New FF: You're my love Part 8 PG 23 11/03/09 - Page 12

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey
fantastic update!loved
heer and prem scene was great
what meher is going to do??
cntn soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
hiya khushi sorry sorry sorry for not commenting of part 4 i thort i had done so im reallly sorry 😳
part 4
it was awesome just one complaint why didnt prem kiss heer i mean her hand of course lol
Prem is such a HOT gentleman lol
aw i really lyked the part about him saying to himself never in his life hed take advantage- why arent there men like him
heer and shy? he thought that made me laugh
heer room- aw bless him he felt gulity it wasnt even his fault i felt heer was bit mean to prem but then i felt for her when she realised her fault
meher and veera scene was really nyc and they were making fun of preet how mean but it was funny
overall i really liked it it was really good that they are close friends and
i like it that veera knows mehar upto summat before her doing it
well that was long hope you stiil got energy for my comments on part 5 if not i advise you to stop reading lol
part 5 i loved it it was fantastic
loved the veera- meher and preet scene
preet is so funny
ohh i so wanted to know what mehar has done that preet will remember his whole lyf
premeer-
im happy that Heer came to say sorry good for her lol
and she admitted that its not his fault but why she doent want to get married to him i dont know maybe she fell and something happened to her brain otherwise who would say no to Prem 😍
i lyked that way she said sorry and called him stubborn
made match in heaven
for the first time she looked into his eyes and notice what they look lyk
see we miss a lot when were fighting na? lol
and when she was wondering about his lips and prem understanding was classic i loved it
i really loved their re-introduction
it was sweet
now i hope they say yes to the marriage and that they dont start fighting agen
ok my essay's finished you can breath a sigh of relief lol
it was fantastic and cant wait for next update
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Posted: 17 years ago
great luved it u r so creative plz update
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Posted: 17 years ago
Good Evening everyone!!! Hope you are all feeling great and ready for another update...now i no i havnt replied bak to all your posts but dont worry i will soon do that too...okay i wnt talk 2 much...enjoy...next updt tuesday.....

Recap:

"I am Heer...Heer Mann" She told him. Their hands met and the fingers wrapped around each others.

Sometimes in this world, it takes a whole lifetime to understand someone and sometimes a few meetings are enough to bring the two closer together.


Part 6:
"So...ummm" Prem began, putting his hands into his pocket. Prem had been friends with many girls before, but never before today had he been so speechless. He stood there wondering what he should say to her.
"umm..I think i better leave now I have some work to do in the kitchen" Heer smiled. She had realised that he was lost for words and she also knew that she herself didn't have anything to say to him, so she concluded that it was now better to leave than to get into another arguement with him.
As she began turning around, the table Prem had kept his laptop on came in her way. OH CRAP she muttered as she lost her balance, closed her eyes...but before she could feel the full blow of the fall someone caught her. His hands wrapped around her waist whilst her hands grabbed his shoulders. His eyes were fixed on her, admiring the simplicity and innocence of her face. No make-up yet the most beautiful girl he'd seen in his life. Getting carried away in the moment he bought his face closer to her right ear.
"Beautiful" He whispered in her ear. She suddenly realised what had happened and opened her eyes with a shock. Finding Prem so close to her made her knees feel weak....There wasnt much she could do...she knew she had to get away from him yet she couldn't...His eyes looked at hers as if He knew what she was thinking...

"PREMMM....Prem woh mein..." Lalit came walked into the living room. Seeing Heer in Prem's arms he stopped in his track.
Both Prem and Heer looked up. In his hestitation Prem let go off heer and she landed on the floor with a *THUDD*.
Lalit came running over to Heer "tum thik toh ho na Heer beta".

"Sorry Heer..woh Mein" Prem apologised as he helped her sit on the sofa.
"It's okay..I'm fine" She assured him pressing her leg gently with her hand.
"Yaha ho kya raha tha?" Lalit asked Prem raising his eyebrow.
"woh..woh" Heer swallowed hard as no words came out of her mouth.
"Dad...woh..kya huwa ki..ki..Heer is table se takra gayi aur girne wali thi...toh maine ause girne se bacha liya...jaisa aap soch rahe hai waisa kuch bhi nahi hai.."Prem claimed.
"accha?" Lalit laughed.
"Ji...Prem thik keh raha hai" Heer added helping Prem prove himself.
"Thik hai...tum kehti ho toh..it must have been like that" Lalit got up from the sofa. "Prem I need to talk to you. It's important"
"Ji dad..heer you sure you're fine?" Prem questioned heer.
"Yeah I'm fine you go with your dad" She replied reassuringly. What does he want to talk to Prem about? Marriage? Nah he may simply want to talk about work or something..She shook her head...tum bhi na Heer kuch bhi soch ti rehti ho...

Just then Meher and Veera walked in. Ofcourse they had gone shopping again. This is the fourth day in a row. What is up with them? Heer smiled to herself as she saw the number of bags Veera and Meher were holding.

"OMG...How many times do you go shopping in a week" Heer chuckled helping them bring the bags in.

"Until we don't get bored" Veera winked at Heer.

"Well then it seems like all the shops around the area are going to close as you're going to have more stock than them" Heer sighed.

"She's right you know...we can open our own shop...I mean that's how much shopping we've done" Meher nudged Veera who was busy taking the clothes out to show Heer. Just then Preet entered and stood at the main door.

The three girls couldn't help but laugh at the state he was in.

"Prr...prree...pr...preeett...wh..what" Heer managed to say a few words in between her laughter.

"Haso...haso...jitna chahe haslo mujh par..." He was frustrated.

Heer tried to stop her laugh as she knew what he must be feeling..but the state he was as amusing as any bollywood comedy film.

"Preet...what happened to you..yeh kisne kiya?" Heer finally managed to control her laughter.

"Woh mein...I had gone on a date with Goldie...and I have no idea how...pata nahi kaise Sonia, Tanya, Meera, Ruby,Geeta, sweety, honey, rosy, smita, gurmeet, gunjan aur Pinky waha aa pohuchi" He counted the names of all the girls, with his fingers, screwed his face up and itched his cheek. A tomato peel fell down from his cheek. "And you can all imagine what would have happened next" He sighed staring at the piece of salad in his hand

"Aur tum wendy koh bhul ga.." Veera's face lit up instantly, but not for long as she had soon realized what she had said.

"Ha?aur wendy bhi?.ek min..ek min..ek min?how did you know that wendy was ther too"Preet walked towards Veera and Meher giving them a Caught-You look.

"who?" Meher's voice trailed off?..
Do let me know what you thought....
Edited by Khushi34 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg dat was fab luved evey bit of it
cant wait for da next and thanx for updating i was really bord
thnx again
tc
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey!
That was an awesome update!
Preet must of got a bashig from those girls...lol!
Can't wait till the next update!
xXx
Sunayna
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Posted: 17 years ago
fantastic update
tooo good
i can imagine the preet scene
loved it

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey
that was great. so preet caught meher and veera....cant wait to see what he does to them. update soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi there!!!... that was an awesome update loved it!!!!....the premeer scene as sooo cute!!!!...wish i was there when preet was whining... plz continue soon!!! will be waiting!!!!

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