FF:Salaam-e-ishq...PART 12 updated on pg19

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey ppl ive read a lot of ff s nd i thot ki ill rite one myself.....sooooooo
plz comment nd tell me if i shud continue.......
its basically on mayur....as dey r my favourite couple!!!
but dis story is completely different frm d real story...............
Here r d characters:

NUPUR: A 20 year old , beautiful nd bubbly girl who talks too much........she has only one problem luck is never on her side.....frm d time she lost her parents wen she was 10 she grew up at her aunt's place where she never felt comfortable.........but now she is a top rj in Red FM.......😎

MAYANK : A 23 year old handsome business man who is too serious with his work......he doesnt have many friends nd he has dedicated his whole life to taking care of his brother......following his father's last wish...😕

RAHUL: He is a ver cute nd fun loving guy ........he loves his brother very much but is not interested in his family business........he is sweet nd can get people to do things for him with just a smile🥳

SONIA : She is Nupur's best friend......she also works at Red fm nd is an rj......she is pretty nd a gud frnd.......but shes got a lot of attitude nd does not get carried away easily to do nything......


plz comment nd tell me whether i shud continue.............

luv Ananya............

INDEX:
Part1 : pg 1

Part2:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1110785&TPN=2

Part3:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1110785&TPN=4

Part4:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1110785&TPN=4

Part5:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1110785&TPN=5

Part6:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1110785&TPN=6

Part7:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1110785&TPN=7

Part8:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1110785&TPN=9

Part9:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1110785&TPN=10

Part10:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1110785&PID=20561550&#20561550

Part11:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1110785&TPN=15

Part12:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1110785&PID=20944830&#20944830


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey pls continue. It really is a different type
of a story focusing on Mayur(i think).
Update soon waiting for it

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Posted: 17 years ago
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this sounds really ineteresting do continue!
luv
ash
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks alot guys.............i think ill post d first episode today itself.......ache kaam me der kis baat ki????
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OK...............MY FIRST EPISODE!!!!!

"gosh I am again late Mr.Singh is going to kill me"

20 year old Nupur thought as she searched her cupboard'

"man where are my clothes?"
Nupur was new in mumbai a simple girl from a small town

Nupur is someone who can't be considered lucky' destiny betrays her everytime she tries something new' at the age of 10' her mom and dad passed away! She grew up with her cousins at her aunt's house' she never felt comfortable there' and as she grew up she thought of moving to Mumbai and finally she did'

At present she works as a radio jocky' and Mr.Singh happens to be her 50 year old boss'

"What excuse do I give? I don't know why I wake up late every morning' gosh' should I tell him that? He is going to kick me out of the job as he hears this' Have to do something else'"
After reaching the radio station she heard familiar voices and saw known faces' all of them were trying to tell her something' but what?

"I am not someone who can read faces spit it out'. OH NO!!!!! Now I get it'Mr.Singh must be dead angry"

She ran quickly at the thought and knocked at Mr.Singh's cabin'

Mr.Singh- Hello Miss Nupur' finally you took the pain of coming here' so sweet of you'

Nupur-I am so sorry Mr Singh' woh' actually' ummm'.

Mr.Singh-oh come on Nupur' you are not really good at this lying thing' so cut it out' did you wake up late again?

Nupur lowered down her face in embarrassment'

"Why can't I even lie properly??? When will I grow up???"

Suddenly the old man sitting infront of Nupur laughed crazily'

Mr.Singh-Nupur Did I ever tell you how crazy you are?

"Now what does that mean??? How should I answer to such a weird question???"

Nupur-Mr.Singh' are you angry with me?

Mr Singh- I was' but look at you' who can stay angry with you for more than 10 minutes?

Nupur smiled graciously' she felt relived' and without asking she sat on the chair!

Nupur-woh kya hain na sir' you toh know me na' late ho gayya' aur upar se mujhe mere kapre nahi mil rahe the' I was like in so much confusion' thank god aap gussa nahi ho'

Mr.Singh watched her babble' she always used to do this' and that's why she was the best RJ in their station'

Mr.Singh- I know' but abhi aap agar nahi jayengi kaam kaarne toh main such much gussa ho jaunga'

Nupur suddenly stood up and realized that she babbled a bit too much' she quickly left without saying a word'


"Hello Mumbai' This is me Nupur' your every own rj' so whats up guys??? Sorry for hosting this show so late' waise aajka program is about love problems' so call me up! Maybe I can try and solve them"

She took out the headphones from her ears' and saw the calls coming up'

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"Hey isn't that Sonia? Why is she running?"

Nupur saw a girl running towards her' That girl was Sonia' her best friend' she was an RJ too'

Sonia- Nupur' you are never going to believe what I just heard'

"Then why are you telling me dumbo?"

Nupur-really? What's the news?

Sonia- you know that our radio station masti is on the top of the charts right? Well we have been invited to this party tomorrow' and guess what? The top businessman's of this world are going to be there' can you believe that?

"Is Sonia joking??? No way!!!"

Nupur always had this dream of hers' to be known as a well known person of the society' as an RJ' she got a lot of love being one' but she wanted to be famous' and this was the perfect chance!

Nupur-oh my god' This could be an amazing thing for us' Thanks for telling me this re'

Sonia-no problem' Mr.Singh asked me to tell you to be there tomorrow at 9:00 at night' okay? This is going to be so much fun' can't wait' oppppsss I have to go now' oh and do remember to wear black' that's the colour code!

"Black??? Gosh' I hate this colour! Wonder who selected it' must be the one who is throwing the party' he must be having a bad taste' but what do I wear? Something Indian or western???"
----------------------------------------------------

She looked at the nearby mirror' and saw herself'

Fair complexion' light brown coloured hair' pink lips' and eyes that speak all the time' she remembered getting an offer for modeling' but she rejected it' That was something not meant for her!

Nupur took a brush and brushed her hair' and silently said to herself' "Tomorrow is my big day'I wont let this opportunity get out of hand"

"How do I look??? Horrible I know' but still I hope not that horrible"

Nupur was someone who underestimated herself all the time' she knew she was beautiful' but somewhere deep inside she felt hollow'

meanwhile she heard the horn of a car' and knew who it was'

"Has to be Sonia' finally she is here'"

She joined her hands and prayed to god' and then rushed to open the door' !!!


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Guyz let me tell u all ki wat is in italics is wats going on in people's minds..

nd plz do comment


Edited by ananya_s - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya_s

OK...............<font size="5">MY FIRST EPISODE!!!!!<br><font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3"><br></font></font>

<p class="MsoNormal"><font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">"gosh… I am again late… Mr.Singh is going to kill me" <br><br>
20 year old Nupur thought as she searched her cupboard…<br><br>"man… where are my clothes?"<br>
Nupur was new in mumbai… a simple girl from a small town… <br><br>
Nupur is someone who can't be considered lucky… destiny betrays her everytime
she tries something new… at the age of 10… her mom and dad passed away! She
grew up with her cousins at her aunt's house… she never felt comfortable there…
and as she grew up she thought of moving to Mumbai and finally she did… <br><br>
At present she works as a radio jocky… and Mr.Singh happens to be her 50 year
old boss… <br><br>"What excuse do I give? I don't know why I wake up late every morning… gosh…
should I tell him that? He is going to kick me out of the job as he hears this…
Have to do something else…"
<br>
After reaching the radio station she heard familiar voices and saw known faces…
all of them were trying to tell her something… but what?<br><br>"I am not someone who can read faces… spilt it out…. OH NO!!!!! Now I get
it…Mr.Singh must be dead angry"
<br><br>
She ran quickly at the thought and knocked at Mr.Singh's cabin…<br><br>
Mr.Singh- Hello Miss Nupur… finally you took the pain of coming here… so sweet
of you…<br><br>
Nupur-I am so sorry Mr Singh… woh… actually… ummm….<br><br>
Mr.Singh-oh come on Nupur… you are not really good at this lying thing… so cut
it out… did you wake up late again?<br><br>
Nupur lowered down her face in embarrassment… <br><br>"Why can't I even lie properly??? When will I grow up???"<br><br>
Suddenly the old man sitting infront of Nupur laughed crazily… <br><br>
Mr.Singh-Nupur…. Did I ever tell you how crazy you are?<br><br>"Now what does that mean??? How should I answer to such a weird question???"
<br><br>
Nupur-Mr.Singh… are you angry with me?<br><br>
Mr Singh- I was… but look at you… who can stay angry with you for more than 10
minutes? <br><br>
Nupur smiled graciously… she felt relived… and without asking she sat on the
chair!<br><br>
Nupur-woh kya hain na sir… you toh know me na… late ho gayya… aur upar se mujhe
mere kapre nahi mil rahe the… I was like in so much confusion… thank god aap
gussa nahi ho…<br><br>
Mr.Singh watched her babble… she always used to do this… and that's why she was
the best RJ in their station… <br><br>
Mr.Singh- I know… but abhi aap agar nahi jayengi kaam kaarne toh main such much
gussa ho jaunga… <br><br>
Nupur suddenly stood up and realized that she babbled a bit too much… she
quickly left without saying a word…<br><br><br>"Hello Mumbai… This is me Nupur… your every own rj… so whats up guys???
Sorry for hosting this show so late… waise aajka program is about love
problems… so call me up! Maybe I can try and solve them"
<br><br>
She took out the headphones from her ears… and saw the calls coming up…</font>


</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">------------------------</font></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3"></font></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">"Hey isn't that Sonia? Why is she running?" <br><br>
Nupur saw a girl running towards her… That girl was Sonia… her best friend… she
was an RJ too…<br><br>
Sonia- Nupur… you are never going to believe what I just heard…<br><br>"Then why are you telling me dumbo?" <br><br>
Nupur-really? What's the news? <br><br>
Sonia- you know that our radio station masti is on the top of the charts right?
Well we have been invited to this party tomorrow… and guess what? The top
businessman's of this world are going to be there… can you believe that?<br><br>"Is Sonia joking??? No way!!!"<br><br>
Nupur always had this dream of hers… to be known as a well known person of the
society… as an RJ… she got a lot of love being one… but she wanted to be
famous… and this was the perfect chance!<br><br>
Nupur-oh my god… This could be an amazing thing for us… Thanks for telling me
this re… <br><br>
Sonia-no problem… TJ asked me to tell you to be there tomorrow at 9:00 at
night… okay? This is going to be so much fun… can't wait… oppppsss I have to go
now… oh and do remember to wear black… that's the colour code! <br><br>"Black??? Gosh… I hate this colour! Wonder who selected it… must be the one
who is throwing the party… he must be having a bad taste… but what do I wear?
Something Indian or western???"
<br><br><br>
She looked at the nearby mirror… and saw herself…<br><br>
Fair complexion… light brown coloured hair… pink lips… and eyes that speak all
the time… she remembered getting an offer for modeling… but she rejected it…
That was something not meant for her! <br><br>
Nupur took a brush and brushed her hair… and silently said to herself… "Tomorrow
is my big day…I wont let this opportunity get out of hand"
</font>


</p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3"></font></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">"How do I look??? Horrible I know… but still I hope not
that horrible"
<br><br>
Nupur was someone who underestimated herself all the time… she knew she was
beautiful… but somewhere deep inside she felt hollow… <br><br>
meanwhile she heard the horn of a car… and knew who it was…<br><br>"Has to be Sonia… finally she is here…"<br><br>
She joined her hands and prayed to god… and then rushed to open the door… !!!</font>




</p>

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gosh that was fast even this 1es nice will be waitin fr the 2nd episode btw 1 advice use more hindi plz cuz its a hindi show 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok advice taken.....i thot dat makin it sorta modern wud be nice....nyway thanks...........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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well ananya ....too good for a start !!!! continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya_s

ok advice taken.....i thot dat makin it sorta modern wud be nice....nyway thanks...........<br>




making it moder is olright btw more matra bhasha required 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanaya_lover




making it moder is olright btw more matra bhasha required 😛



ok wen i post my next update ill make sure it has hindi ok???

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