[FF]~** Dor**~ (PART 26 updated- Pg:39 june 26th)

Hey guyz this is mu very first fan fic hope u will like it i will to do my best...... please do comment and tell me if i need sum improvement.........

for the those who started reading my ff a bit late as it does not has a definite start just to giv u guys a heads up from where did i begin this story i will briefly explain it........... ok so here it goes

i started my ff after wen heer came home after seein gaurav at the shiv mandir where he clicks pictures of her ........... she follows him but cant do so all the way as RR's car comes in between and she faints but fortunately she has the KBC card of gaurav sharma........ as she faints RR takes her to his place and then when in the mornin she goes to j-zoo and wanted to tell bauji that she had seen prem stupid meher buts in and says that u hav no respect left wat so ever for this house and that u r still a part of this house so it will b better that she keeps the respect of at least lallu as he is old and all

so i comtinued after that epi wen meher said all that crap to heer so now heer is heading towards her room

HEER (to herself) in her head: ' aisa kyun hota hai prem ki jabhi kisi mod pe aisa lagta hai ki tum mujhe mil gaye kudrat mujhe tumse alag kyun kar deti hai............. hamesha pyaar karne walon ke darmiyan hi dooriyan kyun aa jaati hain................ pichli baar jab tum mujhe mile the to maine tumhe paa kar kho diya par is baar main tumhe kho kar paungi' (she looks at the card that she got KBC)'.

Then she is thinking about the stuff that meher said and thinking that meher u too thaught so lowly about me i never expected u my own sis to think that way but nevertheless i kno it is also my fault that i have been tryin to generate hatred towards me but i thaught sumwhere deep down that u might trust me................

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Here preet is thinking that anything can happen but heer bhabhi cant go so evil and cannot at any cost torture the juneja khandan and bauji willingly........... then he suddenly remembers that heer was tryin to tell sumthin to bauji but thanks to meher that she was not able to say nything.........

Preet ( to himself )' heer bhabhi se poochna hi hoga ki akhir baat kya hai.......... akhir wo ye sab kyun kar rahi hain............... aur wo bauji ko kya batana chahit thi........'

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Now we have gaurav starin at heer's pic ( srry guys hav to use gaurav or esle i wont b able to show the transformation ).......

GAURAV ( to himself) : lookin at the pic ' mujhe tum itni jaani pehachani si kyun lagti ho............. mujhe tumhe wahaan aisse chod ke aane pe dukh kyun ho raha hai............. kyun is dil pe itna bada bojh hai ki maine tumhare saath galat kiya............... kyun mujhe aisa lagta hai ki kuch hai hamare beech ............. kyun aisa lagta hai ki hum ek hi dor ke do sire hain kyun............' (flash bak of the mannat dhaga)

And now cums stupid sam (srry guyz i do hat eher but as she is in the show i will just include her)

SAM: hi gaurav kya kar raha hai...........

GAURAV : ' use insaan ko yaad kar raha hoon jo unjaan ho kar bhi aisa lagta hai ki meri sason mein basa hua hai'

SAM : KYA!!!!!!!!!

GAURAV: kuch nahi sam tu bata tu yahan kya kar rahi hai tu abhi ja yahaan se mujhe bahut kaam hai main tujhse baad mein baat karta hoon...............

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Preet cums to heer's room knocks at the door............ heer wipes her tears.......

Preet is angry with her: ' bahut ho gaya bhabhi bahut sum li maine apki bakwas app sahayad sabko bevkoof bana sakti hain par mujhe nahin......... prem bhaiya bhale hi hamare beech nahin par unki soch ab bhi mere andar zinda hai aur mera dil jaanta hai ki aap aisa kuch kar hi nahi sakti hain........ aapki aankhon mein dikhta hain bhabhi ki aaj bhi aap is pariwaar ke liye haste haste apna sab kuch daav pe laga sakti hain.........'

Heer : kisns kahan tumse preet kisne ki prem ab is uniya mein nahi hai haan bolo kisne kahaa.........

Preet stunned by heer wrds................

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cuming up a nice heer prem scene in KBC preet with heer........... preet confronts prem

hope u guyz like it please do comment this my very first ever ff............... ur suggestions in the story are most welcum will post another part soon................. ohh and thanks for reading😊....................

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these are direct links of pages where various parts are posted so that u dunt have to go thru too much of trouble in finding them

PART 2: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528

PART 3:https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&TPN=2

PART 4:https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&TPN=3

PART 5: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&TPN=4

part 6 : https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&TPN=5

part 7 : https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&TPN=6

part 8: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&TPN=7&#19990842

part 9 : https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&TPN=8

part 10 : https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&TPN=11

part 11: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&TPN=12&#20188277

PART 12: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&TPN=14

PART 13 : https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&TPN=15&#20296740

PART 14 : https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&TPN=16

PART 15 (a): https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&TPN=18

PART 15(b) : https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&TPN=20

PART 16 : https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&TPN=21&#20815681

PART 17 : https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&TPN=24&#20959684

part 18 :https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&TPN=25&#21050813

part 19 :https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&TPN=27&#21074479

part 20 : https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&PID=21082973&#21082973

part 21: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&TPN=31

part 22 : https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&TPN=32&#21303793

part 23 : https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&TPN=34

part 24 :https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&TPN=36�

part 25 : https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&TPN=38&#22519520

part 26 : https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1113528&TPN=39&#22585066

HEY GUYS GLAD U LIKED FIRST PART HERE IS PART 2........ hope u will njoy...........

HEER : main ye keh rahin hoon preet ki prem zinda hai maine use khud dekha hai....... (lifting up her hand) chua hai............ mehsoos kiya hai........ us ehsaas ko mehsoos kiya hai..... usi jagah mehsoos kiya hai jahaan se hamari kahaani shuru hui thi.......... (holding preet by the shoulder) preet meri dhakan kabhi mujhse jhooth nahi bol sakti hain......... wo prem hi tha preet........... preet tumhe mujhpe yakeen karnahoga meri madad karni hogi..............

( kabhi khushi kabhi gham track playin at the background)........

Preet : (tears in his eyes slight smile on his face, stunned ).......bhabi ye aap kya.......... PB zinda.... par bhabhi

Heer : kuch mat bolo preet tum bas mere saath chalo..........

Lallu to ballu in his room : pata nahi hamari heer kis museebat mein phas gayi hai aur wo humein kuch batai kyun hai akhir aisi kya wajah hai............... then to gayatri --- gayatri maine kya kiya hai gayatri tumhi batao heer aisa kyun kar rahi hai.................

Gayatri (subconsciously); prem.......... prem ke liye............ prem ayega prem zaroor ayega........

HEER and PREET reach KBC

Heer runs inside preet follows callin heer .........

Heer frantically search for gaurav's cabin goes inside shouts prem prem but no response........ she cums out runs throughout the office shouting prem........... then she is dead tired and cries her heart out...... her head on preets shoulders........ preet consoles her and says chaliye bhabhi yahaan se chalet hain.......

As soon as they are about to leave heer feels sumthing......... preet says kya hua bhabi....... heer says preet wo yahin hai wo yahin hai preet and they show gaurav entering the KBC and heer has her back towards him she moving backwards (mohabbatein track playin)............. and as she goin backwards she collides........... the screen freezez for sumtime at preet's face............... preet wispers PB (everything else is silent)

And as heer turns the ho........ rabba track plays......... and then again prem gives that killing look to heer that he gave in the shiv mandir and they have an eye lonckin session yet again..... heer slowly puts her hand on gaurav's face tears dropping from her beautiful eyes and it is almost unbearable for prem to see her tears he takes a tear droplet and closes it in his fist and moves that hand close to his heart (same way old prem did)....... then he put his hand on her cheeks and heer closes her eyes and put her hand on his brings his hand close to her lips and kisses it and then she hugs him as if there is no tomoro as if doesn't want him to go nywhere as if she is afraid of loosin him again......... and gaurav's hands automatically are wrapped around her......... (and ishq hai valla is playin at the background)......

Gaurav to himself ' ye kya ho raha hai mujhe kyun main iski taraf yun khicha chala jaa raha hoon kyun mujhe bhi iske dard ka ehsaas hoo raha hai............. kyun aisa lag raha hai ki ab tak main adhoora tha andar se khokhla tha par is lamha is pal mein main poora ho gaya hoon.....'

Then in cums preet and as soon as heer detaches herself from gaurav preet hugs him and and say 'PB app kahan chale gaye the' (kabhi khushi kabhi gham track playin now)......

But then as preet detaches himself from gaurav it seems that he came into senses and then he says PB!!!!!! Who PB....