup Gup Chup


"Preet, time dekha hain?" She rolled her eyes. "It's after 2,"


"Oh okay," Preet sighed


"Kya hua?"


"I want to see you." He said softly.


gup chup si hai baatein mulakate tere wade


"Is waqt?"


meri jaana mujhe chhodake na ja, na ja


"Please?" he pleaded. "Thodi der ke liye?"


"Theek hain," She could never say no to him. He always had the ability to pull off such a tone in his voice that made him sound childlike and completely innocent when in fact he was the exact opposite. "Where should I meet you?"


"I'm outside your house."


"I'll be out in a few minutes," She shook her head, pulling a sweater over her head.


Rushing out of the door she saw him standing there, his bright smile greeting her in the darkness of the night.


"Preet." She sighed as she rushed into his arms.


His hands wound around her back holding her close as her body tingled from feeling his head through her sweater. "I missed you," He mumbled into her hair.


soyi soyi si hai raate jaagi jaagi meri saansein
khoyi khoyi si hai aankhein chhodake na ja, na ja


He let go of her and took her hand, not wanting to let her out of his grasp as he tugged her alongside him.


"Where are we going?" She asked.


"Just come with me," He smiled down at her, leaving her mesmerized.


Preet was just crazy. Always pulling stunts like this. He knew she had her exam yet here he was taking her out to make sure she didn't cram.


"Preet..."


"Kya?" He asked, as he leaned down and put his arm around her shoulder.


"Kahan jaa rahe hain hum?" She whispered in the dark night.


"Yahaan," He answered a few minutes later as he covered her eyes.


abhi toh dil mein samaayi ho, abhi toh khwaabon pe chhaayi ho
abhi toh baahon mein aayi ho na ja, na ja, na ja


"Preet," she pulled at his hands. "Mujhe dekhne do na?"


Slowly she felt his hands leaving her eyes and she let them flutter open. She was standing at the park and there were no streetlights on anywhere. She turned to Preet and her eyebrows creased together.


"Just wait," Preet smiled as he leaned closer to her.


gup chup si hai baatein mulaakaate tere waade
meri jaana mujhe chod ke na ja, na ja


Slowly she looked up and saw the lights turn on and around the park she saw two benches set up both with books on them.


"What's going on?" she asked.


Without answering he pulled her along to the benches and she saw some chemistry textbooks on them.


"I've been taken out of my comfy room and away from my chem books only to be here with you—surrounded by them?" She glared at him.


gup chup si hai baatein mulaakaate tere waade


"Don't assume anything yet," Preet warned her. He sat her down on the bench and placed a book in her lap, and then turned her around so her back was into him. "Isn't this MUCH better than your bed at home?"


meri jaana mujhe chod ke na ja, na ja


She shook her head. "I can't believe you,"


"I know; sab yehi kehte hain,"


"Preet," She shifted around to face him. "Thank you."


"For what?"


"Understanding how much this stuff all means to me—the exams and everything and still finding a way for us to spend time together,"


Preet smiled down at her and kissed her forehead. "I love you Avi; I have to do that."


"I love you too Preet," She sighed, leaning back into his chest; completely content with the way she felt. Yes she had an exam but she knew she'd pass it. She had Preet's love with her and that made her feel confident.


abhi toh dil mein samaayi ho, abhi toh khwaabon pe chhaayi ho
abhi toh baahon mein aayi ho na ja, na ja, na ja


So?? 😳 *hides away* I really really hope everyone enjoys it! 😛😳 But I specially hope that Avi likes it, and special thanks for the idea to Shifali and for Maddy to help me pick who to use! 😃


Love you all loads,


Meera😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww..............I hate chem esp. Organic Chem, well bio chem sucks too.................but I don't mind being a Pre-med if Preet was my toutor..........sigh...................

awesome
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Posted: 16 years ago
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reservedd!
Really cute! I know for sure that Avi is going to love it.
I really like how Preet wants to meet Avi at like 2am. I love how you describe everything. Hmm..i wonder where he's taking her. I thought they would have some candle light dinner, but wait its 2am. 😆 Me and my imagination. But he actually took all the Chemistry books and brought them for Avi. AWW!! Now Avi you have to pass this Chem exam cause Preet did all this for you! 😉 😆 I loved it Meera!
Love you
Anzaa 😛
Edited by -Anza- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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you wrote it!! Mine!!! =D She is going to freak!!! ROFL!!!
We were on MSN when she was reading and commenting and then she said screw it and started to read.................. ROFL!! You should have seen her reaction Meeru!!! 😆 It was so funny!!! 😆
Anyways, i thought it was so cute, like complete fluff all the way!!! 😳 It was so adorable, how she is studying and then Preet calls her and makes her study with him!!! I was like awwwwww!!!!!! 😳😆
I thought it was awesome, you kept it so simple and at the same time wrote it so beautifully!!! 👏 It was great, i loved it and you know she did too!!!
Gonna go comment on the rest now!! 😳
Love you! *hug*
Edited by blackdaughter - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awww Meera,
That was shoooooo cute!!!.......Preet was so adorable!.. nd look at Avi craming even at 2 in the morning lolz!!
It was awesome!! waiting for more!! :P:D
-Luv Pari
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I can already imagin Avi's reaction. *giggles* She's going to flip! In a good way.

How sweet is Preet? Seriously? I love how you wrote them, together, knowing one another so well. It warms the heart (and considering the fact that I'm freezing my butt off, that says a lot.)

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks guys! 😃 will comment back sometime soon! 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awwwww, Meera, that was so adorable! Preet was just so totally adorable! I loved the way he was so charming and sensitive and adorable at the same time:) You've written this so well, I loved reading it! Big hug:) I'm on a total high! I can dance all night! Marvellous!
Love:-Nonee

@Avi: And I am sure that Avi will ace her exams now....All the best Avi. Love:-Nonee
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That was sweet and entertaining
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Posted: 16 years ago
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*reserved. lmao, this one is Maddy's isn't it *rolls eyes, she's been gushing about it alrite lmao

K I shall comment as I read, that way I'll make Mickey wait longer for my reactions 😆 Don't know why she wants to know so badly but oh wells.
Fossil watch? Fossil watch🤣??? Its a geek we're talkin about isn't it? 🤣 Another clue its Maddy. Oha nice job with adding the bit about procrastination 😆 I just pulled up an all nighter last last night😆 Creepy enough? And yes I procrastinated...so sue me *sigh. I love them though, I mean it was all thanks to your lattoo vm and some other ones (new ones on Mayank!!!! *blush blush...he looks so HOT in that one...ohh I think it's called Rock Mayank + Napur, type it in youtube...awesomeness!!!!!) Anyhoo...
Preet!!!!!!! I thought Maddy loved Prem, Preet was MY love 🤣 But but..k so here is the funny line: "her body tingled from feeling his head through her sweater." 🤣🤣🤣 Get a room you two!!! 🤣 aww he missed her!!!
Erhhm... wait is that safe? going out at like 2am with a guy? is it seriously SAFE? No stop!!!
brb. After like 30 minutes. *reserved
k bac again. *sigh. I'm having a horrible day today. But I have coffee and I have your oneshots...life is still good😆
So. lmao. Not letting her cram..as if thats a good thing🤣 She NEEDS to cram...I should noe since I'm the queen of cramming 😆 If mi friends were here reading this they'd smack me across the head cause I'm right and yet so wrong. woah..so self centered today. Anyhoo...screw commenting as I read..too distracting 😛 Gonna read first and then comment again..Maddy is making me suspicious lol.
OMG OMG OMG!!!! *giggles!!! That was mi reaction that I sent to her 🤣🤣🤣
I love you1!!!! *hugs
SIgh leaning on Preet..PREET and studying! *swoons. I can't believe you!!! lol I should have guessed earlier but was like 'why would Meeru write a oneshot on ME?😳 ' but u did and thank you soooo much for it!!! I love it love it love it!!!! 😳😳
PS: I think this is long enough but I love how everybody knows about my procrastination skills😳 😆 And I forgot what else I was gonna say lol. Oh yeah, thank you for NOT writing about Prem 😆 I like him and all but I LOVE Preet! Thanks for noticing 😆😳😳 Have I ever told you that I seriously LOVE you! 😆 Not in that way but still, me loves you!!! thanks *hugs!
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