fantastic parts imane.
Heres mine
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When Muskaan dint feel his warmth...or him responding she broke and looked at him..
Muskaan-Rahul...main hoon..muskaan..
Rahul-Tum yahan kya kar rahi hoon muskaan???
Muskaan was shocked....he had asked her that so seriously..
Muskaan-RAhul...main pagloon ki tarah sab kuch chodh chadh kar yahan aayi hoon.....aur tu hain ki..
Rahul just looked elsewhere..
Muskaan-Rahul..kya in 4 saloon main hamara rishta badal gaya hain???
RAhul-Kis rishtey ki baat kar rahi hoon tum muskaan?....hamrey bich koi rishta nahi tha..
Tears rolled down her face..
Muskaan-Koi rishta nahi tha rahul???
Rahul just started walking..
Muskaan was completely shattered.....she had left everything...for seeing all this??
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Rahul went into his cabin and sat down...he fell on the chair with a thud..
Rahul-Kyun ho raha hain yeh sab mere saath??.....kya kabhi main apney pyaar ko nahi paa paonga.....
Tears rolled down his face..
Rahul-I m sorry muskaan...tera dil dukhaney ke liye i am sorry..lekin main kya karta...koi aur rasta nahi hain mere pass!!
They both were shattered and sad for different reasons...its so right ...love makes us do things we never imagine!!
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had to take it this way..othrwise it wld end very fast na....umm i dunno...,,,its all on the nxt person who ryts!!..lol
tina!!