FF-My Revengeful Love Promo p.153!October 9th

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Chapter 1
Past: I walked down stairs waiting for my destiney to take place. I saw the madap in front of me as I walked.Today Prem......and I.....Heer will take the vows and become husband and wife, but love was no where near our lives.....
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Past: I was sitting in front of my room trembling because today a family was coming for my alliance. Here mostly in Indian only one percent of people have love marriages while the other 99.9 percent have an arranged marriag. Why do they do that? But, KI had to obey my mom yes my mom not my dad. Dad had died in a car accident when I was five. He left me with mom, Aslesha, and Meher. During that time dad's muisic company was going through finacial crisis which meant mom had to take over the company. FDuring that time I was left with naannaies, but during that time Ashlesha gave us her affection not feeling empty for love. But, six months ago I found out that Ashlesha had blood cancer and it was on the last stage whichj meant it couldn't be cured. Onthe smae day she had declared her last wish wich was to see me getting married.
Since thatr day mom had statted to find alliances for me. Three days ago she found a alliance for me from Prem Junja the famous CEO of Juneja Group of In dustries. He had acheived sucees at the age of twenty-five and is the ost elgible bachelor in Mumbaiu. This Portfolio quite impressed her. So here I was stuck in the middle. I sat in fron t of the mirror checking me one more time. I wore an anarkali dress and just put my hair down. I looked plain not beautiful, but plain.
I heard the doorbell and peaked through the door. It was them I saw Mr. and Mrs.Juneja and then a guy wearing Levi jeans, then a girl wearing skinnny jeans. Then I saw him....he had a black coat on and a morron shirt on. The shirt's top buttons were opened, so it revealed his chest. I turned around blushing, but wait isn't this a fast reaction. I saw Ashlesha and Meher coming to get me. So, I quickly sat on my bed pretending that I saw nothing. "Heer are yoyu ready?' Ashlesha asked giving me a smile. I nodded and got up.
I walked slowly downstairs fiddling with my duptaa to nervous. I slowly walked to them and took Mr. Juneja's blessings, then the Mrs.Juneja's blessings. "Heer beta come and sit here and meet Preet and Arhoui." I slowly sat down and saw that Prem had moved a little from me since we were sitting on the same sofa. Everyone talked and laughed while I was stealing glances at Prem. "Heer beta you could go upstairs and talk to Prem." mrs.Juneja said. I nodded and walked up stairs quitly. We walked to my room and sat on ym bed. I could feel that Prem was looking at my, but I just tried to ignore him. "Anyways so who else is in your family?" I asked trying to create conversation. "Oh jus Kulraj di, Kiran jiju, and Tannu my niece." "Oh so what's your favorite hobby?" "Nothing." Prem responded. "Okay, so did you have any friend in college?" Then I saw his expressions change. Now his eyes flared with anger. His eyes were bloodshoot red and his eyes were surrounded with the darkness of anger. Before I knew it he grabbed my arm and pinned me right against the wall. He squeezed my shoulder so hard that I secreamed out loud. "How dare you talk about my past!" He asked moving his face forward and forward to me. "How dare you?!" "Don't ever talk about my past! Do you get that?!" I just nodded. "And if you tell anybody then you don't know what I'll do to you and I mean it." Prem threw me right on to the bed and stomped right out of my room. Tears were streaming down my face. What should I do? Should I say yes if i do then I'll get torturd the rest of my life seeing the incident today. But, I can't say no I mean Ashlesha has only one more month before she's....dead. What shoulld I do?
Character Sketch:
Heer Maan:sweet and caring, but stuck between tradtions and her heart. Heer wanted a love marriage, but got forced into an arranged marriage. Will she ever be able to fall in love?
Vaishali Maan- mother of Heer, but ever gave love she was always too invoved in work.
Ashlesha Maan- elder sister of Heer, but means as a best friend to them. But, life is going to end since Ashlesha has blood cancer.
Meher Maan-Bubbliesh, and sweet always waited for the right guy until she meets the naughty Preet.
Prem Juneja- while girls drool over him he doesn't care a bit. He is very short-tempered and it all started from what happend in the past with him.
Gayathri Juneja- loves her sons and her daughter alot and loves her soon to be daughter-in-law Heer Maan.
Preet Juneja-naughty and sweet, but becomes more annoying when he meets Meher.
Arhoi Junja- younger and sabki ladli. Arhoi also has a best friend Arjun Punj they have know eachother since childhood.
Arjun Punj- When he starts to work in the same office with Arhoi his feelings change towards her best friend.
Table of Contents
Chapter 1-p.1
Chapter 2-p.2
Chapter 3-p.3
Chapter 4-p.3
Chapter 5-p.4
Chapter 6-p.5
Chapter 7-p.8
Chapter 8-p.10
Chapter 9-p.11
Chapter 10-p.14
Chapter 11-p.16
Chapter 12-p.18
Chapter 13-p.20
Chapter 14-p.22
Chapter 15-p.26
Chapter 16-p.28
Chapter 17-p.31
Chapter 18-p.34
Chapter 19-p.36
Chapter 20-p.39
Chapter 21-p.41
Chapter 22-p.48
Chapter 23-p.50
Chapter 24-p.53
Chapter 25-p.57
Chapter 26-p.59
Chapter 27-p.62
Chapter 28-p.68
Chapter 29-p.71
Chapter 30-p.77
Chapter 31-p.82
Chapter 32-p.86
Chapter 33-p.93
Chapter 34-p.109
Chapter 35-p.117
Chapter 36-p.126
Chapter 37-p.140
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow! superb👍🏼 start .interesting....plzz continue asap.

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Thank you som much for the comment , but I had a question. When I'll write the seond chapter do I start the topic by pressing new topic or something else?

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awesome start.i really like this update.hope u continue soon.
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Originally posted by: buttercup123

Thank you som much for the comment , but I had a question. When I'll write the seond chapter do I start the topic bypressing new topic or something else?

no just edit the topic of the post with chap no. and date u updated,it will be helpful if u write the pg no. too

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Thanks for your help and you also deleate the last post to start the new one right? But, anyways thank you soooooooooooooooo much for your help and don't to froget to read my FF. Promise to update soon.
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Originally posted by: buttercup123

Thanks for your help and you also deleate the last post to start the new one right? But, anyways thank you soooooooooooooooo much for your help and don't to froget to read my FF. Promise to update soon.

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u r welcome😊.u have to press post reply button,thn add ur update and edit the topic of th post

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I had tried everything you told me, but still I couldn't post the character sketch could you please repeat the step even include details because my brain doesn't work that much.
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Thank you so much for all your comments and all you silent readers out there who read this FF. I hadn't expected this response since I wasn't sure if this FF was good enough, but don't worry this story will get more interesting by each chapter and the chemistry will get grow and grow beleive me. And I promise Prem will turn nice and I'm sorry if you didn't want him to turn evil, but don't worry his attitude will change. I promise! Anyways continue reading Revengeful Love and I'm soooooooooooooo happy that I got 214 views so far and that only in one day. I'm so happy that you're liking the FF. Anyways bye for now.

P.S. Thanx again! 😊
Edited by buttercup123 - 16 years ago
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Chapter 2

I sat in my room the whole day. I hadn't even left the room when the Juneja's left. I didn't want to face him.......I mean how could I. I just hate him. The whole day I thought and thought thinking what to do? Thinking what the right decisin was. Should I marry Prem and fulfill Ashlesha's wish, but then I'll ruin my life by marrying a devil. Lige was getting to much complicated. I wished so much that Ashlesha wouldn't have cancer and I wouldn't have to get married to him. After a long time of consideration I had made my decision...... I walked down stairs for dinner, but mostly to tell my decision. When I walked up to them mom, Ashlesha, and Meher looked up at me expecting me to tell my decision. "Heer beta what's your decision?" Mom asked me getting up and holding me by my shoulders. "Mom I made my decision." I said almost choking up my words and holding back the tears. "Mom.....I.....I.....I decided to......marry......Prem.""Oh Heer I'm so happy for you."Mom said hugging me "Congrats di now we have another reoson for teasing you."Meher said hugging me tightly. "I'm so proud of you." Ashlesha said. "Thanks." After dinner mom had called my ma and told her that I said yes and to my surprise evn Prem had said yes. I quickly went upstairs trying to forget what happened in my life. My room leaded to the balcony, so I quietly walked to the balconey and sat on the stool that was outside. My hair was flowing because of the harsh wind. My eys were filled with marbles of tears. Eventhough people said the moon was for lovers I always tried to find him the one who comes in my dreams and is the guy for me and only me. But, the dreams are now just broken glass people are right dreams are made of glass when there made we smile, but when broken we cry. I couldn't beleive on myself on what I said downstairs, but I had to, I have to fulfill my sister's last wish and if I don't I won't be able to look into her eyes anymore because of guilt. I have to fulfill Ashlesha's wish even if I ruin my own life.
Next Day: Morning 7:00 A.M. Arohi's office
I slowly walked up to Arjun's office. Arjun was the friend I always looked up to from school,then to college during exams, and now when I needed help with the project. Arjun was always there nothing could ever change in our relationship. Eventhough dad had offered me to work in his chain of hotel I wanted to work independently, so I decided to work in Arjun's company.
I opened his door and saw him working on his computer and rolled my eyes I mean he's always working. "Arjunare you done?" I asked. "Oh Arhoi I'm so sorry, but this project is really important......so I...." "Don't say anything I completely understand.Anyways I needed help with this file." I said to Arjun. "Oh okay." Arjun helped me throughout the problem and finally the problem was resolved. "Oh thanks Arjun." I said and gave hima hug. I hugged him tightly while I felt Arjun carressing my back. Then I knew that I was hugging him. I mean he is my friend, but we keep limts, so I quicly let go of him and looked down blushing. 'Anyways I think I should be going now." I said and walked out of the office thinking if ever this relationship changes then how we will react to eachother. What will happen....................................?
Thanks for your comments everyone! I hope this chapter eached your expections anyways will update soon and all my readers don't forget to comment and I hope all my readers enjoyed this part.
Your friend,
Buttercup
Edited by buttercup123 - 16 years ago

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