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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shabz.



<p class="MsoNormal">Hi shubs, I just read parts 7 and 8. I like how michi's
relationship is progressing; their concern for one another is brought out
beautifully. Thank god milsi saw prachi without her specs, looking more
glamorous…looks like he has fallen for her. A lot of progress has been made
with the online chats, they said bye with the hug icon, that's a huge leap lol.</p>



Yes yahoo msger has bonded them. Milind has fallen for her. So you have two more parts to read. LOL I am too quick with my updates!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Insomniac

Hey Shubs - another great part. I'm glad that you made it clear from my last comment that nothing so sinister as I was suggesting will happen - Phew!!! I was thinking along the lines of an old flick I watched recently called Shor - where the father is longing to hear his deaf son speak but eventually after all the treatments and ops when he can speak - in his excitement the father trips and falls down millions of stairs and loses his ability to hear - real sad😭

Haven't seen that movie. That's sad. I won't let this into become a tragic story, though there will be some ride of emotions.


Why couldn't Prachi break her silence - literally!!!

Because she is now afraid of losing him.

I don't think this girl will ever find the guts to do so - if she hasn't by now she never will - I hope someone else will do it for her, someone that really cares for her and can't see her suffer in this way, like, Ayesha or Neev (but he doesn't know, right?) - someone that can explain things properly to Milind about why she did it in the first place or maybe Ranvir can let the cat out of the bag - while trying to avenge her -but that will be nasty. I thing I'll leave it in your capable hands Shubs - you know what's best. But I do feel that because of the way that you have described Milind to be, he will always want her to tell him the truth herself.

Now who will tell Milind the truth- hmm you will only know it after a few updates. Don't wanna say more than that as of now.😃


Btw - I wish I could use chopsticks properly - I have never been able to do so and it makes me so sad, cause I love it when I see people using them. Milind seemed so cute while trying so hard to master this art, and Prachi was so cute trying to teach him. Glad he's told her about Sukruti. Looking forward to Milind finally hearing Prachi say his name, but alas I think he'll have to wait quite a bit longer, nevermind, as long as we keep getting cute updates like these to keep the suspense going😆 - thanks Shubs

Hehee, I can't keep the suspense for too long, so will reveal it as soon as I can. Heheee. I promise Milind will hear his name from Prachi's mouth..😳


Edited by ShubS - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ariska

After the taxi driver, the eldery woman in the bus also thought they were husband and wife.
Prachi could not find the proof what her friend had told her about Milind and about arrogant cahuvinist Milind and started felt guilty. And after Milind told her that he hate lies she can only cry know. I hope when Milind finds out about her secret he already fall for her.
Great update Shuubs .. please continue ....



Yes, Prachi is in a mess and only has left with tears. But let's see what the girl does.
thanks Ariska.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Sorry Shubs...Didn't get a chance to read and comment sooner....i have some stuff goining on that is keeping me pretty busy. Just read the last 2 updates....excellent progress Pachi and Milind have made on the personal front as well as the business front!! I am feeling really bad for Prachi now....she seems to be stuck between a rock and a hard place.....should she tell him and possible risk loosing him....or continue the fareb...and still get to see and Im him..........hmmmmmmmmmm...what will she decide. Please continue soon!!



Yes, poor Prachi is struck.. let's see how it gets solved!!!
thanks Nargis.
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Posted: 16 years ago
It'll be really funny if Milind hears her talking in her sleep 😆, and she still carries on with her act when awake - then Milind can teach her a lesson!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey shubs darling ....... sorry for late reply
i read your FF update yesterday but commenting today

anyways ........ it was superb ........ thank god that demon prachi is liking milsi ....... hope both the prachis will tell the truth soon ....... the whole scenario of eating food was really funny ....... poor milsi get his feeling out soon by holding her hand & institing her to feed him ......... prachi childish act while dancing was too cute ...... & michi dance was awesome ....... milsi confessing his truth about the capital answer surely tells that prachi should tell him every thing ......... good to see prachi regrets & hope she open her mouth ........ happy that michi tells her everything ....... hope that doesn't trouble michi relation (which is on progress)

plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Insomniac

It'll be really funny if Milind hears her talking in her sleep 😆, and she still carries on with her act when awake - then Milind can teach her a lesson!!


Nice idea Niki!! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 11

'I can't bear with this' Prachi had screamed standing in the terrace of her huge bungalow. Her guilt had multiplied in geometric proportions.

It had been 4 days since she had gone to the Japanese restaurant with Milind; her mind was in chaos ever since. She had been trying to tell him the truth about her aphonia, but one or the other thing had stopped her, though she had no choice but blaming herself for losing the chances. She had written him an email about her faking aphonia, but before she sent it, she had received another email from him where he had said how he was looking forward for her support to wind up the current projects before the big merger with Mr. Kaushik's company. Prachi had deleted the email she had written for she thought she needed to fulfill her responsibilities and meet up Milind's expectations at least as his employee. She knew if she revealed the truth right then, he would fire her and that would affect the projects too. She had decided to work for him until her temporary contract ended and quit his company giving him some valid reason. The very decision had pained her heart like hell, but she thought that was the best she could do.


In order to successfully work on her decision, Prachi had avoided Milind as much as she could other than in work matters. She had sincerely worked for the completion of the projects but had almost stopped chatting with him on yahoo messenger and had made one or the other excuse whenever he tried to communicate with her, on matters other than work. She thought that was good for both of them rather than nourishing the budding feelings between them, which she was sure would only be disastrous when reality comes out.

On the other hand, ever since Milind held Prachi in his arms in the restaurant, he had seen the reflection of his own feelings in her eyes. He didn't need any further assurance than that to understand what had bound them together. His heart had filled with elation at the realization that it was love he had for her and she had for him.

However, it hadn't taken long for MIlind to notice how Prachi had tried to distance herself from him from after the dinner. She had been working much harder in the office, but the warmth, the cheer was missing. She had responded to all his emails but the personal touch was completely gone. Though she hid her eyes behind the spectacles, Milind could still see a deep prayer of love for him, in them, in her very expression. The only conclusion he could come to with her changed behaviour was that, as soon as she realized where their relationship was heading to, she was trying to cut it off, perhaps because she didn't want to burden him with her inability to speak for life. He decided to get her to talk to him that night and get the truth out of her mouth.

Calming herself down, Prachi had got down from the terrace and Ramu Kaaka had persuaded her to eat something, when she told her she wasn't hungry. The loyal house helper had noticed that the girl hadn't been eating well for the past few days. Though he didn't think it was in his right to ask her about her personal matters, he had prayed silently for her happiness.

Once Prachi was back in her room, she had opened her laptop expecting to see Milind's emails. There was an email from him where he asked her an important question about the project she was currently working on. She had sent an email back answering and all she could do after that was to refresh her email page several times until she got a reply back from him. He had asked her to come to the yahoo messenger to discuss the project. Though Prachi was afraid of chatting with him, she coudln't stop herself anymore.

Girl_interrupted: Hi, I am sorry I was busy.

MyNameIsMilind: Glad to see you on messenger after so long.

Girl_interrupted: I am glad to see you too.

MyNameIsMilind: If that's the case why are you running away from me?

Girl_interrupted: What do you mean?

MyNameIsMilind: Now, don't come up with another excuse. Both you and I know, I had to get you on messenger making an excuse about work.

Girl_interrupted: Milind, what are you saying?

MyNameIsMilind: Don't you know it? Why beating around the bush, let me say it straight. You are avoiding me ever since our dinner in the Japanese restaurant. Is it because I lied to you about Turkey's capital?

Girl_interrupted: No, Milind. (Prachi had pressed the enter button this time without knowing what to write).

MyNameIsMilind: Then, what it is Prachi? Why do you have to do this to me?

Girl_interrupted: Because, I don't deserve you.

MyNameIsMilind: Just because you can't speak!?

Girl_interrupted: Milind, it's not like that.

MyNameIsMilind: Prachi, listen to me, you are the most beautiful thing to ever happen to me in life. Why do you want to snatch yourself from me?

Girl_interrupted: No Milind, I am not worthy of you.

MyNameIsMilind: Prachi I don't know what makes one worthy of another, but I know that I need you in my life. I haven't felt what I have felt for you for anyone else in my life. It's for you I have learnt using messenger and tried to eat with chopsticks.

Girl_interrupted: Oh Milind, you don't understand. Let me explain.

MyNameIsMilind: I don't want any explanations. I don't want any excuses. All I know is I need you. I am saying all this because I know very well, my emotions aren't one sided. I see in your eyes what I feel in my heart.

MyNameIsMilind: Prachi, I have to go for dinner now. Baaba is back from his friend's place. I will talk to you later.

Girl_interrupted: Okay Milind. Bye.

MyNameIsMilind: Where are my hugs? 🤗

Girl_interrupted: Milind I might not be online later. Don't wait for me. (getting emotional) 🤗

MyNameIsMilind: Alright. But think about what I told you.

Girl_interrupted: I will. 🤗🤗🤗

MyNameIsMilind: Good night sweet heart.


Prachi knew she would break Milind's heart by telling him the truth. She also knew she has been breaking his heart, without his knowledge, with her lies. She couldn't think of a way out. But telling him the truth seemed to be the better of two evils. With her heart filled with him and pain, she spent a sleepless night.

'Stupid girl! She thinks she can stay away from me, while she sends me not one but three hugs in the end' smiled Milind as he went to sleep that night.

The next day was busy for both Milind and Prachi at work. Milind had been out for most of the day, busy with meetings. As Prachi noticed that he was back in his cabin by evening, she waited for an opportunity to talk to him in private. After all the employees left, Prachi saw that Milind was still in his cabin. She had knocked his door and he had asked her to come in.

As she framed sentences in her mind to open her mouth, Milind had got up from his seat and walked towards her. She took a couple of steps back and hit the door that she had closed a minute before. Milind had moved close to her making her feel sheer nervousness. He had taken her spectacles off and put it aside on a book shelf. Prachi had shivered and parted her lips to say something but she felt as if she was mute for real and she couldn't utter a word.

"You have cried through the night, haven't you?" said Milind, placing his hand on her cheek. "Prachi, stop fighting with yourself. Don't deny yourself and me what we have found in each other. When our hearts have communicated with each other, why are you hesistant?" Milind had cupped her face with his palms and looked at her lovingly.

Prachi had felt dizzy with the overflow of emotions. As she closed her eyes, Milind pulled her into a tight embrace. Hugging her tightly with one hand, he had caressed her head and back with the other. He could feel Prachi's heart racing abnormally against him and he had tightened the hug further kissing her head. Holding her like that, he had felt she was the most precious thing in his life.

It was absolute bliss for Prachi. She hadn't ever felt so secure, so comfortable. She had closed her eyes and cherished the feeling.

They didn't know how long they stood like that. A silence occupied their hearts, their bodies, their surroundings.

Much later, Milind had released her from his arms slowly and gazed her face intently. Prachi opened her eyes, looking into his eyes she wanted to take his name. Her trembling lips parted, but before any sound left her mouth, his mouth reached hers. "I love you, Prachi" he had whispered against her lips.
Edited by ShubS - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
First? Again 😛 Oh Shubs, I soooooooooo wanted Prachi to say his name in the end..why did you not let her when everything was going so perfect!? ..😡🤔 Now I think she will not say anything or push him away as a way of rejecting him.. :((
Loved how Milind didn't beat around the bush, and took that all important step towards Prachi. 😊
Thank you
Edited by $weet Ema - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: $weet Ema

First? Again 😛 Oh Shubs, I soooooooooo wanted Prachi to say his name in the end..why did you not let her when everything was going so perfect!? ..😡🤔
Yas, what would have happened if she took his name? Everything would have shattered!!!

Now I think she will not say anything or push him away as a way of rejecting him.. :((

Let's see what she does!

Loved how Milind didn't beat around the bush, and took that all important step towards Prachi. 😊
Yes, he is just straight forward!
Thank you
Congrats for coming first and thank you too.

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