AR FF: Dil Mil Gayye(3 years later)Updt page 74!

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Hey Guys I just thought of starting this FF about AR and had written this first part about a month ago so here it is and I will continue this story in like 2 minutes so hope you all like it..PLEASE COMMENT!!! and PLEASE continue the story if you can! thanks a lot!
Context:
AR: inke pyyar ko milne wala hai ek naya naam....pati aur patni😳
RM: in dono shaadi to ho gayi lekin inki fights kabhi nahi khatam hotišŸ˜†
AA: bechare Dr.Atul ki kahani abhi tak atki hui hai....ab anjali ko kaun samjhaešŸ˜›
AN: yeh dono ab armaan aur ridhima ki tarah sab se chupte phir te hain.....sanjeevani ki fire escape hai hi itni romantic😃
SK: inki shaadi to hogayi lekin phir bhi Dr.Shubhankar Dr. Keerti se darte hainšŸ˜†
Part 1:
Here it goes: Valentines Day: 2010
it is the last day of the internship and tommorow all will come back as senior doctors
Ridz: Niki tumne armaan ko kahin dekha hain
Niki: srry ridz maine nahi dekha
Ridhima looks for Armaan everywhere he is no where to be found......she sees atul
Ridz: atul tumne armaan ko kahin dekha
atul: haan ridz woh kuch basketball ki baat kar raha tha
Ridz: basketball? abhi?
atul: tumhe to pata hai ki woh pagal hain to gaya ho ga masti karne
Ridz: haan pagal to woh hai (both laugh)
Atul: acha ridz main chalta hoon......anjali ko dhoond ta hoon.....tumhe pata hai 3 ghante ho gaya use dekhe
Ridz heads over the basketball court and when she gets there shes sees that the lights are out and armaan is still nowhere to be seen "Armaan, Armaan"
A husky voice: Yo basket
Ridz: Armaan.....kahan ho its not funny ok.
Armaan:Basket.......nahin nahin Dr. Basket itni bechaai.. thoda dhoondo to sahi.....
Ridz: tum bahar aa rahe ho kay mein chali jaon
Armaan walks out wearing total basketball attire......(the same as he did in the first episoe)
Ridz: Armaan..yeh kya hai.....tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho aaj hamare internship ka last din hai aur kaam ke sivaye tum basketball kehl rahe ho.......
Armaan: basket.....khel nahi raha.....khel ne ke liye intezaar kar raha hoon
Ridz: intezaar? kiska?
Armaan: basket ke bina basketball kaise khel sakta hoon
Ridz laughs and says ab yeh mazak choro aur chalo andar chalo....
Armaan: kyun daar gayi? 3 saal baad bhi kuch nahi badla aaj bhi tum mujhse basketball khel se darti ho..
Ridz: Acha? main darti hoon.....woh bhi tumse.....Dr.Armaan Malik teen saal baad to kya 30 saal baad bhi main tumhe harati rahoongi....pehle yeh lights to on karo
Armaan:lights....hmmm abhi nahi
Ridz: kyon? yeh andhera kis liye....
Armaan: andhera kahann....chandni se hi kaam chala lete hain aur waise bhi yaad hai chandni raat milan ki raat
Ridz: armaan....bus wali line? phir se?
armaan: bas wali ho yan jungle wali meri har line tume deewana bana deti hain.....kyon?
Ridz: Tum na apne app ko bahut smart samaj te ho na...
Armaan: Samajh ta nahin....hoon........chalo yeh sab chodo and lets play!
they both start playing in the dark and then as soon ridhima approches Armaan and tries to get the ball from him all the lights go on and armaan grabs ridz hand
Ridz: Armaan chodo.....cheating mat karo
Armaan holds tighter and just looks at her ....she realizes that there something that he is planning and really there is no game here...
Armaan: Ridhimma...aaj yeh internship khatam ho rahi hai.......aur kal humari zindagi ek nya chapter khul jayaga.....in teen saalon maine bahut kuch sikha, sikhya, paya, khoya lekin in teen saalon maine bahut pyar kiya aur pya bhi....main nahin chahata ke yeh din kabhi khatam hoon lekin life must go on .....(slight tears in his eyes)
Ridz: Armaan..he stops her
Armaan : mujhe kuch kehna hai.........teen saal pehle isi jaga par hum milithe.....aur yahin se humari kahani shuru hui thi......isi jagga par mujhe apni zindagi ka sabse hasin taufa mila...tum ridhima...meir zindagi tum se zaada zarrori kuch nahi aur koi nahin.......teen saal mein hum kahan se kahan aa gaya....hum to chale the dost ban ne jaane kahaan dil mil gaye!
Ridz: armaan....i love u.........i love u(she hugged him)
Armaan: acha chalo ab yeh pyar ko pause karen aur mera ek kaam korgi mere jacket ki pocket mein mera cell phone pada hai ....plz nikaalo
Ridz: cell phone? Armaan says just do it...
Ridz: fine.....kaunsi pocket main...he points to the jackets pockets
she searches the pocket and doesnt find a cell but a small little red box....
Armaan: mil gaya kya......
Ridz: nahin yahaan koi cell phone nahi hai
Armaan: hai....
Ridz: nahi hai yahaan to sirf ek red box hai
Armaan: Red box......ummm use kholo mat.......
Ridz: worried abt what is it that armi doesnt want her to see......yeh hai kya
Armaan: runs and grabs the box from her she runs after him to try and get a hold of the box
she catches him and tries to grab the box admist all this he grabs her hand and puts a ring on her finger....."Khush"
Ridz: Armaan......yeh tum........armaan.......yeh ring
Armaan: on his knees.....humne apni kahani isi basketball court mein shuri kari thi aur aaj ek aur kahani main yahin se shuru karna chata hoon...Dr.Ridhima Gupta.....kya tum is valentines oe mein zindagi bhar ki valentine bano gi.....kya tum mujhe zindagi bhar basketbaal mein harao gi.....kya tum zindagi bhar ke liye mere saath bets lagogi....kya tum zindagi bhar mujhse pyar jarogi....kya tum Dr.Ridhima Malik bano gi......kya tum....he didnt finish the sentence and she kissed him on the head......and they both looked at eachother with tears in their eyes
Ridz: sirf ek shart par......
Armaan: kya
Ridz: tum zindagi bhar aisi hi pagal harkate karte raho gay.....
Armaan: zindagi bhar.....vaada
They embrace in a passionate hug and asmani is played.........😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Racap: Ridz: tum zindagi bhar aisi hi pagal harkate karte raho gay.....

Armaan: zindagi bhar.....vaada

They embrace in a passionate hug and asmani is played.........

A: I love you ridhima...aaj main bahut bahut khush hoon

R: armaan main bhi

AUR HUM SABH BHI!

Armaan and Ridhima turn around and see that all their freinds are there and it seems that they all knew what was going on!

R: tum sab ko pata that

Anjali: yes ridzi pata tha armaan ne humi se to baat kari thi

Atul: baat yeh to humara pichle manhine se sar kha raha hai

Muskaan: Haan yaar ridhima is gadha to yeh bhi nahi pata tha ke tumhe kaisi ring chahiye

Rahul: haan aur phir Padma aunty se pucha

R: Ma! Une bhi pata hai

Anjali : aur kya tumhe lagta hai ki tumhari shaadi ki baat mama papa ki izzazat ke bina ho sakti hai

R : ARMAAN!

A : haan basket yeh sub ki planning to ek mahine se chal rahi ………..aur tumhare aur mere mama papa ko sab manzoor hai

R: I love you armaan...she goes to hug him............

All: uuhhmmmm hum sab abhi yahaan hain

A: kyon? Ho? Ab jao na?

Nikki: How rude Armaan.....hum to tume congratulations karne aya the aur tum

R: Nikki sorry..............Armaan ki taraf main mafi mangti hoon

Muskaan: arey wah ridzi abhi se biwi ka role chalu............laughs

Rahul: tujhe bhi seekh lena chahiye

Muskaan: kya? Matlab ki main achi biwi nahin.......(Rahul and Muskaan are married)

Rahul: nahin hai

Muskaan: abbey oye.............they both start to fight

Atul: muskaan chod use...........lag jayi gi

Armaan: AB BAS!!! Kya yaar tum dono ne aaj ki raat bhi barbat kardi

RM: sorry yaar sorry

Muskaan: tu ghar chal main dekhti hoon

Nikki: acha chalo guys ab hum chalet hain

They all leave!

A: to basket......haan

R: blushes* haan

A: oyyeee hoyye............itna bhi mat sharmao

R: armaan plz

Armaan comes close to her and starts to caress her hair .........Dr. Ridhima Gupta I love you!

R: Dr.Armaan Malik i love you too....

A: Ridhima aaj ke baad hum dono ki zindagi bilkul badal jayagi ab hum dono ek hone ja rahe hain

R: haan armaan....ab ridhima ko uske armaan se koi alag nahi karsakta

A: kabhi nahi.............he gets close to her...........and closer ...................he is just about to kiss her and hears a voice

Dr.Shashank: Ridhima beta

R: papa

A: sasurji......

Dr.Shashak comes to both of them.......

Dr.S: ab maine maan to liya hai lekin iska matlab yeh nahin ke tum dono........yeh sub.............understood

R: ji papa

A: ji papa

Dr.Shashank and Ridhima : PAPA?

A: sorry ji Sir.......emabrassed

Ridhima and shashank laugh

Dr.S: ab tum dono ki shaadi hone wali hain isi liye tab tak apne aap par control rakho........

R: blushes ji papa

Dr.Shashank: ap bhi Dr.Malik.....ab ridhima chalo ghar chalo aur haan Dr.Malik kal aap apne father ke saath humare ghar aa jana aur wahan hi sab dates paki karlen ge............dheek hai ridhima beta

R: shy and runs away

Dr.Shashank: so sweet...okay Dr.Malik kal milte hain..................aur haan..........ji papa mein koi problem nahi

A: ji sir...........i mean ji papa

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice FF!!!!
please PM me when you continue!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Nice FF!!!!

please PM me when you continue!!

np and thank you so much
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey...very nice ff
luv both of the part
I don't know why...but I feel that I hv read the first part in somewhere else.....do u write anywhere else?
plzz continue soon....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi sana
CONGRATS FRO THE NEW FF !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT ILL BE WING FOR THE MARRIage heheh ......... rocking .. pm zaroor karna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Craze_naina

hey...very nice ff

luv both of the part
I don't know why...but I feel that I hv read the first part in somewhere else.....do u write anywhere else?
plzz continue soon....

heyyy yes i had posted the first part before! as a seperate post....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey hun nice ff ....do pm me when ever u update....thanx
ā¤ļøMONA
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaz_rani

hi sana
CONGRATS FRO THE NEW FF !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT ILL BE WING FOR THE MARRIage heheh ......... rocking .. pm zaroor karna

thank you sooo much! i will pm soon hopefully you can write as well?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.

hey hun nice ff ....do pm me when ever u update....thanx
ā¤ļøMONA

Mona thank you very much and yes i will pm as soon as i update!

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