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Posted: 17 years ago

Love mera hit hit

(By Huma and Kashish)

Hey folks, I have ready few FF's and that what got me to write my own with a big help of Kashish (kashishk). Actually it's written from both of us and I posted it from this ID.

I hope you will enjoy the story.

armaan malik : he is cute boy and handsome sari ladkiye is pe marti hai, he is very pride of it, love doesn't exist for him. He is also studying in the same college as neev, ridzi and Jiya.

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ridhima Khanna :She is very cute and bubbly? She is a student. She loves her siblings a lot.

jiya Khanna :&nbsp; she's preety and beautiful and is also a student. She also loves her bro and sis a lot. (Prachi Desai)

angad&nbsp;Khanna : he is hadsome boy, he had done his studies into business. He is the owner of one of the famous fashion (modeling) companies. He know Kirpa through his family, as she is his father's friends daughter. He fall in love with her at first sight, when he met her at a party.He called her sister angels.

neev shergill : he is hadsome and cute, girls are after him...., he is a student. Although he is younger then kripa, he is so protective, he behave like her big brother, they always called each other by name, as they have a year difference.

kripa shergill : neev sister, she is neev's big sister and is a model. Their parents;into business, but she isn't interested at all, so all the time she has argument with her father. Neev always support her.

Intro :Page 1

Part1 :Page 6

Part2 :Page 10
Part3 :Page 14
Part4 :Page 19

Part5 :Page 29

Part6 :Page 39
Part7 :Page 47
Part8: Page 51
Part9: Page 64
Part10: Page 75
Part11: Page 81
Part12: Page 88
Part13: Page 92
Part14: Page 104
part15: page 106

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Edited by neevfan - 16 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey it seems it good,
continue soon.

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Posted: 17 years ago

coool
NIce Characterss
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Posted: 17 years ago

Really kool. Um since u have Neha as Krishna, will u be bringing Iqbal aka Angad in as well?

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hu77

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Posted: 17 years ago

hajialiya: thankx for the comment i post today the episode( pls mujhe comments deti rehna)

kashishk: thankx main goshish karoo ki achi kahani banane ki (pls mujhe comment deti rehana)

jalak-ji: thankx for the comments (pls mujhe comments de ti rehna)

Angad-Kripa#1: laghta hai mujhe angad ko bhi kahani mein rakhna parega (pls mujhe comments dete rehna)

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Posted: 17 years ago

INTRO

We entered in a big house, the camera went up by stairs, turned to right and entered in the first room. There is a huge room, wall covered by girls picture, the guys seemed a die hard fan of deepika padukone. There is guy laying on the bed, we can only see his back. His alarm went on, he irratetly off it and sat on his bed lazily and then lay back.

Someone enteres her room and tried to wake him up, as usual every tactic went in vain so she went near his bedside took bottle of water, made her way toward him and pour the water on him.

The guy jumps from the bed and is red in anger.

guy:ahahah!! kripa aaj tu to gayi

He ran behind her, but on time she exited his room and close the door on his face. Kripa talk to him from outside the door.

Kripa:get ready neev u have to go to uni

Neev:oh yes, I completely forgot, thnx kripa for made me remember

Kripa:ur welcome, come soon

(neev went to his bathroom)
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Khanna mansion

We see they r sitting two girls who are unindentical twins, they are 21 years. They r having there breakfast. After few minutes a boy came down.

Boy:good morning angels

girls:good morning angad bhai

(he hugged them)

Angad:hey Angels where are mom dad?

girl 1:Angad bhai, mom dad office gaye hain

angad:ok

(he came and sat down)

Girl:I am so happy Jiya,

jiya:me too Ridhima, we r going to start our uni, and it's very first day there, I hope they won't do ragging as we r freshers.

Angad:don't very angels, when u two are together, u don't have to be nervous or afraid.

(he glaced at his wrist watch)

Angad(shocked):oh my god, It's so late, I gotta go angels, I have shooting

angels:all the best bro

angad:u too angels, after all it's ur first day

(he gave them the angels a hug)

..................................................................

(There is a match going on a basket ball court, there is a tough match going on between two guy. He dribbled and there he shot it, goal)

(all the girls ran to him)

girls:hey ammi u r the best

ammi:thnx girls, I have to go now, this is first day of uni

(he said bye to girls and went to his house. Where he lives alone, his father died two years ago in car accident. He never believed in love he had seen lots of people getting cheated in love in fact her mother too left his father when he was 8 years old, he had seen his father crying. He hates girl so he only use them)
Hey folks, pls leave ur comments, they meant a lot to me.

Edited by neevfan - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hhahahahah Ur story looks funny
but good going
it'z seemz really interresting !!
many characterzz
continue soon plz

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missof77

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Posted: 17 years ago

neevfan: it's quite good !!
shuruwaat achi thi lekin apne lafzon ko zara thik likho gi to thik hai !!
otherwise kahani achi shuru ki hai tumne !!
well done !!
continue soonnnnnnnnn !!

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Posted: 17 years ago

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jalak-ji : thakxx for the comments main jaanti houn ke kahani funny hai aur interresting bhi

missof77: thankx for the comments kahani mein maine bohot khalti ki hai mera paas jab time hoga main thik kardoo gi

Edited by neevfan - 17 years ago