FF: Mannat (Ch 37-Pg 118)- 2/13 - Page 89

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Deepu, that was brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. I hated the fathers so much, but was thrilled with the entire thing becasue by having the couples away, means (hopefully) more romantic scenes, and you write wonderful romantic scenes. Loved it! Hope I make a reappearance.

Love,

Radz

Originally posted by: zaibun

great update luved it oh yeh balraj ncle be y did h e slap her so hrd for

any ways luved it do continue cant wait to read more

Originally posted by: Iqra238

DI!!!!...that was a SUPERB update!!!!...can i PLZ PLZ hit the fathers with some dandais so they can get some akal in their brains???.....heer and prem are leaving the house ...they made a very good descion...sooo does that mean we weill get more premeer scenes!!!!...CAN"T wait for monday to read your update!!!!

Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~

hey di.*waves*, how r u? so the parents found out.. my gosh no one else had problems of prem-heer, and guneet-amar... why cant the fathers understand, that they love eachother??? i think it was a good idea that premeer, and guneet-amar left the house.. and it looks like everyone..including me are hoping to get a feew more premeer scenes. the preveiw..is interesting..i cant wait till Monday!!!*jumping for joy*, hope monday comes soon.. till then ciao!!!and take care..

~nikki😳..🤗

Originally posted by: srklover93

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Yay!!! I made it!!! Woohooo!! party throw karo!!! LOL okay no, u dont have to throw a party for me!!😉😉 I'll be okay without one!! teeeheee!!!!😆😆
Yes, we should definitely throw a party...in the khushi of you being DOTW!! Congrats again!!
Now back to the update......

Awww...that was so sad😭😭 Omg...I really felt bad for Premeer and Amar/Guneet, bechaare, just because of Ballu/Lallu, they had to leave the house, not just the house but the family also?? Awww...that sucks man!!! Grrr....I hope those two buddhe's get a big lesson for doing this to their own kids!! how stubborn can they get??!!😡😡
They'll be quite stubborn, but one day they'll repent for sure!!! Though I'm quite glad they left the house & i tried to get as many ppl to leave with them as possible so the story could continue. You'll be seeing 3 new love stories forming!!
The whole update was so wonderfully written as always!!😳😳😳 Even though it was one of the sadest, but still your writing was stupendous!!👏
It was sad, but i'm glad you liked it!
Its a good thing that Ash, Preet and Neel went with them, atleast they'll have some family to support them wherever they go!😊
Oh trust me...they'll have more than Ash, Preet, & Neel to support them...This is the last update with the current family for a very long time...I guess you'll see a few new logical additions.
Ohhh!! The preview sounds really interesting!!! and if I'm not wrong, have you taken a leap?? LOL Here I go again with my physicic-ness 😆😆 but hey, its not wrong to guess is it?? lolz...so yeah what was I saying?? ohh yeah the preview, it sounds really really interesting!! But, where did Prem go?? Cuz Preet told Heer that your Romeo just called you...so I was like Oh no! where's Prem?? is he living with them or no?? But I know nothing can happen to Prem!!😳 He'll always be with his Heer!!!
OMG😲(Shocked times a billion)!!! I swear...something has to be done about your psychic-ness and I'm serious!! Either that or I dropped some pretty good hints and you caught on quite quickly😆!! You're the only one that guessed that!! And nothing is happening to Prem-Heer!! They'll forever be one😉!! Though I'm quite fond of the next track coming up!
Otherwise, the update was awesome Deeps!!! Loved it!!!👏👏👏 Oh btw, did I tell you that I loved how Heer left the house, and told Ballu/Lallu that she knows about Kuljeet and the fire!! I bet that totally left both the buddha's shell-shocked and speechless!! lmao!! I would love to see their faces right then and there!! hahahaha!!!
They were like 'oh sh*t, she found out & history is repeating itself'!!! That made them a bit guilty too!!
Looking forward to your next update!!! 😛
Will update in about a day!!
Luv,
Garima😳😳
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Originally posted by: kamx2

Hey Deepika! Howz life?

gosh, i m reli lovin the way this is shapin. m totally lovin it!

Aww...thank you!! Ur soo sweet!

i m glad u got Meet and Mahi to join them hehe...i told u last time how i'd reli like them to be there as well...thank uu!

Well that was a last minute addition to the story on ur sweet request!! Though your request was quite beneficial to the story!!

I felt reli bad for the newly weds as well as the others, that they had to finish off the wedding in such a rush, and then rite after the reception, they had to head home at such a time...awful

I had them finish it off early the next morning b/c I didn't want them to remember their wedding day as the day all the drama happened.

(tho personally, i LOVE travellin on the roads in Punjab in the middle of the nite...the feelin of fear fused with the serene peace i get at tht time, nuthin in the world can get me to feel that way...i m one wacky weirdo, i confess)

OMG!!! I also LOVE traveling the roads of Punjab at nite!! One time my distant mammaji was telling us a story of a murder that happened in these nearby fields while we were driving down the same road...it was quite funny! Ur making me miss Punjab even more now😆!!

I m glad tht they confronted the parents, and i am glad tht bade nanu and chote nanu both actually tried to stop lalit and balraj. And i am reli reli happy to see that all the other youngsters stood up for them and said they'd leave as well...more than anything, i m glad that Preet, Ash and Neel are leavin With them. And I liked how they were told to stay, and in a way, the dads were told to leave hehe...however, the BEST part, was that they refused to stay and let their dads go....

Technically Lallu/ballu should have left, but then they would leave their wives and the kids didn't want to ruin their parents marriages....the dads are quite immature/cruel and have old-fashion thinking.

gosh, thts a lot of things i liked hehe...it only makes me more successful in tellin u how much exactly i liked it hehe

Aww....you are very very very sweet!!! Thank you soo much!!

cant wait for more...hope u update soon!

o yea...forget to say this earlier, m looking forward to yur new ff, wenever u start it lol

I finalized to day to post my new ff on Feb. 28th😆!!

Kamal

Originally posted by: im_charmed

Hi. iv been a silent reader of ur fanfic and i think its brilliant. 😃👏
i love the Punjabi setting and your prem and heer and basically all the characters apart from dj and her family (and probably the fathers).
i cant believe that the fathers didn accept them and feel soo sorry for heer. but im glad they stood up for their love and hope balraj and lalit find out the truth about daljit and realise that they should have put their children's happiness first.
please continue soon.😊