*lGarima's Galorel*PH:One Shot Pg. 11 - 8/19

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*~*Garima's Galore*~*

Hello all my fellow Deshians!! As you can tell I also "choried" this idea from Shabzie (Shabo24) and decided to do my own thread for my total of three fanfictions! Sounds great doesn't it? lol😆

I will be updating my FF on its original thread, but my one-shots will be on this thread, so keep an eye on this whenever I upload a one-shot, people who want to get PM'd can tell me so I'll add you do the list. Fair enough?😉 Good!

Okay So you guys can like check out my FF's and maybe One-Shots if I do any and I'll keep adding the new stuffs here! okay?😛 And you guys are free to give comments or ideas for this thread!😉 So Enjoy!😃

*~*Fanfictions*~*

You and Me are Inseperable
[Completed]
Link: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1201044

Janmon Ke Saathi
[DisContinued]
Link: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1095772

Mohabbatein
[Completed]
Link: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1070289

Kuch Kuch Hota Hai
[DisContinued]
Link: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1053593

*~*One-Shots*~*

Is This Love
[Premeer: One-Shot]
[Page 1]

Aaj Ki Raat
[Premeer: One-Shot]
[Page 4]

Ek Ladki...Anjani Si
[Premeer: One-Shot]
[Page 6]

Kunwari Kudi
[Premeer: One-Shot]
[Page 9]

Ishq Hi Rab Hai
[Premeer: One-Shot]
[Page 11]

*~*Love Always*~*
Garima😳



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Alright, so I decided to write my very first One-Shot on Premeer. It's gonna be short, but that's all I had in mind as of now'so do feel free to comment/criticize k?!

Is This Love?

Premeer: One-Shot

Heer woke up early in the morning, thinking about the one who had captured her thoughts since yesterday, and that special someone was Prem, Prem Juneja, the one she was bound to get married with in a time span of two months. She had just seen him yesterday for the first time, when he and his family had landed in India.

Heer's father-Balraj Maan-and Prem's father-Lalit Juneja-had already assembled Prem and Heer's marriage 15 years ago. So it was certain that Prem and Heer were going to be one exactly 15 years from then.

The time had finally come! Yesterday was the first time she had met Prem after fifteen years, and within one glance of him, she knew that she felt a strong attraction towards him, but could it be love? She did not understand'

Today was her engagement party, the thought of it made her blush bright red! That was the main reason why she couldn't sleep the whole entire night.

She quietly got out of bed and went to the bathroom to freshen up and take a shower, coming out wearing a simple sky blue churidar. She tip-toed downstairs the Pooja room to see the one and only heart throb of her life'Prem. He was standing in a white kurta-pajama, praying to God. Wow, did he look handsome or what? Heer thought, and rapidly started to blush.

After admiring him for a total of 5 minutes, she silently walked to the Pooja area and stood next to him with her hands folded, praying to God.

Right that second, Prem finished doing his prayers and turned to leave when he saw her. She looked beautiful even in the simplest clothes. She was exactly the type of girl he ever dreamed of and wanted as his soul mate. He thanked god for pairing him up with the most charming girl on earth. What more could he ask for?

Just when she was done praying, she turned her head towards the same directions he was looking at her. At that very moment they had and eye-locking session. Both of them lost in each other's eyes, absorbing each other's charm in them.

Prem broke the silence.

"Erm'Good Morning!" He said softly.

"Good Morning'" Heer said shyly.

"Tum'itni jaldi uth gayi'koi khaas vaja?" he asked politely, although he new exactly the reason why she woke up early.

"Nahin, aisi toh koi baat nahin'bas yuhin, neend nahin aarahi thi, toh socha kyun na uthke thoda kaam karloon'.vaise, aap itni jaldi kyun uth gaye?" she asked innocently.

"Woh, mujhe bhi neend nahin aarahi thi'jetlag ke vaje se'vaise if you don't mind, kya mein tumhare kaam mein kuch madat kara sakta hoon?" he asked.

"Ji'theek hai'aapki marzi" She replied.

Both headed towards the kitchen, while Heer started to make Chai, he helped her take out all the tea cups, and set them up on a tray.

"Um, Heer, mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha'." Prem said hesitantly.

"Kya'"Heer said.

He came closer and closer to her, to the point where there was only a gap of one inch between them. He put his hand forward which made Heer shudder, and opened the clip from her hair.

"Tum khule baalon mein bhaut achi lagti ho'" he said in his huskiest voice in her ear. She could feel the hear rise up on her cheeks as soon as he said that. Is this what you call love'Heer thought'


kissa tera teri daastaan, chehra tera khud kare baya
kisise pyaar tujhe ho gaya, tu maan ja, ha maan ja.....

kahi na laage mann, kya hai yeh sunapan aa ha aa ha....
mujhe tum bata do, koi to wajah do aa ha aa ha....
har ghadi abb khayalon mein, keh raha hai koyi
har ghadi mere khwaabon mein, aa raha hai koyi
is this love, maine na jaana aa aa aa aa ha....
is this love, tu hi bataana aa aa aa aa ha....

is this love...

So'How was it? Bakwaas, bekaar, theek-thaak? Give me ur comments!! Or critisizm! Kay?

Luv,

Garima

Edited by Garima93 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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My spot! 😃

*unreserved*

no one would dare call it bakwaas!😍

Such a perfect simple scenerio, yet with Premeer everything explodes with chemistry!😃

"Tum khule baloon mein aachi lagti ho" Can't he say that to me once?😆 Ahhh...Gari it was just such a classic scene and you made it even better with the best couple!😛😃 do write more soon!😳

Love you loads,

Meera😳
Edited by indiandoll89 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Pudding!

For some reason I started thinking of Chalte Chalte frm Mohabbatein where it goes kya yehi pyaar hain when I saw the title😆

Love the one shot! They both couldn't sleep? Coincidence? I think not!😆 I loved how you wrote it and my fav part was at the ending when he goes close to her and says how he likes her hair out =)
Btw, it wasn't bakwaas =)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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simple yet awesome one shot!!👏👏👏
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Gariiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii😃... congratulations on your galore... and kya start mara!!! with an awesome one shot... kaha se milti hai itni pyaari ideas... oh!!! I re read it so many times...but cant seem to get enough of it.. jaldi jaldi post another shot otherwise u r the sole responsible for my lack of oxygen😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hiya!
Oooh this was so sweet! Like Meera said, a really simple scenario, but you executed it beautifully! I think I might've blushed when Prem leaned in... 😳 Real nice, that's about all I can say.
You have to write another one soon, okay? 😃😃
Love,
Bhav (:
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: indiandoll89

My spot! 😃

*unreserved*

no one would dare call it bakwaas!😍 Awww!! Thank you Meeru!! ur such a shweet heart!! 🤗

Such a perfect simple scenerio, yet with Premeer everything explodes with chemistry!😃 Yupp! ur absolutely right!! Everything explodes withe Premeer's romance and chemistry!! lol😆

"Tum khule baloon mein aachi lagti ho" Can't he say that to me once?😆 Ahhh...Gari it was just such a classic scene and you made it even better with the best couple!😛😃 do write more soon!😳 *sigh* I wish he said that to me too 😍 I'm sooo glad u liked it!!! I will certainly write more whenever I get the time!! thanks so much once again!!😳😃

Love you loads,Luv ya too!!!😛😳

Meera😳

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Originally posted by: Bul3

simple yet awesome one shot!!👏👏👏


Awww Thank you so much!!😳😳
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Originally posted by: munam_13

Gariiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii😃... congratulations on your galore... and kya start mara!!! with an awesome one shot... kaha se milti hai itni pyaari ideas... oh!!! I re read it so many times...but cant seem to get enough of it.. jaldi jaldi post another shot otherwise u r the sole responsible for my lack of oxygen😉


Priyo!! Thank you sooo much yaar!! Ur the best!!😃😃 Awww, I'm so happy that you liked it so much that u read it over and over again!!!! Brings a really big smile to my face!!! LOL don't worry u wont get any lack of oxygen cuz im gonna write another one soon!! k?😳

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