FF-Jab SD Met!! part 24 pg.57 5/23

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bmtdluver

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey Everyone!! This is an ff by Priya(sharad+divz4evr) and me- credit goes to Priya, it was her idea, she is the main brains behind this ff. This is gonna be about Sharad and Div(although u could tell by the title)

sharad- The popular, "cool" guy of college. Is a total flirt

divyanka- arrogant, but nice girl. Had a boyfriend, but broke up with him because she went to India. Hates guys.

ranbir- Divyanka's former boyfriend. Dumped Divya because he didn't want a long distance relationship.

Rimi- Divyanka's best friend in India, they are bffs. She is sweet and outgoing, loves dressing up.

Katrina- Div's so-called friend from New York. She was only friends with div to get closer to Ranbir

Arun: Divya's best friend since high school, he's known her for 6 years.

Sameer: Rimi's bf

Will add more details and pics as story progresses. I hope you guys will like the ff!!

previous and still being written ffs and ss by us.

by priya(sharad+divz4evr)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/banoo-main-teri-dulhann/1022547/ff-sucha-pyaar-note-page-56 -her first FF.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/banoo-main-teri-dulhann/1119903/ss-kismat-har-janam-ki-update-page-5- her current SS.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/banoo-main-teri-dulhann/1080516/ff-is-this-love-upd-pt-32a-pg-76 -her current FF(aside from this)

by me, radhika

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/banoo-main-teri-dulhann/1076588/ff-hatred-or-love-update-p-110-12-30-09- my first and only ff (aside from this)

part 1- pg.1

part 2- pg.2

part 3- pg.4

part 4- pg.12

part 5- pg.13

part 6- pg. 15

part 7- pg.17

part 8- pg. 19

part 9- pg. 20

part 10-pg.22

part 11-pg.24

part 12- pg.28

part 13-pg.29

part 14- pg.34

part 15-pg.35

part 16-pg.38

part 17-pg.41

part 18-pg.42

part 19-pg.44

part 20-pg.48

part 21-pg.50

part 22-pg.52

part 23-pg.55

part 24-pg.57

Edited by bmtdluver - 16 years ago

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Bhoo

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Posted: 17 years ago

Continue Soon!!!! I think that Sharad needs to wear a shirt like Ranbir is wearing in that picture

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priya

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Posted: 17 years ago

GR8 pics Radhika!! I'll Pm u when I finish the update

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priya

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Posted: 17 years ago

This one will be in Divya's point of view.

Part 1:

"Ranbir...I can convince Mom to come back! I mean honestly I'm Divyanka! Diva! I can't survive there...?" I said, a ray of hope in my voice. I've been with this guy for a year..he can't do this to me! "Divya..Listen to me. You there in India...me here...this CLEARLY isn't going to work!" He replied. "Was this year...a waste? Ranbir if you really loved me....could you just end...us this way?" I tried to hide the tears that were clogging up in my throat, but it seemed impossible. "Divyanka...why aren't you getting me?" I leaned my head against my headboard. Why was this so hard? And WHY was it happening to ME? What did I ever do to anyone?! "Ranbir...I'll see you tomorrow."

I shut my phone and put it on the night table. The tears were just flowing out of my eyes. And I couldn't stop them. I grabbed my pillow tight. Mom knocked on my door. "Divyanka? Can I come in?" She asked. "No! Leave me alone.." I said, trying to seem tough, but...as usual it didn't work. Mom walked in, and took a seat on the bed. "Divya...it won't be that bad! Besides, you only have one more year of college! What's one year going to do to you?" She said, and obviously as if she knew what I was going through. Uhmm..not! "So you want me to leave all my friends...and..." my voice trailed off. It was kind of awkward talking to my mother about this. "Ranbir right? Honey...you're first relationship isn't always going to be your last. That's life!" Mom said.

"Mom can you just let me be...?" I didn't want to discuss this any farther. As if moving to India wasn't enough, my mother talking to me about relationships? Good one. Atleast...hopefully I would enjoy tomorrow. If I could live it down that is. Omg...I just thought of the worst thing...what if that stupid Amisha tries flirting with Ranbir? Oh god...and Ranbir with someone else? How will I get over him? I tried to put myself to sleep in this huge mess, and eventually, it worked.

It was the next morning, and I went through my closet. I had to look good on my last day! I pulled out my long gray three quarter sleeve sweater, and a pair of black anklet tights. With my silver jeweled flats. "This should do the trick." I said. Once I was dressed, there was my hair to worry about. I pulled out my curling iron, and went with that. I drived over to college, and headed to the canteen. Ranbir was obviously going to already be there. I spotted him with some other friends, and I walked over to them. Ranbir got up, and I pecked his cheek. "Awww!!!" said Katrina. "Diva we're all going to miss you. ALOT." Katrina got up and gave me a huge hug. I wiped a tear. "Hey pagli...we still have the internet right? Don't you dare cry!" Katrina said, hugging me tightly again. Just then, Riya pulled on Katrina's arm, and they made some signals with their eyes. "Oh um you an Ranbir go ahead somewhere else! We're going to..get going." Riya said, and the two rushed away to their lockers.

I looked at Ranbir, and we had an eyelock. We held hands, and went outside, near the entrance, and that's basically where all the couples hung out. We went to our spot. "How am I going to be able to forget you?" Ranbir asked me. "Don't make it harder for me to leave...it's already so difficult!" I said, trying not to cry once again. "This...might be our last kiss." Ranbir said. I frowned my brows. "But you didn't even..." He grabbed my face....and all the memories flashed through my head. Why was love so...so...hard? When he released, it was just so hard...I buried my face in his shirt, letting out a river, and he didn't seem to care I was ruining his shirt.

When he managed to pull me off, we went to my locker. "Why? Why is this happening...with us? Why is there always so much sacrifice in love?" I asked him. He put a hand in his pocket, and shrugged. "There are some things that nobody knows." He replied. I looked at him, up and down. Why was he just so....adorable! I mean it would have made things way easier if he was ugly or something...but he's not that either! "Ranbir...you just had to wear black today didn't you? And you know how much I love you in that color!" I asked. "I thought....I should dress the way you liked...I'm sorry.." He replied, the sadness in his voice was clear. "No no I didn't mean it that way....you're too sweet..." I said. The bell rang, and a hugged him, while we went our seperate ways.

It was the end of the day, and I was looking everywhere for Ranbir. Finally I saw him, already waiting at my car, along with Katrina, Riya, and Arun, our little gang. I gave Katrina and Riya hugs and kisses, and we remembered the good old days. And then I gave Arun a huge hug. He was my best friend since freshman year in high school. We did our special handshake, which was finally revealed to everyone; since all this time we were keeping it a secret. Then me and Ranbir got in the car, and drove to my house. When he stopped the car, I looked at him. "Bye Ranbir. And before I go...I don't ever want you to feel guilty dating anyone else, ever." I said. "Divyanka....you're saying this? I mean how?" He asked. "I know how it's going to be. Really weird." I said, not believing that those words came out my mouth. "Divyanka, I'll never forget you. My first true love." I let go of Ranbir's hand, and left to the taxi, heading to the airport...going to my new life.

Precap: Divya gets off the plane and sees her new house.

Sorry it was so short!! Take it away Radhika! Looking forward to your update!

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Sadaf

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Posted: 17 years ago

lol...nice update can't wait till the next one..

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bmtdluver

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Posted: 17 years ago

awesome update, i'll continue soon, but itz not gonna be as good as yours!!

really nice, it was amazing how you potrayed her feelings!!

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Izzah

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Posted: 17 years ago

thumbs up to u dude!!!!! that rocked!!!!! u r an awesome writer!!!!! keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!

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bmtdluver

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Posted: 17 years ago

The first one was in Div's POV and this one will be in Sharad's POV. It is probably not going to be half as good, but i'll give it a shot.

Part 2

AAAAAAAH!!(relaxingly) Last day of school before break, and then parties, here I come!! Chilling at the disco, with girls, relaxing at the beach, I was going to enjoy myself!! I feel bad for all those geeks though, no school for them, boo-hoo!! Haa!! What losers!! I stepped in the building, and a mob of girls came.

"Hey Sharad!!"

"Hey, hows it going??" They giggled. I had to admit, they did look really cute in their miniskirts and halter top!! They were so easy to manipulate!! I saw Sheena walk by and winked at her. She was so surprised, she walked into a pole!! What an idiot, no wonder she is still single. Well, i am single right now, but that is because i choose to. Otherwise, I'd be stuck being a girl's puppy dog, and dance at her every motion. Seriously, a guy needs his freedom!! I walked to class, but stopped to chit-chat on the way. I entered the classroom like what, half an hour late and Mrs. Chadda, our teacher yelled at me!! I mean, can you believe that?? Only half an hour, that's like a record early!! She could have atleast congratulated me!!

"Mr. Sharad!! I suppose you didn't have time to i dont know, join us on time??"

Thanks for understanding me!! Yeah, this class is boring, and I stopped to chat with some chicks."

"Excuse me!!!!(She started to turn red) THat's it!!"

"Relax Mrs. Chadda!! Take a chill pill, and a piece of advice, don't eat the chilli!! Otherwise next thing you know, steam will come out of your mouth!!"

I heard everyone snicker, and i'm guessing Mrs. Chadda did too, because then she said, "Thank you for entertaining us, now i hope you still have the humour left to entertain yourself in DETENTION!!!"

Sheeesh!! What was her problem!! Oh well, not like i was going to stay in detention. I devised a plan and then smirked. After class, i asked Nandu a small favor. He was so surprised i actually talked to him, and gave him a clap on the back and acted like he was so cool, he was ready to do anything!! I gave him the spare clothes i had, my cool clothes, and he changed out of his vest, dress pants and shoes, and substituted his glasses for my sunglasses. Time for phase 2. I had a friend look at Mrs.Chadda's glasses and "accidently" drop them. So, Mrs. Chadda couldn't see and I had a fake substitute. Perfect!! Now, all i had to do was run!! I ran out of school and was free. I jumped into my red convertable and drvove to Sanvi's party!! PARTY TIME!!!!

"Whooooooooohoooooooooooo!!!"

I reached the disco and danced, drunk, and had fun. I hung out all night with so many girls, i couldn't even count. Even my pal's girlfriends, but seriously who cares?? Tonight was the night to party and let yourself loose. And i mean, who can possibly resist mean?? I am the hottest, coolest, most out-going, popular kid in school. People are my puppets, they will do anything to be in the "in" crowd with me. Everyone wishes they were in my shoes, it is kind of pathetic, I mean i swear, half of the kids in my school worship the ground i walk!! But that does come in handy, especially on days like this. But i don't get what Mrs. Chadda's problem was. She obviously doesn't realize i have a reputation to maintain. But whatever, this is so relaxing!! This was going to be one fun night, not just night, life!! My life is perfect, and there is no special girl, which is even better, so i am free from every relationship. I smiled to myself and though, free!! Shows what little i know!!

I know, it wasn't great, nowhere near Priya's update, but i tried. Enjoy!!

Edited by bmtdluver - 17 years ago

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Aditi

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Posted: 17 years ago

That was so cute and detailed. I almost started crying. True, I also love how you portrayed her feelings so wonderfully. Hats off to you Priya. Can't wait for the next update, Radhika! Keep up the good work! Hopefully, Divyanka will find her true love, Sharad, soon!

Aditi 😊

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Aditi

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Sorry, when I was writing my first post, I didn't notice you already updated. Your update was awesome, loved the way you portrayed Sharad - a total flirt! Can't wait for Divyanka and Sharad to meet! Keep up the good work!

Aditi 😊

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