FF-My Revengeful Love Promo p.153!October 9th - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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luved the concept but hun where is the second part??????????//
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#12
awesome ff...nice story..eager to know more abt premeer relation😳
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hey
that was awesum super
loved it
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Hi everyone! Thanx for all your comments. And since you all are really liking this FF. I decided to do a triple bonaza or more since I have had 439 views. And all of you don't forget to read Revengeful Love. Anyways please enjoy this bonanaza.

Chapter 3 Morning 6:00: Heer's house Beep! Beep! Beep!I grabbed the alarm and threw it on the ground because is I so didn't want to get disturbed right now. "Heer wake up!" I turned around and saw mom. Great now what?! "What mom?" I moaned out. "Heer beta wake up today we have to go shopping for you?" "Why?" I responded again in a sleepless tone. "Well because today we have to go shopping for your engagement, sangeet, mehendi, and of course your marriage." "But, why?" "Look Heer I don't want to get mad at you because all of your questions so I suggest you to get up NOW!" I knew how mom's anger was, so I jumped out of my bed and into the bathroom. I took a long hot shower to get rid of the tension I have on my mind about Prem. I walked out of my room grasping on to the towel and going straight to the closet. I decided to wear a green salwaar kameez. And decided to let my hair down.
"Hi di!" I turned around and saw Meher. "Oh hi." "Anyways di I came tyo tell you that we're about to leave for the mall and also that prem jiju is also coming for shopping." "What?!" My eyes popped open and looked at her. "Yes di well actually he's coming with Gayathri aunty and why are you so surprised I mean he's getting married to you and I thought you would've been happy. Anyways come on di let's go." "Ok fine." We walked downstairs and got into the car with mom and Ashlesha.
During the ride to the mall I was lost in my thoughts worring what will happen since I have to face Prem again. What will happen?
Mall:10:00 A.M.
We walked into the New Country Mall and then in to a boutique. "Look Heer be respectful to your mother-in-law and behave well." "Mom I'm not a five year old I'm twenty." Ashlesha and Meher let out a giggle while mom just frowned and walked away. "Heer we'll see you later first I have to see mom and make sure her temper is under controll you know how her temper is." They walked away while I decided to roam around and look for suits, lehangas, and saris. I felt a tap on my shoulder and turned around to only see ma." "Oh ma aap? Namaste." I said taking her blessings."God bless you beta anyways if you're waiting for Prem he's coming in his own car, so you have to wait." Ma said patting my left cheek. "Anyways I'm leaving right now to find your mom, so bye." Ma walked away while I took a sigh of releif and walked away to find a lehenga for me.
I found a beautiful turqouise embroderied silver. I walked to the dressig room to try the lehenga on. I managed to tie the lace and did look good in it. I was about to take my lehenga off I felt a push on my back. Suddenly too scared I turned around and saw Prem. He was facing me. It was obvious that he was drunk becuse his eyes were bloodshot red. But, why would somebody dring during the day?I backed off a little too afraid that he would do something. But, right when I move Prem pushed me right against the wall of the dressing rom. He was against me while I struggled in his arms. His grip tightened around my wrists making me feel as if glass had pinned in it. "Prem let go!" "Not today! I won't let go of you today" "Prem it's hurting!" "So that's not my problem because today I want to ask you a question." Prem said blowing his achohol smell on me. "What question?!" "I want to ask you why you said yes." Prem said coming near my ear and sending a chill down my spine. "Why are you asking?" "I WANT to!" I loked away regreting to answer. Prem slowly touched my jawline with his hand slowly and tenderly.The touch was sending shivers down my spine, but he then aggresively turned my face around. "WHY!!!!!" "I'm not going to answer" I said clenching my teeth.
"Hmmm......" We turned around and saw Meher standing in front of us. Prem let go of me and quickly left the dressing room. 'Wow di I didn't know that jiju was so desperate." "Stop it Meher nad GO!" Meher walked away while a blush was formed on my face which I didn't know why it was there. No I can't fall in love with that monster. I CAN'T.....................................................................................
Chapter 4
The whole day we spent shopping saris and ALL of them heavy embroderied especialyl the lehengas. Mom past the lines this time by buying me these much saris.
I looked at the stars trying to remember my dad the one who I loved and the one who loved me the most. Tomrrow's my engagement and the start of destruction of my life.........................................................................................................
The next day Lata, my beautician came to dress me up. First, she gave me a facial then after a half an hour she started to touch up my face up. First, she added light brown eyeshadow then light pink lip gloss. Then Lata curled my hair from the bottom and bend it into a bun. The curls now fell a little bit down from my bun making me look elegant. Then she placed a beautiful diamond cmb on my bun. Later I got dressed up in a dark blue lehenga. Lata left after getting paid. I decided to take a nap before going downstairs.
2 hours later.........................................................................................................................
I dried my hair and was standing in front of the mirror wearing a towel. My hair was really wet making the towel wrapped around me more wet. Then I felt soft fingers right around my waist. My heartbeat stopped and I closed my eyes. A lock of hair was on my face and then I felt a warm hand on my face. The hand then left my face and it followed my arm and down my hand. The hand captured mine's and then my hand moved up to face and it was kissed. Blushing really hard I turned and hugged the person. His grip around my waist tightened while my hands around his neck tightened. I slowly opened my eyes and saw him. His chocolate brown eyes looking at me and then I recognized him it was........it.......was Prem........................................................................................................
I hope you all liked. Bye for now!😳
Your Friend,
Buttercup
Edited by buttercup123 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15
hi
just read the whole fanfi
it was awesome, beautiful\
update soon
thankyou
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
wow yaar tooo ud..absolutely loved it...can't wait 4 the next part😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
nice update.Loved it.Please continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
amazing update.cant wait 4 the next.update soon.
luv
Fatima
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
hi
i just read ur post.
it is amazing wonderful n superb
plz update next part soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20

wow!soo fast.thank u sooo much for double parts.its very interesting.great update.plz continue asap...

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