New saawariya lyrices( i wrote) added 1 more

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Posted: 16 years ago
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guys i wrote new lyeices of piya o iya saawariya
its not that great
Be honest and let me know how is it?
Male Version
Tum meri ek pyaara sa chand sa mukda
kaisa kahoon main tumsa hai pyaar kitna
jaan se bhi pyaari ho tum dost meri
kaisa kahonga tum ho jaan meri
apne dost ko maaf kerdo o saathiya
main samne aur tera kyun dhadke jiya
I added one more
Female: Piya o piya saawarya tu saamne aur tere milne ko tarse jiya haan jiya
Pyaar ka yeh daaga tute na umar bhar
Male : pyaar na hoga kam humhara saat o janam
Female: darti hoon piya yeh pyaar ka kaisa silsala
tu samne aur ....Tarse jiya
Male: mian hoon tera saajan phir kis baat ka daar
Female: Kaise kahoon o mere piya
Male: main saamne aur
Female: mujhe gale se laga lo piya
Piya o piya saawariya
Male: tu saamne aur
Female: mera tarse Jiya
tel me how is it😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Well done Sani sweets.👏. Put it in RS blog. He will appreciate. Even otherwise I used to love the song, these lyrics are fantastic. Kya patha RS ne agle sean ye lyrics dale tho............

Sukanya.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow...sania...great job yaar....Rajan sir will really love these lyrics...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: aashi22

wow...sania...great job yaar....Rajan sir will really love these lyrics...

really
Thanks a lot😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kamuralee

Well done Sani sweets.👏. Put it in RS blog. He will appreciate. Even otherwise I used to love the song, these lyrics are fantastic. Kya patha RS ne agle sean ye lyrics dale tho............

Sukanya.

awwwww
wel i am waiting for his my old post so ..i post my old lyrices..so if he said yes I wil post these ..lyrices too ..dina post it ..i hope rajan sir ..accpet her too 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Himanivineet

guys i wrote new lyeices of piya o iya saawariya

its not that great
Be honest and let me know how is it?
Male Version
Tum meri ek pyaara sa chand sa mukda
kaisa kahoon main tumsa hai pyaar kitna
jaan se bhi pyaari ho tum dost meri
kaisa kahonga tum ho jaan meri
apne dost ko maaf kerdo o saathiya
main samne aur tera kyun dhadke jiya


Loved these lIneS👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great man
u should write the songs
:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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👏VERY WELL DONE SANIA!!!!!!!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwwwwww reallly nyceeeeeeee..
t00 gud mashallah:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: xaneeshax

great man

u should write the songs
:)

O realllyyyyyyyyy😲
Thanks
I wish 😆

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