FF Murder Mystery Ch 3: Pg 14 Jan 29 - Page 12

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

*poses* Just don't expect a long comment yeah? ---Aww... Atleast you commented, doesn't matter if its long. 😳

*edited*

I came back! *dances* ---Don't trip. 😆 lol. Can you believe I had forgotten that I had read the update, and reserved a spot? Yes, you can? You know me too well.. 😆 ---Yea, i'm pretty sure I can. 😆

Aw, poor Rinki, she's traumatised by something that happened to her as a kid, and she doesn't even remember what! I'm guessing the case is going to bring some more buried memories up? Is it connected to her in anyway? ---Yea, its connected to her. Its a big mystery, but its going to be dug up. And somehow even be a key peice to this case, if I can make it one. 😆

And Preet is so shweet! He followed her to make sure she was okay. *sigh* Sho shweet their relationship. ---I know... You gotts love Prat Vixen. 😍

Entry of Suki and Keerti! *shocked muh (but in a good way)* So.. Suki with Shabd? 😉 And Keerti with Sujal (unless there's Kashish---Sujals married to her. You'll know more, Rinki's cats gonna be entry maaring with Kashish later on. Muahah... and Shubankar as well 😆) ---You guys really can't think of anything but couples can you? *shakes head* Can't we just leave them all single? 🤔 Loved the update! ---Thanks! Glad you liked it....

Love,

Radz
---luv ya too radz
kimz

Originally posted by: shabo24

You don't deserve me Kimz, ---don't i? 🤔 see I am writing a comment straight away! Too cool naa? ---Stop mocking me. 😆 I give long comments, don't you love them? 😈😆

PART NUMBER THREE IS HERE!I am really loving the way this story is shaping up and the best thing about it, is that from, through your writing you can tell how much you think about it and how much effort you put into it! *claps* ---*blushes and runs* Thank youuu... *twirls 'round like a shy lil girl*

aha loved how instead of Rinki, you used Rubina in the "flashback" It adds a sense of "mystery" And then ommg it sounds so heart wrenching, whatever Rinki went thought. Becacari =[ ---Oooh! You caught that! Well i wasn't trying to make it more mystery like, but it actually has something to do with Rinki. Lets just say she doesn't liked to be called Rubina. Yeaa... poor poor Rinki. *sigh*

omgg loved the way Preet "maanoued" Rinki! Sach mein ese lardke hai kya? ---Haan.... *blushes* Ahmed. *if you say Ahmed I will kill you ---Oops. Tehehehe... * But so sweet, how she compltly unburdened herself because she knows she can trust him! *sigh* ---Yeaa! You gotta love Prat-Vixen. *sighs with Shabz*

Ohh Keerti and Sukhi here too? ---Yea. 😆 PLEASE I BEG YOU DO NOT BRING ARMAAN HERE! Hate him so much.....grr.....🤬 ---What? Really? *shocked muh* You're the first one that's ever said that!! --- woww... I'm still in shock. BUt don't worry, Armi aint coming here. Sukhi's gonna be single. 😆Suri wanna-be....anyway ohohHOHOH! Bring TANDON!☺️ ---You like tandon better? OMG! *high-five* Mee tooo!

The case is getting more and more stranger. Can't wait till the next update! ---It'll all start making sense, hopfully. 😆 But I'm glad you like it, I'll try to continue soon. 😳

--shabz
---luv ya shabz
kimz

Originally posted by: firza

i loved it!! plz continue soon...it keeps getting interesting...

Originally posted by: kimmu