|| Mere Sapno Ki Rani || Meet One Shot

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Posted: 16 years ago
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So I have a TON of other things to do, yet I had this idea this morning on the train and so I thought I'd write it and post it for you all to read, personally I find it completely pointless but hey at least it's a lot fluffier than the next one I have planned--which one be posted yet but just an advance warning. 😉 Read it and do comment if you liked it! 😛 Oh and I was going to have one of my Meet fanatics be the character of Kulraj but near the end you'll see why I didn't--or if you don't realize why...just ask! 😛😳


Enjoy! 😃


Meher didn't know why he kept staring; it was as if he'd never seen a girl before. She quickly put her friend Kulraj in front of her on the train and peered over her shoulder.


"Kya kar rahi ho Meher?" Kulraj asked.


"Ssh!" Meher told her. "Woh ladka mujhe dekh raha hain,"


"Oye hoye Meher, yeh to aacha hain; hume bina dhunde hi jiju mil gaya!" Heer winked at her. "Aur waise bhi yeh ladka nahi to woh jo Kulraj ka cousin hain usse to mil hi sakhte hain,"


"Heer sach mein agar tum meri dost na hoti na, to main....to main..." Meher trailed off.


"To kya?" Heer asked.


"To main tumhe train ke bahar kardeti," Meher made a face and laughed while Kulraj took in Heer's offended face and burst out laughing.


"Tum dono saach mein," Kulraj shook her head and walked away. "Kaash mein bhi woh ladka dekh pati,"


"Haan aur tum kuch kum nahin ho," Meher taunted right as Kulraj jerks forward as the train moves. "Aye! Woh phirse dekh raha hain, tum hili kyun?" Meher frowned.


"I'm sorry Meher, agli baar train start hogi na, main nahi hilongi, chahe train ke bahar kyun na ghir jao," Kulraj's voice dripping with sarcasm.


Meher couldn't help but feel drawn towards the guy staring at her, and reluctantly her eyes met his and she looked down quickly. The intense way his eyes were piercing into her made her nervous. Pehli baar aisa hua hain...typically I should want to slap him for staring at me...lekin pata nahin kyun aisa nahin ho raha...? And then on top of all this Kulraj was adamant on making Meher meet with her cousin because had the 'notion' they would be perfect together. Meher shook her head and went back to trying to catch another glimpse of her 'stalker.'


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He couldn't believe his eyes when he saw her looking back at him. His face erupted into a huge smile and he saw her blush and look away as the train faded out of view. He should've just jumped onto the train and found her. Right...because you can be all srk chaiyya chaiyya style, He shook his head and turned back to his two 'groupies.'


"Hogaya?" Prem asked cleaning his eye glasses on his shirt.


"Tu bhi na Preet, bechari ladkiyon ko chedta hain," Kiran scolded him.


"Maine kya kiya?" Preet asked throwing up his hands as they walked up the stairs in the station. "Usne shuru kiya,"


"Kaise?" Prem asked.


"Mere sapno mein aake," Preet sighed.


Prem and Kiran pass a look between each other which goes unnoticed by Preet.


"Tu bilkul pagal hain—pata hain na?" Prem asked as he got into the driver's seat.


Preet nodded while Kiran just smiled and shook his head. "Let's drive this one home," He directed to Prem who nodded as he started the car.


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Meher knew she should have dragged at least one of her friends with her this afternoon; but of course they both happened to have other things to attend to. She kept one side of her dupatta in her left hand, while holding onto the pole with her right hand fidgeting. Woh phirse agaya to? Who could she possibly hide behind today? She had even seen him with two other guys around his age—what if—what if they all came together and tried to harass her. She clutched her shoulder bag tightly under her arm as the train approached the station where she knew she'd see him.


Meher casually searched left and right but was stunned when she didn't see him anywhere. Slowly the train started to pull away from the station and she was fighting with the urge to get off and look for him. Was he alright? Why didn't he come? Then she shook her head wondering why she was thinking of HIS wellbeing. A few minutes later she felt someone's breath at her ear. "Mujhe dhoond rahi thi?"


She whipped around so fast her shoulder bag almost went out the window if he didn't grab onto her hand fast enough. "Careful," His voice was ringing her ears. All the time she had shut her eyes trying to imagine his voice and yet when she heard it she was surprised at the way it sounded.


"Choro mujhe," her automatic reflex made her shrug out of his grip and move away to the back of the cabin.


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He shouldn't have been surprised to see her so frightened. He DID manage to sneak up on her; in a moving train no less. He had seen her standing there in her usual spot, NOT surrounded by her friends with her eyes searching and so he had taken the chance to hop onto the train but now seeing her shocked face he knew he should go slowly. "Mera naam Preet hain. Preet Juneja. Aur aapka?" He could see his words registering in her head and so he moved back away. "Aapko darne ki koi zarooraat nahin hain,"


"Aacha?" she smirked back. "Mujhe darna nahi chaiyye? Aap mujhe yahaan pichle ek hafte se dekh rahe hain, aur mujhe darna nahi chaiyye?"


"Main hi dekh raha tha? Aap mujhe wapas nahin dekh rahi thi?" Preet asked.


She blushed hard and looked down which made him believe he had hit a nerve. She WAS looking back at him. If only she'd tell him her name now.


"Aap kyun dekh rahe the mujhe?" she asked in her timid voice.


"Kyunki tum mujhe aachi lagti ho—aur main tumhe jaan na chatha hoon," He replied honestly.


"To milne ke liye aapko yehi jaaga mili?" She grinned.


She had a sense of humor. He always liked that in a girl. "Good one, Ms.?"


"Meher, Meher Mann." She replied.


"Nice name," Preet told her.


"Really? Mujhe kabhi aacha nahin lagta," She looked up at him.


"I wasn't talking about you current name," Preet told her, stepping closer.


"Then?" she asked, not fazed by his closeness.


"Jo hone wala hain," He smirked stepping even closer. "Meher Juneja,"


"Aap bhi kamal hain," Meher said loudly, pushing him away. "Yeh aap kaisi baatein kar rahe hain?" Right then her cell phone rings. "Hello?" From the corner of her eyes she could still see him smiling at her as if what he had just said would happen in the future.


"Tumne mere cousin ko dhaka kyun diya?" Kulraj's voice asked.


"Cou—sin?" Meher asked, while Preet continued smiling.


Kulraj and Heer both stepped away from the other side of the train and came to where Meher and Preet were standing.


"Tum dono? Kahan se aayi?" Meher asks sounding astounded. "Aur cousin? Yeh?" she pointed towards Preet, who smiled and hugged Kulraj.


"Ji haan," He nodded while smiling at Kulraj. "Yeh meri cousin hain—"


"Aur tumhe pata tha ke yeh meri dost hain?" Meher asked.


Preet shook his head. "Kal tak nahin—Kulraj di finally told me about her friend getting stared at on the train and I put two and two together,"


Kulraj placed her hand over his mouth. "Yeh jhoot bol raha hain. I put two and two together!" Everyone except for Meher laughed at that.


"To tum sab ne milke mujhe bakra banaya," She makes a face and turned around.


"Is sab mein ek baat sach thi Meher," Heer told her.


"Aur woh kya?"


"Kulraj ko sach mein aisa lagta hain ke tum aur Preet ek doosre ke liye hi bane ho," She placed her hand softly on Meher's shoulder while Preet looked on. "Aur sach sach batao—tumhe woh thoda sa bhi pasand nahi? Kyunki agar nahin hain to mujhe to bahot pasand hain,"


"Heer! Maine kab kaha ke mujhe nahi pasand?"


"Matlab pasand hain?" Kulraj asked while nudging Preet whole ran his hand through his hair and looked away.


Preet and Meher both looked at each other and it was as if everything had been said between them. He understood the meaning of her low cast shy eyes and she knew why he was smiling so widely. His idea about her future name—would be true.


So? How was it? Pure fluff--and I was skimming through it while formatting, I have a feelng some of it might not even had made sense...😆 Anyways read and let me know! 😃


Love you all loads,


Meera😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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That was really good... Im loving meet more and more!!! 😊
Edited by purplestar22 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OOHHH... MEERA THAT WAS AWESOME! Like completely, utterly awesome. *sighs* Wonderful, beautiful, sweet, and I'm running out of adjectives.

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Meera, that was so wonderful:) Loved it totally:) Meet are adorable and you make me fall more and more in love with them. Actually I'm not supposed to be online today, just sneaking in a glance while the rest of the parivaar are obliviously waiting for me to get out of the bathroom after my "bath". He he...what they don't know.......Boy, am I glad I came online:) Thanks and looking forward to the next one (Greed does have it's saving graces:) Love:-) Nonee
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Posted: 16 years ago
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*dissolves into a fit of dizzy giggles*
Look what you turned me into, Meera! *more giggly*
Ahhhh so if you haven't figured out, I liked this one! It was so sweet! And you thought of it on the train? Oooh. Kyun, train par koi hai kya? *nudgeynudgeywinkwink* 😉😆
Ahh okay so yeah. I blushed when Preet snuck up on her...Ahhhhh okay I can't even speak comprehensively now. This is all your fault, Meera! *more giggly* Not that I mind, of course!
Love,
Bhav (:
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey so sweet omg preet and heer so funny
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks guys! 😛 Will comment back soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg its damn cute.. loved it.. ur very intelligent meera.. hats off to u.. :):)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i was smiling like a silly fool while reading this fic😉.....really loved it!!.....especially the whole train setting n the intense staring.Can soo imagine Preet doing that.😍Great work!
Edited by sidsk - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago
#10
You need a hobby Meera. =] Go out more. *wink*

Cute part - reminded me of Saathiya - I always thought that was cute!! Loved it to bits - and then Preet going all "Meher Juneja." ☺️ Just the way you described it was fantastic!

--shabz

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