FF: I love you (One shot) Updated Part 2 Page 1

Bhavna

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Oh gosh. I have no idea why I didn't see this sooner, but I'm just glad I did see it.

This was so beautiful. I haven't really read anything in a while that's made me cry, but this did it. I'm holding back tears right now just so I can write this.

It was just beautiful. I like how you gave Prem PTSD as the reason for him keeping his distance from Heer, because it's a pretty real thing and it's so in-your-face that I can't believe I didn't consider that as a possibility for why he's been acting this way. And I loved how you brought out the pain that both Heer and Prem feel, because that's what made me want to cry.

It was amazing. I sincerely hope you write more!

Love,

Bhav :D

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egle

@egle

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

That was beautifully writen!👏 Bravo!👏

At least, it was a damned sight more sensible and realistic that the drama itself. 😆

~Cheers😎

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ash08

@ash08

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Posted: 17 years ago

#13

Thank you all for your nice comments. I hope it made some sense. I guess thats the only logical explanation I could give for the situation we find Prem and Heer in today.

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Aradhna

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Posted: 17 years ago

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I love part 2. The rational way in which she argues with him, convincing him that together, they can face anything. It's beautiful, and perfect.

Love,

Radz

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ZN

@flowers4u

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

hey great part 2 wow amazing

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sugii

@sugii

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Posted: 17 years ago

#16

awesome updt.....luved it sooo much.

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purplestar22

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Posted: 17 years ago

#17

aww second part was really good!!!

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

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Posted: 17 years ago

#18

will be back!!

I'm back!!! *phew* My hands hurt from typing so many comments!!!! *pouts* 😆 *rolling my sleeves up and gearing for another one* 😆

Great part 2 yaar!!!! Love the calm, collected Heer!!! Usualy in the serial so far we have seen Prem as the when he has to calm everyone down, but now Heer is doing that and the one in control!!! It's so perfect how there love is strong that they can withstand whatever comes there way!!!

I'm guessing you are going to keep adding on to this story now (please do)!!!!! You have captured the emotions and the situation so well!!! Your idea is being presented by you in such a way that it holds so much power and makes so much sense!!!! *cough cough, much better than what they are using in the serial cough cough creatives are you reading this*!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm sure slowly, but surely Prem will learn to live the way he used to again!!!! Heer hain na!!! I guessing we will eventually find out what these 'other' problems are!!! I half wondered if he can't have kids anymore or something; but now it seems like they are more mental issues that he is battling within himself!!!!

Awwwww, he picked her up in his arms!!! Does that mean there is going to be some Phingoli (romantic Premeer scenes; incase you don't know what the term stand for)!!!! 😉😳😆 *fingers crossed* With them it would be pure love and a sort of union of souls, not just physical needs!!!! *bless them*

Great story so far, and i hope you update soon!!!! If you have a Pm list, please add me!!!!

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ash08

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Posted: 17 years ago

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will be back!!

I'm back!!! *phew* My hands hurt from typing so many comments!!!! *pouts* 😆 *rolling my sleeves up and gearing for another one* 😆

Great part 2 yaar!!!! Love the calm, collected Heer!!! Usualy in the serial so far we have seen Prem as the when he has to calm everyone down, but now Heer is doing that and the one in control!!! It's so perfect how there love is strong that they can withstand whatever comes there way!!!

I'm guessing you are going to keep adding on to this story now (please do)!!!!! You have captured the emotions and the situation so well!!! Your idea is being presented by you in such a way that it holds so much power and makes so much sense!!!! *cough cough, much better than what they are using in the serial cough cough creatives are you reading this*!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm sure slowly, but surely Prem will learn to live the way he used to again!!!! Heer hain na!!! I guessing we will eventually find out what these 'other' problems are!!! I half wondered if he can't have kids anymore or something; but now it seems like they are more mental issues that he is battling within himself!!!!

Awwwww, he picked her up in his arms!!! Does that mean there is going to be some Phingoli (romantic Premeer scenes; incase you don't know what the term stand for)!!!! 😉😳😆 *fingers crossed* With them it would be pure love and a sort of union of souls, not just physical needs!!!! *bless them*

Great story so far, and i hope you update soon!!!! If you have a Pm list, please add me!!!

Thank you for the nice comments.

You are right!! This is the time for Heer to take control and for Prem to be taken care of. I hope to update as soon as I find sometime..... And hopefully have some Phingoli in the next part. 😉😉

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