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Posted: 17 years ago
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really cute update!! nice song!! oh no!! i just hope it was amar who took divz's hand and not sam-the-rat!!! update when ya can plz, can't wait to see what happens
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Posted: 17 years ago
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COOL

GREAT
CONT SOON
TAKE UR TIME
SEE YAA
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: bmtdluver

really cute update!! nice song!! oh no!! i just hope it was amar who took divz's hand and not sam-the-rat!!! update when ya can plz, can't wait to see what happens

thank you honey............glad u liked it.......well read the update...😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Monu_

COOL

GREAT
CONT SOON
TAKE UR TIME
SEE YAA

thanks da....well i updated
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Monu_

COOL

GREAT
CONT SOON
TAKE UR TIME
SEE YAA

thanks yaar monu..........well hw r you....did ya like ma new ff..........
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76

part 12

yup it was amar
"amar where are you taking me"divya asked..."shh....i want to start my new year alone with you nt out there with a 100 people....cme na" amar replied
they reached the open terrace....it was really cold out there...."oh my god its so cold amar......"divya said then only she felt amars hand moving her hair and she felt a chain slid on her neck it had alocket designed by stones in which AD was written...it came to her it ws the same thing she saw in the shop when she and amar went to buy the ring....
"amar....thank you so much...its so nice" she turned and said...
amar was looking at her flashing his famous smile..."well its time i receive something more than a thank you"
he moved close to her and held her close to him.....she ws also excpecting it to happen they were inches away......she slowly closed her eyes...."divya"amar called...she opened her eyes and looked straight athis eyes.."happy new year"he told and caught her lips...the moment their lips touched all around fire crackers sounded....but both were not aware of it
divyta was in some sort of ecstacy....an ecstacy oly a first kiss can give.....after which seemed like eternity they broke away....she blushing like anything and was goin to run away when amar pulled her once more into a kiss.....after it he whispered in her ears.."u become more irresistable when you blush you know..."......she smiled and ran down amar folwoed her
now we can see a person coming out from behind the pipes which were in the corner and it was
samrat
it was the day of rithimas mehendi....all were very eager for it
amar ws wearing a sherwani ....this one and he looked hot as usual
and divya wore this saree and she looked so good that amar had time for nothing else than staring at her
they were having so much fun that nite....they all were sitting in the downstir hall....all there college mates were there....divya got a call and she went out coze it was not being clear.....amar was talking to mohit when a voice came
"hi guys amar....congrats u won the bet dude"it was samrat
"oh thanks"amar said wanting to avoid him
"bet ....what bet" rithima asked..."tell her buddy"samrat said with a curious expression
nearly everyone was listening
"oh...well i betted with him that i willl make divya say i love you before the new year eve and kiss her and if i fail i will drop her to hs house for one nite"amar said casually
"amar..."rithima called softly
"i know ritz dont start on that"amar said "no...."she eyed to turn back
divya ws standing there with a shocked expression and her tears flowing..............
Edited by ri19 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sorry guys yeh tho hona hi tha.....and no updates till 19 th ok sorry........got the dumb xams...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks yaar monu..........well hw r you....did ya like ma new ff..........
HI RIII ...IM FINE THANKS!!
YA OF COURSE I LIKE IT YAAR!!
AND UPDT 12 WAS GREAT!!!
CONT SOON
AND DONT WORRY
TAKE UR TIME
AND BEST OF LUCK WITH XAMS!!
SEE YAAA
LOVE UUU
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79
Wow good job!!

awww... poor divya, i feel so bad for her :(
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww love your FF its GREAT
please conitnue soonn

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