Dulhann: The Awakening Soul ..(.Rocky??) pg 10

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Dulhann : The Awakening Soul'( The Battle Begins)

Something been cooking on my mind since yesterday as I couldn't take Sindoora's factor on Dulhann..

I am sure 99.99% of u do feel the same.. So this isn't FF or SS.. If it's FF or SS , I'll have to update too many parts right.. hehe.. It's just the way I want the story to go.. Would like to share with you some of my thoughts.. I will continue if you want..


Part 1
The accident took place as Sindoora planned. Sindoora looked at her reflection on the mirror..
Sindoora : Amar aur Divya.. Sagar aur Vidya.. hahahahaha' You think you both can outsmart me and win??? Never.. never ever will it happen..
Aditti heard this and she entered Sin's room with a cup of coffee.. Aditti sensed that Sindoora would have done something and it has got to do with Divya didi as she was nowhere to be seen..
Divya came back home with a bandage on her forehead and Sin started her trick..
Before Sindoora could start , Divya stopped her..
Divya: Enough is enough Bardi Ma!!
Sin was terrified and looked at Divya..
Divya: I know.. I know everything *raised her voice* This was planned by Amar right ' I knew it.. When he invited me for lunch itself I sensed something .. I would bring this to an end today! *stormed out of the room*
Sindoora : Wah Divya Wah!! You are very smart than I think.. How buddu can you be?? Hahaha *evil laugh*
Divya entered Bharat Aditti's room..
Divya pulled Aditti to one side ..
Divya hugged Aditti..
Divya: Aditti.. I heard that woman;s voice just now on the phone.. Bardi ma..
Was she the one??
Aditti: Yes didi.. You are 100% right.. She is your biggest enemy.. and all these while she had been lying to u.. Amar bhaiya, didn't do anything..
Divya and Aditti spoke silently while Amar came back after waiting so long for Divya at the restaurant..
As soon as Amar entered, Divya clapped and the whole family came to watch the show..
Divya: Amar ji!! How cheap can you be??
Amar looked blanky..
Divya: If you don't want me to be here.. right here standing in front of u.. You could have tell me and I would leave the house but what kind of game are you playing?
Amar was stunned ' Divya continued..
Divya: You tried to kill me!! Before I go to the court.. You decide whether you or me should leave in this house..
The song jag soona soona lage played '
Amar walked out of the house with his suit case'..

ps : I would continue if you like it..
-Shobby
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Index

pt 1 ..pg1
pt 2.. pg 2
pt3..pg5
pt 4..pg9
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Good decision !!!!😃
And exactly the plot we all wanted to see....
I reallly hope something like thi shappens............Poooooorrrr Amar yaar....
He's such a bechara !
Well done....
And I want more parts...do you get it ????😉
😉
Thanks
Vidya😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ok for my two jaanu's ...

oh n the Dulhann is here.. so I will have to continue..

will update in a bit =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh Shobby darling its too cute....m sure all of us wanna see it yaar....plz continue darling
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Posted: 16 years ago
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This is a great plot except the last part with Amar leaving with suitcase (unless this is part of Amar's plot to trap Sindoora). Then it is just perfect! Cheers!
Edited by diamondgirl148 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Shobby....please continue.......its a good thought......i would really b glad if dis happened in d show......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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It's gr8.......I m really excited 2 see how d story will shape up...........plzzzzz plzzzzzzz continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2

Amar walked out and the storm hits.. He just couldn't accept the fact that his Divya actually said that.. that her Amar was going to harm her..

He walked and walked' He recalled back all those sweet moments spent with his pyaari wife and a smile formed .. It was as if the memory itself is enough to make him keep going.. A hand pulled him to the side of the road when a car nearly hit him..

It was none other than his pyaari Divya. It was raining heavily and the love birds were soaked.. Divya bent down and asked forgiveness.. Amar pulled her up and they both hugged tightly.. Amar backed of after a while..

Amar: Divya.. It wasn't..

Divya: I know Amar.. I know it wasn't you.. I did that because I am on a mission now..

You shoud know what the truth is..

Divya showed Amar a video of Sin convincing Divya how bad Amar is ..

And another recorded voice clip of the driver spoke to Sin that their plan succeeded..

Amar clenched his fist and walked fast..

Divya called out Amar but he continued walking..

She grabbed him and said., " Where are you going Amar? to chop her off or barbecue and grill her ??

Divya: Amar, we had given her too many chances but she is only getting wilder and would continue her pagalness..

Amar : What you want me to do Divya?? Just sit , watch and clap at her stupid show??

We have waited so long.. and today I am going to put an end for all this..

Divya: If you go today, we will lose in this battle but only if we play with her for sometime.. it will turn into a Victory!!

Amar : So? What are we supposed to do now??

Divya: The plan is when we live under separate roofs, she would be happy and think that she had win in keeping us apart.. and go on with her next plan.. She won't harm us now as she wants to destroy the whole paarivar ,so she will attack one by one..

Amar: Do you love me???

Divya : I know I couldn't remember the past , but from now on and as always I am yours..

They kissed under the rain..

Scene shifts to Sindoora..

She applied mask on her face.. It's not good to always think hard.. now you will not have to worry about Amar and Divya Sindoora.. just think about yourself; for once.. lets have a light massage baby.. She turned on to a soft music and started dancing.. lalalala, she sings..

Divya is back home as she doesn't want Sindoora to suspect anything..

She mixed the milk with 2 sleeping pills..

Divya: Normal people will need maximum two.. but for you I will have to put extra one my darling..

She knocked the door and Sin was still dancing, Sin smiled and asked Divya to put the milk on the table..

Divya went to AD's room and played with Diya.. She kissed her palms and said." Don't worry my baby, your mama is here and the Dulhann is back!"


Amar entered the new house.. This was the house the company gave him long time back but he never moved in and now it's time for him to stay here..


Amar was rolling and twirling on the bed and couldn't sleep..


Divya took Amar's shirt , touched and smelled the fragrance of Amar on the shirt..


Amar sat on the bed and took out Divya's photo.. He spoke to her photo and said, " Do u have to torture me like this.. and you are smiling with your bubbly cheeks...


Amar: I love you my pyaari, he kissed and touched her face on the photo.. and continued sleeping...


Divya could feel that as if Amar touched her bubbly cheeks , smiled and said " I love you Amar " and fell asleep..

ps: so , cute scenes plus revenge..

seriously, I liked the part Sindoora danced and forgot that AD is actually up to something😆

pls pls excuse my mistakes😛

love,

Shobby😉




Edited by shobbybee - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vidyaa

👏

Good decision !!!!😃
And exactly the plot we all wanted to see....
I reallly hope something like thi shappens............Poooooorrrr Amar yaar....
He's such a bechara !
Well done....
And I want more parts...do you get it ????😉
😉
Thanks
Vidya😊



aww thank u so much my bohut bohut pyaari didi😛😉

u know what happens to me after reading your comments right😳☺️😉

more parts?? thats hard..😆

love uuuu




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Posted: 16 years ago
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ohhh...Shobby.....its more gr8 than the previous one....awww........m really loving it..its too sweet...too cute...n too romantic part yaar...i mean b/w AD...

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