||Jaane Kya Chahe Mann|| Meet One Shot - Page 3

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

salsa! =)

Sorry, sorry, i just wasn't in the commenting mood yesterday and i don't think i would have done justice so i waited till today!!! 😳 *Holds ears and then hands Meeru some cookies* 😉😆 Awww don't worry about it Madz!😳😳 I don't mind at all, as long as you read it! 😃 Awww *takes cookies* don't hold your ears, it's totally fine! 😃

Hai, main mar ja wa!!! Preet is sho shweeet!! 😳 *sigh* I wish someone thought of me as an angel!!!!! 😳😉😆 I really liked how you captured Preet's conflicting emotion sooo well!!!! His frustration, his confusion, his love for Meher, his giult for Ash!!! *thumbs up* 👏 I think we ALL wish that na?😆😳 Hmmm thank you, I tried, I wasn't sure how Preet would feel during those moments, because we never got a real insight to him *pouts*

You felt this wasn't very Preetish, but it was just another side of him!!! Preet can be serious and just like Prem when necessary!!! 😊 Remember like after his marriage to Meher and him having to take care of the house and stuff!!!! You worry over nothing Meeru!!! *shaking my head in dismay* I worried for good reason!😆 But thank you Madz, I'm glad it worked!😳

Awwww, like a pari!!!!! I melted right there!!! That was so sweet!!!! 😳😆 First i didn't realize you were saying the roof, becuase i was like chat as in like khane wala chat!?!?!? 😕 Like are you talking about some stall or something and then it hit me in the next para that you meant roof by 'chat'!!!!!!!! 😳😆 Gosh, so embarressing!!!!! 😳 Don't be embarassed at all Madz, one of my other friends had an issue with reading that part too, but we couldn't decide if it was chhat, or chaat, or chat, so I just left it, and then used terrace!😆😆😆

oooooh, Meet getting serious now!!! Okay........... i felt that Preet confessing right there was a little....... abrupt.. like it just happened all of a sudden *hiding under my covers and peaking* 😳 It was like Meher wondered out loud if she is doing the right thing and then he's like i love you. *shrug* 😳 Please don't be mad at me!!!! 😳 Don't hide Maddy! 😳 I'm sooo glad you told me, now I know that next time I'll change it to make it longer or something! 😊 I could never be mad at you EVER!😆

But how he confessed that it was always her and everything was really emotional *sigh*!!!!!! I felt bad for Harman and Ash, but it's better for them to know now then later and suffer!!!! 😭 Prem is right!!! Preet truly is his brother!!!! Teehee, glad you liked that, I was gonna stretch it but then I figured it'll turn into a Short Story or something!😆😆😆 Yup Prem and Preet DEF brothers!😆

Awwww, i hope Meet stay together forever!!! Good one-shot Meeru and please don't stop writing them!!!!! 😆 Teehee, thanks so much Madhuri! 😃 I might stop now...just to put the focus back on FF's!😆

Originally posted by: shafaq92

*Reserved*

I'll be back soon to edit. I've got to take a quick shower and change into my Pajamas 😆...! No problem Shafaq! 😃

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OMG 😲.....WOW! That was absolutely amazing. Before I get carried away 😆...I'd like to thank you 😃 for dedicating it to me....love you! Okay okay 😳 so this is probably the first One Shot I've ever read on the forum and I may be slightly bias but you're are a fantastic 👍🏼 writer Meera! The way you portrayed their emotions....the frustration, anger, nervousness etc. was all done so well aaah!!! I never thought I could be so engrossed in a Meet One Shot.....I mean when its Premeer...things are understandable. Its not that I don't love Meet....its just your One Shot has made me fall in love with them all over again. As far as the ending being rushed is concerned.....I disagree dear....for me it was just as smooth as the beginning had been and overall the length of the One Shot was just perfect! Well done 👏....I honestly don't know what else to say.....keep writing!

Shafaq 🤗

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

I was going to comment immediately, but Merlin just started. So this is my spot!

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I love Merlin. The show, and the character (but character-wise I love Arthur more. He's such a prat! 😆) You and Bhav are making me want to watch it....but I can't find it on my channel guide....😆

The shot started out so sad, and depressing, for a second I thought you'd changed your mind and written tragedy rather than fluff. It nearly brought tears to my eyes, reading Preet's thoughts on the situation. He really is just like his PB here. And he knows it! 😆 His attempts to cheer himself up, and then being brought back in front of Meher unwittingly by Ash. Teehee, I was.....I was soooo inclined on making totally tragic with Preet realizing the depth of his feelings on her wedding day, but I thought na...let's be nce! 😳 Ahhh I'm glad you liked it...and yeah I figured 1st POV works well at times!😳😳

Him confessing his feelings to her was very well done. He was both parts apologetic and passionate, and it was superbly handled. I loved that Harman and Ash accepted it, and Harman wanted Preet to take his place. It showed the bond between the siblings, and the fact that neither were evil. (And Harman indicating that he would take care of Ash, hinting to a possible Harman-Ash sequal? 😆 Should I bug you to write that now?) Awww really? I'm glad you liked that, and yes I wanted Harman to be the good brother that he should be! 😛 ha ha...no sequels, I dislike Harman's character, I really wouldn't be able to write it as well, Ash is a different story...I wanted to write a PreSha shot...but I don't think ppl will accept it now!😆😆

I absolutely loved how the family just accepted them, because they loved one another, and the other people involved were good people who wanted them to be happy, and the utter contentment that emanated from the couple was palpable even beyond this computer screen! If that does not tell you how amazing this was, I don't know what will! Yup the family was all nice now! 😛 And awwww you're so shweet Radz, I'm sooo glad you liked it that much, this Meet one was def for you and Bhav, because I wanted to make sure you guys liked it! 😃😳 Thank you soooo much again! 😃

Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: shanu333

awww... Meera... this was choo chweett 😳

Me Loves it! 😳... My favourite Meet one 😃

I loved the way you described Preet... =)

oh...and I'm so happy that Harman is sad 😆.. lol...I'm so evil 😆

Keep writing more =)

-Shivani

Originally posted by: shikha87

ahhh that was so good atleast you made bander positive thats a big applause for you please and please do your one shots i love it and also thankyou for using my favourate song ahhhhhh

Originally posted by: missindia26

What a sweet Meet one-shot!

Loved Preet admiring her...the conversation between them...also how you mentioned Premeer as almost role models..."Just us, together"

<3<3<3

Originally posted by: ..kashish..

wow that was great..so preet and meher from the beginning but they didnt confess..aww harman and ash ar so cute! great shot! hope u write more!