Soniye [Meet One-Shot][Happy Birthday, Ravz!]

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hiiiii! Okay, so the weekends are usually the boring-est times on the forum, because, well, it's the weekend! So I figured, why not put up a story I wrote yesterday? I was going to wait till Monday so I could post it exactly on Ravz's birthday, but I couldn't wait. So this one goes out to Ravz! Happy Birthday in advance, hun! 😃🤗

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Soniye

Well, it was over: Prem Juneja and Heer Maan were now Mr. and Mrs. Prem Juneja.

The entire wedding entourage was now gathered in the Juneja residence for the reception, where there was good food, good music and lots of dancing.

Dhak dhak dhak mera dil dhadke

Tere bin tere bin dil na lage

Preet Juneja smiled and nodded politely, not at all interested in the business talk that Harman had dragged him into. Coke in hand, he glanced around, looking for some cute girl he could chat up.

His gaze fell on the circle of dancers. More specifically, on one particular girl dancing rather enthusiastically. She danced with her cousin, though her simple beauty paled her cousin's. She laughed as she pulled her mother in, dancing next to her.

Preet smiled. He knew who she was; over the course of making the wedding preparations, he had gotten to know her pretty well. She was Meher, the bride's sister, and she and Preet had fought over a lot of things. Meher knew exactly how Heer had wanted her dream wedding, but Preet had begged her to tone down the feminine decorations. After all, it was also his brother's wedding, so shouldn't he have a say?

Dhak dhak dhak mera dil dhadke

Tere bin tere bin dil na lage

Jab jab dekhoon tera mukhda haseen

Akhiyon mein milne ke khwab saje

He watched her. The soft yellow light fell on her face, giving her an ethereal glow. She was a like a bubble of energy, with the way she was enjoying herself, completely uninhibited.

Preet didn't remember seeing this side of her before. All along, she had been on edge, frazzled, worried about the wedding preparations. He supposed now that the wedding was over, she could finally enjoy herself.

And enjoy herself she did.

Tujhe doli mein bitha ke

Teri maang sajake

Lejaaoon main sab se chura ke

As she twirled around, her gaze fell on Preet, and she stopped. She raised an eyebrow, as though saying, what?


Preet shook his head, grinning.

Meher narrowed her eyes, placing a hand on her hip.

"Fantastic," he mouthed to her.

She rolled her eyes. Ashlesha tapped her, asking her something. Meher shook her head, saying something. (Preet wished he wasn't so far away; he'd have liked to know what Meher was saying.) Both girls looked at him, and Ash giggled, nudging Meher. Meher's eyes widened, and she burst into laughter, smacking Ash's arm.

A girl Preet didn't know grabbed the two, and they rejoined the circle of dancers.

Preet couldn't help noticing how Meher's gaze kept returning to him.

Soniye ve soniye

Mere naal aaja soniye

Soniye ve soniye

Mere naal aaja soniye

After dancing continuously for five songs, Meher was exhausted. "I'm going to get a drink," she told Ash. Ash nodded, and Meher peeled herself away from the dancers.

Her face was flushed, and beads of sweat were trickling down the sides of her forehead. She wiped them away as she headed for the drinks table, smiling at the people she knew.

"Ek Coke de dijiye," she asked the waiter standing at the table. He picked up a glass that was already filled with Coke and handed it to her. She took it gratefully, smiling. She sipped it, forcing herself not to down the entire thing at once. She fanned herself lightly, turning her back to the table and watching the dancers.

"Oye, soniye," said a smooth masculine directly beside her ear.

Kehte hai pyaar kise humko yeh batla de

Kehte hai pyaar kise humko yeh batla de

Matlab pyaar ka deewane zara samjha de

She nearly jumped. She turned to see who it was, and was rather surprised to find Preet standing there, a cheeky grin on his face. She rolled her eyes again and turned away.

"What now?" she asked boredly.

"Nothing. You know, when you danced, I was afraid there'd be an earthquake."

Without thinking, Meher turned back and smacked his arm. Hard.

"I'll have you know ki main Ludhiana ki best dancer hoon!" she replied indignantly.

Preet rubbed his arm, positive that it was red and would stay that way for a while. Good thing I'm in long sleeves, he thought ruefully. "And you must be the most violent too," he commented.

Meher started to smack him again, but Preet danced out of her way. "Betcha can't catch me!" he sang, dancing further away from her.

"Oh, you just wait and see!" she replied, running after him.

Rakh do kadam tum apne jahaan par jaan wahi hum de denge

Itni ijaazat rab mujhe de de sajde mein ishq ka karloon

Preet managed to find Heer and Prem, and he hid behind Heer. "Bhabhi! Bhabhi, mujhe Meher se bachaa lo!"

"Main tumhe chodoongi nahin!" Meher called out. She had completely forgotten why she was chasing him in the first place. All she knew was that she was having fun.

"Arre, yeh kya ho raha hai?" Heer asked, highly amused.

"Jiju, isne mujhe moti kahaa!" she complained, stopping and placing her hands on her hips.

"Arre, maine kab kahaa ki tum moti ho?" Preet asked defensively.

"Tumne kahaa ki jab main dance karti hoon toh earthquake lagta hai!"

Prem snickered and Heer hid a smile. Meher stared at Preet, eyes narrowed. She darted to the side, and Preet shot off again, Meher at his heels.

Haan tujhe doli mein bitha ke

Tera maang sajake

Lejaaoon main sab se chura ke

Preet turned a corner and stopped, panting. He waited for Meher to round the corner, and as she did, he grabbed her. She screamed, and Preet covered her mouth, grinning.

"I told you you couldn't catch me," he whispered in her ear. He let her go, and she whirled around to face him. Somehow, she looked even prettier when she was angry. Where did that come from? he wondered, pleasantly surprised.

Soniye ve soniye

Mere naal aaja soniye

Soniye ve soniye

Mere naal aaja soniye

She stomped on his foot and started to walk off, but he grabbed her wrist, trying to ignore the throbbing pain in his foot.

"Arre, jaane ki jaldi kya hai? Thodi der ke liya toh mere saath ruko na."

She turned back. "Why?"

Preet's smile became cheeky again, and Meher eyed him warily, not sure if she liked that look.

"Prem Bhaiya aur Heer Bhabhi ki shaadi ho chuki hai, toh main soch raha tha ki kyun na hum bhi shaadi kar lein?"

Chod ke main apno ko, tere saath kaise jaaoon

Chod ke main apno ko, tere saath kaise jaaoon

Ajnabi rishton ko soch soch main ghabraoon

Meher stared at him incredulously, her brown eyes wide. "What? Pagal ho gaye ho kya?"

Preet was wondering the same thing. His smile faded. "Maybe. But I'm absolutely serious."

Meher's heart raced. She couldn't understand why she wanted to say yes so much. She swallowed nervously.

Hogi kami mehsoos na inki, itna khayaal main rakhoonga

Kehna sake jo baat zabaan se aakhon se teri pad lein

Preet raised his eyebrows at her, the smile returning. He couldn't believe he was doing this, but he liked it. "Toh, kya kehti ho? Mujhse shaadi karogi kya?"

Meher grinned slowly.

Ho tujhe doli mein bitha ke

Teri maang saja ke

Lejaaoon main sab se chura ke

Soniye ve soniye

Mere naal aaja soniye

Soniye ve soniye

Mere naal aaja soniye

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Hope you guys liked it! (You in particular, Ravz! 😆) I got tired of doing the shy, quiet Meher thing, so I thought, hey! I'll do a spunky Meher! And I'm hoping it worked...But...um...in case it didn't...here's a plate of vanilla cupcakes! (I made a speshul one for you, Ravz, it's got a cherry on top and all!) Enjoy the rest of the weekend! 😃

Love,

Bhav (:

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Posted: 17 years ago
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my spot! 😃 I shall edit in the morning Bhav! 😛 But even skimming through it...I LOVE IT! 😃 Ravs will be sooo happy reading it! 😃

*unreserved*

First of all...I LOVE this song Bhav....like I listen to it non stop sometimes, and dude...it'll work awesomely for Meet! *jumps up and down*

Awww Premeer's married?😍😍😍 Balle balle for them!😃😳

I love how he's checking out all the girls looking for the one he can hit on, and who does he spy? Meher! 😃 Aww you made her sound so cute and bubbly I love it! 😛 This line was a classic, only cus you can totally see Preet mouthing off words😆 " Meher narrowed her eyes, placing a hand on her hip."Fantastic," he mouthed to her. "

Oye Hoye! 😃 Preet! 😳 he's making my squeal today!😆 that doesn't happen very often you know?😆😆😆 But damn, the way he came up to her while she was at the bar? totally cute!😳

And woot woot for Meher smacking him! [:D[ You go Girl! 😃 I loved how they chased each other! 😛 Two grown adults, chasing each other at a wedding! 😛 Perfect!😆

Oooo ooooo oooo he grabbed her!!!😃 I LOVED IT!! Go Preet!😳 "To kya kehti ho, mujhse shaadi karogi?" What a way to propose! 😍

*sigh* all in all fantastically written Bhav! 😃 and yes spunky Meher was totally fun!😃😳

Write more soon!

Love you,

Meera😳
Edited by indiandoll89 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: indiandoll89

my spot! 😃 I shall edit in the morning Bhav! 😛 But even skimming through it...I LOVE IT! 😃 Ravs will be sooo happy reading it! 😃

Awww...thanks! And *WHEW*! That's good to know...! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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my spot. You already know what I think about it, but I shall be back.
*edited*
Ay hai, Preet inna sona munda, Meher innu na kis tarah keh sakti? I wouldn't. 😳
The entire sequence, with Preet looking for someone to flirt with, his eys falling on Meher, and being captivated by his Bhabhi's little sister, annoying her, because come on, he's Preet! and then her chasing him, because she's Meher. And this is the way they react, the way they interact. Their bickering, and the out-fo-the-blue proposal, and the way she wanted to say yes, was all so characteristic with the Preet and Meher from the beginning of the show that it's hard to imagine that you started the show only recently. It's only because I know that you did, that I believe it.
Love,
Radz
Edited by Anhdara13 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Liked it? i absolutely loved it... the way he said mujhse shaadi karogi? ahhh i'm on my dream land again just me and meet lol. you know what hun i have to say this not all script makes me think of meet like i'm witnessing the whole thing myself or make me jealous that i wish i was meher and shahid be my preet but you do it hun and that i don say to everyone
Posted: 17 years ago
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🤣

I love how none of us could wait till Monday to post it. Even the other thing, I will post Sunday night my time, cuz technically in some places of the world it is already the 30th!

Such a cute and fluff filled shot! (BTW, you wrote both fanfic and one-shot in the title...which is it?) I loved how you wrote Meet's relationship so cute, with the chasing and the PUNJABI! omgg do you know how godd Preet looks when he talks in Punjabi?? Don't know when you started watching, but when Ash-Preet were together, she got shy over soemthing and he goes "Oh Ho! Meri voti mein inne sharam?" omg. ☺️Be still my heart.

You know what I noticed? Meher never answered...so I shall answer...

*throws herself at Preet's feet*

YESYESYESYESYES! A THOUSAND TIMES YES!

--shabz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i think i would melt if someone said that to me 'Mhujhse shaadi karagi?' Hai ala *I'm doing the nazar na lage gesture for Meet*
That was a really sweet one shot! I'm sure Ravjot would love it!! I certainly did!!!
I starting to love Meet more by the day!! Hope you keep writing such great one-shots!!!
Both the characters were captured very well!! Great one-shot and can't wait till you update your other story!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Updated my comment Bhav! 😃
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Originally posted by: indiandoll89

my spot! 😃 I shall edit in the morning Bhav! 😛 But even skimming through it...I LOVE IT! 😃 Ravs will be sooo happy reading it! 😃

*unreserved*

First of all...I LOVE this song Bhav....like I listen to it non stop sometimes, and dude...it'll work awesomely for Meet! *jumps up and down*
I know! I was actually working on KK when this song came on and I just stopped and I decided to write a one-shot! (Um, but don't worry, I've still got plenty of parts ready for posting! 😃)
Awww Premeer's married?😍😍😍 Balle balle for them!😃😳

I love how he's checking out all the girls looking for the one he can hit on, and who does he spy? Meher! 😃 Aww you made her sound so cute and bubbly I love it! 😛 This line was a classic, only cus you can totally see Preet mouthing off words😆 " Meher narrowed her eyes, placing a hand on her hip."Fantastic," he mouthed to her. "
Hahaha thanks! 😃
Oye Hoye! 😃 Preet! 😳 he's making my squeal today!😆 that doesn't happen very often you know?😆😆😆 But damn, the way he came up to her while she was at the bar? totally cute!😳

And woot woot for Meher smacking him! [:D[ You go Girl! 😃 I loved how they chased each other! 😛 Two grown adults, chasing each other at a wedding! 😛 Perfect!😆
Well technically it was more of a reception thingie, but I think the Holi scene when she was chasing him started replaying in my head and I was like, 'hey, that could work!'
Oooo ooooo oooo he grabbed her!!!😃 I LOVED IT!! Go Preet!😳 "To kya kehti ho, mujhse shaadi karogi?" What a way to propose! 😍
It was totally spur-of-the-moment, no? Damn...if only someone would propose to me that way...SIGH!
*sigh* all in all fantastically written Bhav! 😃 and yes spunky Meher was totally fun!😃😳

Write more soon! Yes Ma'am!

Love you, Love ya too!

Meera😳

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Originally posted by: shikha87

Liked it? i absolutely loved it... the way he said mujhse shaadi karogi? ahhh i'm on my dream land again just me and meet lol.

Hahaha I'm there every night when I'm trying to sleep! 😆 Where do you think I think up what's going to go on in the next part of KK? 😆
you know what hun i have to say this not all script makes me think of meet like i'm witnessing the whole thing myself or make me jealous that i wish i was meher and shahid be my preet but you do it hun and that i don say to everyone
😳 Awww...you're way too sweet! Thanks!

Originally posted by: shabo24

🤣

I love how none of us could wait till Monday to post it. Even the other thing, I will post Sunday night my time, cuz technically in some places of the world it is already the 30th!
Hahah! I'm posting my other thing on Monday my time, because in some parts of the world...okay never mind. 😆
Such a cute and fluff filled shot! (BTW, you wrote both fanfic and one-shot in the title...which is it?) I loved how you wrote Meet's relationship so cute, with the chasing and the PUNJABI! omgg do you know how godd Preet looks when he talks in Punjabi?? Don't know when you started watching, but when Ash-Preet were together, she got shy over soemthing and he goes "Oh Ho! Meri voti mein inne sharam?" omg. ☺️Be still my heart.
(oops..Thanks for pointing that out!) OMG if the Meet-dancing episode was anything to go by, then ZOMG I HAVE to find that Ash-Preet thing!! (By the time I started watching Meet were already married, and I *think* I started watching from when they went to the restaurant and met Maya and Harman...
You know what I noticed? Meher never answered...so I shall answer...

*throws herself at Preet's feet*

YESYESYESYESYES! A THOUSAND TIMES YES!
...........................🤣....................................
--shabz

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