Baawra... Premeer One Shot :)

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Hey Guys... Here's another one shot for you all... dont know if this bakwaas of mine will make any sense to you, but I just couldnt stop myself from posting it... Here you go...


Baaje Dhol aur Taasha Re

Khake Doodh Batasha Re

Aayo Gogiya Pasha Re

Dekho Dekho Tamasha Re

Heer stopped in between her track as she heard the song. She was on her way to Preet's room to lend a book from him. She followed the music and stopped in front of Prem's door.

What is he doing? She wondered but shrugged the thought off immediately, "why should I care?", she thought and made her way towards Preet's room.

Rangeele Rangeele Pal Hai

Chamkeele Chaamkeele Pal Hai

Barse Jhil Mil Karte Lakhon Taare

Albele Albele Tan Hai

Lachkile Lachkile Tan Hai

Koi Apna Dil Kaise Na Haare

Heer stopped again and returned back to Prem's door. Curiosity was killing her and she needed to see what is he doing and she creaked open the door soundlessly, peeped in slightly and gapped.

Main Mann Hara

Main Tan Hara

Main Jag Hara

Main Jaan Hara

Hosh Bhi Hara

Josh Bhi Hara

Main Ab Hara

Main Sab Hara

Prem was practicing boxing as it seemed , though in reality he was dancing. The man with uncountable left feet was dancing like there was no tomorrow. "Heer loves Hrithik's dance moves na?", he thought while dancing "Main bhi dikha doonga ki I am no less than that Hrithik Roshan of her's". He continued grooving.

Baawre Baawre Baawre

Baawre Baawre Baawre

Kya Dhun Hai Kya Taan Sunle

Karde Tu Kamal Sunle

Baawre Baawre Baanwre

Heer sealed her mouth with her hands fearing she'll laugh out loud. Her insides exploded with her subdued laughter and were struggling to get out as she saw him swaying his waist and thrusting his back, up and down in a ridiculous manner.

Her laughter stopped as she saw him loosing balance and stumbling in front, falling with a thud. "Ma", he screamed and instantly Heer ran inside the room, encircling her palms around his wrist with which he clasped his ankle.

She looked up to his face, which had reddened due to pain and all the muscles of his face crunched, not able to bear the pain. "Aunty Ji…Preet" , she called out and scolded Prem. "Kya kar rahe they tum huh?", "Dance…" was all he replied which maddened her more and she shouted at him," yeh dance tha? Look what have you done"

Preet sprinted inside the room and kneeled in front of Prem and Heer and asked in concern " Kya hua?",

"Preet, where's Gayatri Aunty?", Heer questioned Preet hastily.

"Ma is out to market", he answered.

"What should I do now?" Heer muttered and then ordered Preet to make Prem adjust on his bed and left the room.

Next few moments, Heer was sprinting in and out the room with wet towel, ice and hot batter of turmeric and lime.

Adjusting herself near Prem's feet she lovingly applied the hot batter and blew it lightly to ease the pain. Prem looked at her lovingly, forgetting his pain, drinking the pure beauty in his front through his eyes.

"Baawre Baawre Baawre"

Prem got out from his trance as he heard his brother's teasing voice and blushed hard as he winked at him knowingly. Heer giggled a little and gave a warning look to Preet and he stopped immediately.

"Gadhey hai woh log, jo dance karna seekh letey hai", Preet commented to which both Prem and Heer looked up to him confusedly. "What?" they ask in unison.

"Nothing", he shrugged, making his way towards the door. "But I can see what Hrithik Roshan misses by being a perfect dancer"



So did you like it... please comment guys... I love reading them and be Honest....



Priyadarshini aka Priyo😊


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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg!🤣 i cdn't contrl myself ..my mom is gving me wierd look...

exellent👍🏼

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awesomeeeeeeee🤣
it's so funny
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome, it is so funny. loved it very much.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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It was kinda cute & funny...
Nice one shot.. 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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how cute!!!! I LOVED it!!!!! LOL!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey preets soooooooooooooooo naughty howeva luved da 1 shot
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Posted: 16 years ago
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tooo funny! espically the last part...lol!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sugi77

omg!🤣 i cdn't contrl myself ..my mom is gving me wierd look...

exellent👍🏼




thanks a lot for commenting sugi... i loved your compliment 😃

Originally posted by: happybrar

awesomeeeeeeee🤣

it's so funny
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Thanks a lot😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Priyo you rock⭐️!!I really could not stop giggling😆😆😆..lol..Preet's dialogue was awesome👍🏼 and so is your Baawre one shot👍🏼..I had a gr8 time reading another bakwaas of yours😆..and I looooooooooove your bakwaas..a big hug for you🤗..keep up the good work 👏👏👏!!

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