FF:Thumara Pyaar~part 13-pg26(July 9th)

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Hi everyone. It has been a long time I haven't came on IF' I was really busy with schoolwork etc'. I know I still have to comment on a lot FF's'but I thought why not start my own' I had story in my mind so here I go' O by the way this is my first ff. and I am not a talented writer like all of you here. So plz forgive me if I have any grammar/spelling mistakes.


The soft wind whispered in her ear'whispering his name over and over again .She covered her ears trying to keep all the outside voices out of her mind' but gave up after concluding that she will remember him'till death and that was one fact that she couldn't deny. The honey brown eyes flashed through her mind when she closed her eyes and they jerked open when he was about to come into a clear view'. how she wanted to go to him'meet him'to tell him to get lost'to stop haunting her dreams'stop making her feel restless during nights'stop making her fell his presence in her surroundings. But she knew he would have no clue what she was talking about 'he probably didn't even know if she was still living'he probably is already married to his love'after she left'and it hurted when she thought about she wasn't the one he loved' she swore in her mind cursing herself'for believing him when he told her he loved her'she knew she took the right step'to leave him when she figured out he had only used her'used her so he can live a safe life with his love. But then why did she feel a trace of love that night'No it can't be love she said it aloud to make that statement confirmed'she looked at the open to find sunlight. But was disappointed to see the sky clouded with black wispy clouds'. She tried her best not to remember her past'but it was one of those days she remembered her past. The day she would remember the old Heer Maan'and how her life had changed 3 months ago.


i know this is very short.. but i will have longer parts as my story goes on...Plz comment/critize and tell me if I should continue or not!! And plz help me think of a name for my ff ..right now i am thinking of naming it Cursed..but if you hahve any better oned pz tell me.


PM list- Pg14


Index:

part 1... pg 1
part 2...pg 2
part 3... pg 3
part 4... pg 6
part 5... pg 7
part6 ...pg 8
part 7 ... pg 11
part8 ... pg 13
part9 ... pg17
Part 10... pg 21
Part 11.... pg 23
Part 12....pg 24
part 13...pg 26
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Posted: 17 years ago
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please continue...i wud love to read wat happened next where the story was really good.......
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story lines great do continue you will get more reders luv u n update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz waitingggggggggggggggg

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Originally posted by: liveurlyfe

please continue...i wud love to read wat happened next where the story was really good.......

THX soooo much your comment means a lot to me .. will try to update tom.
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Originally posted by: zaibun

story lines great do continue you will get more reders luv u n update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz waitingggggggggggggggg

Thanks Zaibun for the sweet comment... i hope i get more readers!!!
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Heyy iqra!!! nice part!!! i really liked it, and its very interesting!!! plz continue soon!!!

Garima
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Great start.... looking forward to it! Please continue soon...

Love
Mickey P
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Originally posted by: srklover93

Heyy iqra!!! nice part!!! i really liked it, and its very interesting!!! plz continue soon!!!

Garima

Thanks Garima for the lovely reply..i thought i shouldn't continue ..but now i will...sooo stay tuned😃!!
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Originally posted by: Mp_Desigirl

Great start.... looking forward to it! Please continue soon...

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Mickey P

thanks!!!.. will continue soon😃
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hey, sounds interesting..do continue..and cant wait for the next part.. take care, and update soon.
~nikki😳

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