New FF: You're my love Part 8 PG 23 11/03/09

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Part 1 - Page 1
Part 2A - Page 4
Part 2B - Page 6
Part 3 - Page 8
Part 4- Page 11
Part 5 - Page 14
Part 6 - Page 16
Part 7 - Page 19
Part 8 - Page 23
Hello Everyone!!!! Iv been reading many FF's lately and they inspired me to write my own. I know i am not that great of a writer but ill try my best. Please leave comments on whether the parts are good or bad. They'll help me a great deal. I'll post parts every thuesday, friday and sundays. But as i have exams next week the next part will be posted on saturday. Hope you enjoy!!!

"Yeah, I've reached India. No I haven't reached home yet" Prem replied getting annoyed with the person on the other side. "You ask too many questions Yash" He said feeling the anger rise to a point he didn't want it to reach. Taking a deep breath he steered right, on to the main road. Looking at the map he realised he was on the wrong road again. He took a U-turn only to realise he was back to where he started.

"Yeah, I'm lost. Does that make you happy?" He sped down the road losing his temper. "No go on laugh at me "He continued to take his anger out on yash. "God I can't believe.....WATCH ITTT" He screamed as he braked as hard as his legs would allow him while his hands steered the wheel in an unfashionable pattern. The car swirled and came to a halt. Out of breath and in shock he picked up his phone "I'll call you back" Prem said and disconnected the call, not waiting for Yash to say bye.

"Are you blind? Or just want to commit suicide. Can't you see the car coming down the god damn road?"

"That's what I'm supposed to ask you. Are you blind? Can't you see me walking?" The girl replied.

"For your kind information Miss BLIND, the government has made footpaths" Prem said angrily, cursing his bad luck.

"Ohh, so now you're going to teach me where to walk and where not to walk huh. What do you think of yourself" the girl questioned in an agitated voice.

"Look I'm not in the mood for all this..." He hadn't completed his sentence when his phone began to ring. "Hello" He picked the call up. Turning his back to the girl he said "Mom, yeah I've reached. Yes mom the flight was good" A smile appeared on his face that took away all the stress he had been through all day, from the delay of the flight to the loss of the luggage and finally from getting lost to nearly getting crashed. Gayatri was prem's calming remedy. Talking to her made him calm and peaceful. He didn't know why it happened but knew that it was his mother's love that did the trick.

The listened intently to the conversation and figured out that he was lost. This pleased her greatly as she thought to herself that he deserved it. Mujhse panga leta hai? Heer se? She thought to herself.

Finishing his conversation Prem turned around to face the girl. For the first time he realised how beautiful she was. She was wearing a plane pink salwaar kameez that clung to her beautiful figure perfectly. Her long hair was open and down to her waist whilst those eyes were the most innocently adorable eyes he'd ever seen. Prem stared at her completely taken back by the fact that how such an innocent face hid someone as arrogant as her."Excuse me" He came back to the real world hearing her voice.

"Look just apologize okay" She said. A confused Prem stood there. "What for?"

"What for? You nearly killed me and drove over me. After all that you're asking me what for"

"Listen you. I saved you. If it wasn't for me braking on time then you would've got us both killed."

Heer pointed a finger at him. "I know guys like you very well. You just think you're all that because you've got the most expensive cars and you think that you can break the law by driving over the speed limit. Do you think you'll never get caught? Let me..."

"Woaahh..Hold on I think you have this really bad habit of jumping to conclusions" Prem taunted her.

That's it he's crossing his limits. What does he think of himself? Who is he anyway? The son of some rich and selfish man who taught this guy no manners on how to talk to a lady. Heer thought to herself.

Coming out of her thoughts Heer just turned around and left shouting at the top of her voice. "You're such a waste of time. I can't believe i just wasted 15 minutes of my life on you".

Smiling to himself at her childishness he said "You're Welcome".

Love,
KHUSHBU
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Posted: 17 years ago
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first one to reply yeeahh
Khushi34 that was fantastic i
reali enjoyed reading it
premeer are so cute
it shows that heer isnt the shy type in ur FF thats gr8
cant wait for next chapter👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi Khushbu,

Its really nice and please continue

Mithiya
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi thts a real nice start....cnt wait for the next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey
interesting very nice
do cont soon...
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hey khushbu,

great start....i like it....lol...i loved the little fight between prem and heer..it was cute...wonder wats gonna happen next!!! cant wait till your next update!!!!

Garima
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikki786

first one to reply yeeahh

Khushi34 that was fantastic i
reali enjoyed reading it
premeer are so cute
it shows that heer isnt the shy type in ur FF thats gr8
cant wait for next chapter👏

Hi! nikki...yeaah you're the first one to reply.. thanx a lot 4 replying..i am glad you liked it and thought that premeer are cute....this part shows that heer isnt the shy types but you'll have to wait to find out how many different sides this heer has...i've nearly done the next update..i think ill post it on tuesday instead of saturday...thanx again. 😊😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: mithalio

Hi Khushbu,

Its really nice and please continue

Mithiya

Hey mithiya...i am really happy that you found this first part enjoyable to read...thank you for commenting...ill update soon. 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: miss_hyper

hi thts a real nice start....cnt wait for the next part

Hello miss_hyper. Thank you for replying😊. Its feels nice to no that you liked it...you wnt have to w8 long as ill be updating soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooji123456789

hey
interesting very nice
do cont soon...

Hi there...glad you found this part interesting..i hope i can make the others interesting too. Thanx 4 replying though...😊😃 YOu baught a smile to my face
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