~*mOrEnA xPpReS*~MN FF*part 7 updatd

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Hey guys here is my first VM on mayur on page 8😳its nt gud ..bt stil do watch nd comment😛


part one-page 1
part2-page 3
part three-page 4
part 4-page7
VM -page 8[mayur]
part five-page 10
VM-page 10[sayank]
part 6-page 13
part 7 -page 16

Guys am goin to star my narration ....😛first tym so a bit tensed
readers pls bear wit my hindi .....😆
u can comment ..i mean u can surely criticize ..😃
u can tell me if u want me to pm u wenvr i update ...
it wont b a gr8 one stil i wil try to improve
nd thnxs to all who r readin my posts...😛


credits:[they correct all my mistakes i made in hindi😳]
majnu[nisha dii]
priyu jaan[supriya]
daphz dii
sush dii
bestie 😳



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character sketch:


hes d dashin dude of exel college,his best frnd is sammy ..sammy cals mayu "bestie"nd vice versa too..in gals the nly one he loves being wit is nupur ...



shes cute,simple nd gorgeous.. gunjan is her nly sister nd best frnd othr thn mayu[ya our mayu]


samrat[sammy] aur gunjan[gunji][ps :can sumone create a banner in name "samrat aur gunjan" ...if yes pls PM me..]:both r in luv wit each othr ..bt unfortunately feels tht their partner luv sumone else...😕sammy hv told mayu abt his feelings[aftr all hes his bestie]more over he has askd mayu to hep him accept gunjan as his best frnd ..nly nothin more ...coz he feels gunjan wil nvr b able to luv a boy lik himwil evr our mayu allow his frds luv to fail evn b4r it start..?no he wont ..😳

[aftr so much of thinkin mayu thot of askin nupur abt gunjan's feelings ....]
[as usual nupur entered the college as late as evryday]

nupz[to herself]:pata nahi ye gunjan kaise har din itni jaldi uththi hay aur colege mein bhi jaldi pahunch jaathi hay ..pata nahi ye ladki kab sothi hay by god mujhe toh lagtha hay ki colege dopahar mein suru honi chahiye .lekin mein mein subah mayank ko miss.

mayu:nupur....[callls her frm back]

nupz:kon jay ...?[recoverin frm her self speech ..she turns back]..oh mayank tum..?

mayu:haan men ..!tum apne aap se kya baat kar rahi thi?aur mere bare meinkya bol rahi thi?

nupz:woh mein ..woh mein

mayu:kya mein mein ,,,bol rahi ho?bakri ban gayi ho kya?aage bhi bolna...!

nupz:woh mein ...yeh bol rehi thi ki tumhe miss tamanna bula rahi hay

mayu:toh mein chaltha hu baad mein milthey hein ...

nupz::nahi nahi ..mera matlab hain ...tum abhi mat jao...tum tabi jana ..jab woh bulayengi...teek hay?

mayu:kya?tumhari tabyath toh teek hay ?[touches her forehead..nupur bcomes all dreamy]yeh subah subah kya bakwaas kar rahi ho?

nupz:woh..

mayu:chal chod ..mein tumse kuch baat karne aaya tha..gunjan ke baare mein ...

nupz:gunjna ke baare mein[shocked 😲..nd wakin frm her dreamy world😆]

mayu:woh ..kuch khaaz nahi ..par aajkal gunjan kuch khoyi khoyi huvi si lagthi hayna?

nupz:woh...woh mein tumhe pehle se bata dena chahthi thi par bata nahi payi...
sunjan ko kisi se pyar hua hay...

mayu :kisse?"bestie" se?

nupz:haan samrat se..par tumhe kaise pata chala ?

mayu:saara din toh usi ke saath waqt bitathi hay na/.
ab hamme..hi kuch karna padega..un donnom ko milane keliye..!

[nupz kept a supportin hand on mayu's shoulders...mayu turned..both wer starin into each othrs eyes]

mayu: hamme kon milayega?

nupz:kya?
mayu:mera matlab hay gunjan yahi bolthi hogi na?

nupz[in mind]:kash ki tum ye mujse kaha hota..

mayu[in mind]:kehne keliye mera dil bettaab hay par jab bhi kehne ki koshish karu ..dil mein ajeeb sa dar aata hay..

nupz:na jaane tum kisse darthi ho ...
na jaane mujhe kyu lagtha hay ki mein tumhare liye bani hu ..aue tum mere liye...😳

[both came to senses ..wen they heard sum sound]

nupz[in mind]yeh mein kya soch rahi thi..?
mayank mera dosth hay...
mein hamari dosthi tootne nahi de sakthi..,,

mayu[inmind]kya hogaya hay muje..?

nupz:toh tum kya bol rahi thi..kher chodo...ham un donom ko ek kar denge 😳

mayu:theek hai nupur..abhi mein library jaa rahi hu...uske bad mein tumhe canteen pe miloongi...

nupz:theek hai..

in next written episode:mayu is holding nupur .....both of his arms on her hip😳

thnq priyu jaan 4 d help ...thnq soo much ...agli baar jab mein post karoongi tab bhi meri madath karna :)

hey nice one. hmmm all 4 in luv with each other!!! interesting so update next part soon.

Originally posted by: dazzlingstar

hey nice one. hmmm all 4 in luv with each other!!! interesting so update next part soon.

all the best

hey thnq so much yaar ...u gv me a lot of confidence in just one sentence .. :)😳
i wil update sooon .. :)

awww...thanx a lot for starting one MN ff ..i was dying to read