FF : Ajeeb Dastaan Part 39(Last part):Pg54 Mar 2nd

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Roshni

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hello everyone,🤗

Here Iam with a FF! I dont know if you will like the story or not!

The main Plot: It all starts from Rani leaving the village and meeting Yudi....But the difference is instead of Yudi mistaking Rani's identity, It would be the other way round! Its just a thought occured to me!

Please do tell without any hesitation if I should continue.😳😳

I dont know if Iam doing any justification with the title or story but its just my attempt!😳

PS: Tia and Sadia....as you wished....Iam here with my FF.....😊

Thanks to everyone for your encouragement and support!😃

PART 1 : Page 1

PART 2 : Page 2

PART 3 : Page 5

PART 4 : Page 8

PART 5 : Page 9

PART 6 : Page 11

PART 7 : Page 12

PART 8: Page 13

PART 9 : Page 14

PART 10: Page 15

PART 11: Page 17

PART 12: Page 19

PART 13: Page 19

PART 14: Page 21

PART 15: Page 21

PART 16: Page 23

PART 17: Page 25

PART 18: Page 26

PART 19: Page 27

PART 20: Page 29

PART 21: Page 31

PART 22: Page 32

PART 23: Page 34

PART 24: Page 35

PART 25: Page 36

PART 26: Page 37

PART 27: Page 38

PART 28: Page 39

PART 29: Page 41

PART 30: Page 42

PART 31: Page 44

PART 32: Page 45

PART 33: Page 46

PART 34: Page 47

PART 35: Page 49

PART 36: Page 50

PART 37: Page 51
PART 38: Page 53
PART 39 (Last Part): Page 54

Edited by Roshni. - 15 years ago

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Roshni

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Posted: 16 years ago

PART 1

Night was creeping in, stars were shining down and the moon was trying to settle down in its position to give a scintillating effect.

She was one of the beautiful girl god had ever created! In artistic definition she was called the master piece! She had matured into an exquisite young woman. Her beautiful brown eyes added spark to her face and made her look even more beautiful.

She was sitting down in the shore of river all alone and was no in no mood to admire the nature around her. All her thoughts were stifled and running like the waves of the river! She did not know how to leave them and go. She was immersed in her thoughts deeper and deeper finally allowing her to cry her heart out. She had been so strong in front of her family members but in solitude she just could not control herself! From the young she was taught to fight and never to loose control. Today for the first time her emotions overtook her completely. She was going to lie to her family members but it's for them ...for their sake...she had no other way...she was forced to take this step!

She was lost in her thoughts until she heard someone touch her from behind "Didi aap yahan akeli kya kar rahi ho? Ghar mein sab aapka intezar kar rahe hai". It was her little brother Munna. Before answering she wipes her teary face and replies back to him "Arre Munna hum to bas aise hi thoda waqt yahan bitana chahte the! Kal se hum iss jagah par aise aakar bait nahi sakte hai." Seeing that Munna was about to ask another question she decides to end the matter "Chalo munna ab ghar chalte hai, bahut der ho chuki hai aur hume pata hi nahi chala"

Both of them walk back home only to see that Amma had prepared all her favorite dishes. Everyone in the family were very happy as Rani was leaving the next to the city to complete her studies. She had a memorable dinner and was about to sleep when her chacha and chachi arrive with Champa, Chameli and Chandu. Amma welcomed them and served food. Chachi's eyes were searching for her until it finally found her and yelled "Rani"

Rani stops in her tracks and looks at her Chachi. She immediately does her a pranam and sits next to her.

Meanwhile Amma had gone to the kitchen, Dadi was telling the others a story. Champa and Chameli were busy fighting as who was more beautiful among them and Chacha was tying to stop them. Chachi seeing everyone engaged in their work spoke very softly to Rani so that no one can overhear them " Kya tumne inko saari sachchai bata di?

Rani had completely forgotten in all these chaos that her Chachi already knew this matter. She did not know how to reply!

PS: Its just a small part...If you like it I shall continue.

Edited by Roshni. - 15 years ago

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sapna

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Posted: 16 years ago

Very good Roshiniji! Really happy that you have started writing!👏

Looking forward to the next part.......wonder what your Rani's journey going to be.....continue soon!

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Roshni

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sapna99
Very good Roshiniji! Really happy that you have started writing!👏

Looking forward to the next part.......wonder what your Rani's journey going to be.....continue soon!

Thanks a lot Sapnaji.🤗...I myself din't know that I would be writing!😳

I dont know if everyone liked it or not! Hopefuly the next part will be on Sunday!

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suranji

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Posted: 16 years ago

roshini .... too good .. I'm glad u started .. u have great potential ...

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sadia

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Posted: 16 years ago

YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY you started an FF di it was gr8 i like the way your mind works plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue and just to let you know it is not bad at all infact it is the total opposite

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Faiza_sam

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Posted: 16 years ago

it was great rosh.plzzzzzzzzz continue.looking forward 4 ur next part

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Bobbie

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Posted: 16 years ago

Roshini......I love it.....Your own FF. Please do continue.

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Roshni

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: suranji
roshini .... too good .. I'm glad u started .. u have great potential ...

Thank you Suranji...You are very sweet!😃

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Roshni

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: sadia sheikh

YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY you started an FF di it was gr8 i like the way your mind works plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue and just to let you know it is not bad at all infact it is the total opposite

Sadia dear...Calm down! Its just a start...I really dont know how it is going to progress!

And thank you for your lovely comments!