FF: tuj mein rab dekhta ..epilogue, dt 26/ 4,pg:36

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As bani prefunctorily boiled the milk and switched off the gas pouring the milk and stirring the sugar into it, holding the newspaper she was reading the news report:

"We married secretly in a temple outskirts of the city 'confides bani Jai Walia"in front of the reporters and t.v channels .Bani Dixit claims to be bani JaiWalia and was married to him from 6months and now wants divorce and alimony seeks the court for justice.Jai Walia being the richest business man in the country can manipulate things to his side but I want justice and believe the law of my country will not bow down to rich.

The reasons for the divorce is said Jai Walia family doesn't accept her as his wife as she is not from "well to do family" and feel insulted to introduce her and hence the marriage was never disclosed in front of society. Jai Walia had fallen in love with her on first sight and wanted to marry her then and there.He still loves her and she, him but cant face the torture of the family 'says Bani Dixit /Walia.Jai walia is not there to comment on the issue. He is in London finalizing a prestigious deal with megasoft company while his family denies any such thing saying all is false she is behind the property.

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Seeing the television channel news and the court hearing of accepting the case the registrar in registered office asked his cleric to stop the transfer of property papers as this would create more problems to them.

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Jigyasa was stunned at the turn of the events . "yeh sab kya bakwaas hain humne plan jo banaya voh ulta kaise padgaya . Poora property ka transfer papers par register office ka seal bhi ab ruk gaya .maine socha tha iss ekmahina jab bhaiya out of india honge we will successfully claim his property but now all my plans are in water "

"Maa tum tension kyun lete hoon when jai mama will come .he will prove bani is wrong and then we can claim his property"

"Arey budhu ,agar aisa bhi hua tho bhai ko pata chal jayega ki unke property hadapne ki khoshish kar rahe hain fir pata nahin kaisa bho chaal (earth quake) aayega. Pehle hi voh lokhandwala land acquisition case main tune jo 500crore golmaal kiya . usse naraz hoke tumhe bedakkal kiya unke business se aur ab '.

Ranveer "relax mom aisa kuch nahin hoga. U just see "

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The next scene :

Jai walia rushing out of the airport totally furious with foulest mood on earth and getting into the car avoiding the media's various questions like

Is Bani Dixit your wife ? Your family treated her badly? Being part of high society how come your thought be so low ?

But Jai was in no mood to answer and his car sped through the journalists.

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The next scene:

Jai striding off into the chanakya towers and into the lift and pressing second floor as the lift was moving he saw his reflection in the long mirrors hanging in the side and back walls of the lift . He noticed his face. his forehead with marked frown lines ,his eyes fully red swollen , his nose inflated ,his jaw line so tight as he gritted his teeth and the seven o'clock beard as he didn't shave .

"Black man" was his name given by her as she called him on his back when she talked to his servants and frds . When asked why? She said

Always in black'. black shoes, black socks, black pants ,black belt , black tie, black shirt, black coat, black watch that gunmetal watch ' , his ear ring also is black stud .his hair is not black but white and she laughed at it . and his face humesha itna gussa aisa lagtha hain kada kada hi aadmi ko kacchha chabba lega ,bapreeeeeeeee

She said hmm waise ek cheese hain jo black nahin hain unka gold chain ,lucky chain which is gold in colour par itne black main tho voh bhi black hogaya hoga .

Chup sir sunnlenge tho '

Tho? she shrugged her shoulders not caring a bit " kabhi yeh admi hastha bhi hain kya ? hasna choddo smile kartha hain kabhi . ?" This was what he heard from his neice anu


Today ,he watched himself in the lift mirror dressed in blue shaded jeans and light pink small square check shirt not tucked in . He was looking like a casual college guy in his late twenty's .So much change had come just because of her.As he came out of the lift and pressed the bell waiting impatiently for the door to open

Bani stood stunned seeing him in her double bedroom flat . he had dominated the room with his presence 6 feet tall ,handsome man .As he threw the newspaper onto her face

"kya hain yeh sab ?maine tumse kab shaadi kii? What do u want bani ?"

Bani was quiet

" dammit speak up "

Bani stood quiet looking into his eyes calmly .

"we will meet tomorrow in court mr.walia "

Baniiii he strode in front grabbing her arm

"bleadyhell bani , I want an answer . u are girlfriend of Pushkar and you claiming that I had married u and u my wife ..mud slinging on my family .i wont spare u I wont.. shame on u. Accha hua tumhara baap yeh din dekhne jinda nahin raha warna aapne beti ke karan sur jhook jhata .Tum jaise bete se kya umeed kar sakega . jo adhi nangi kapdon main ghar se chorichupe raatbarr sharab peete hue disco main nachthe rahe aur ladkon ka khoon garam karein"

His accusations hit bani like bullets he was right .she had killed her father with her own hands and her deeds. Tears trickled down her cheeks seeing the tears he stopped talking

"Bani !!! " she wriggled out of his hold running into her room

"I don't want to talk to u just leave me" she shut the bedroom door with a bang falling on the bed she cried hugging the pillow .how many days will she repent like this?

It had been more than a year now. Sudden death of her dad due to heart attack ..

Jai knew he had hurt her lot today, his accusing her of her dad's death had literally broken her heart but in his temper and her stunts made him speak like that.

As he came out, he remembered Nishikant Dixit, his manager was a very humble human being ,sincere, hardworking.Only daughter as his family .loved her to the most.Pampered her a lot. It was not "demand and supply policy" it was "over supply less demand policy ". that was what his staff spokeabout him to his daughter

His office table had her and his photo framed, her drawing was framed and on the table. His day started with waking her daughter for college B.SC 2nd year student .Bani woke up at 8am. Everything right from paste on the tooth brush, towel , hot water ready in the bathroom.Breakfast, lunch box on the table , everything was ready . Dress also he could take out from wardrobe but now a days she wore her choice things grumpy over style she would say this is fashion dad

He didn't stop her but warned her occasionally about things

"Beta high heels kyun pehnthi hoo"

"Dad its fashion ."

"Okay baba be carefully gir mat jana chalthe waqt."

"okay dad" saying so she kissed his cheek and left to college in her red scootypep

Her college was just a kilometer away while his office was 20km away.Not that office quarters were not allotted but this house was near to the college and so he took the pain and risk of catching the busiest Local train of 8:45 towards Churchgate in the second-class compartment wanting to save the difference in fare of first and second class pass so that he could spend that on his angel and her smile was what made him live life. She was his life.

Not the most beautiful girl in the world, not the best artist / painter/ singer or dancer .she was just average girl of 5'4" height medium built. Recently "failed" in achieving her dream i.e becoming a doctor - failing to crack the entrance exam still... he loved her. He was proud of her .Encouraged her in everything .

His staff always wondered seeing him. He had in fact declined promotion once as he didn't want his daughter to be alone when he will have to leave in tours and all..

JaiWalia also knew about his "obsession" on his daughter as he could hear about him talking about her to his staff

"Mere beti lakhoon main ek hain I am proud of her tho kya hua entrance exam clear nahin kiya .. zindagi humesha success story nahin hote ..i know she will make me proud once"

As Jai sat down in his car, he remembered when his manager Nishikant Dixit accompanied with him to a conferance. sitting in front seat he was checking the new pen and the writing pad given in the conference . it was gel pen and he smiled

"Kya hua Nishikant sahib kyun hass rahe hoon?" enquired the driver

Nishikant looked back once to see what sir was doing. Seeing him catching a wink of sleep. He spoke with enthusiasm filled voice.

"Arey aaj conference main jo pen hain voh gel pen hain tho isliye. Bani ko gel pen bahut pasand hain .. Dekhege tho khush hojayege"

"Issmein kaunse bade baat chahe tho voh shop main kharid sakte haina .."

" Haan phir bhi .koi bhi latest pen ho uske pass hoga uska compassbox dekha hain addgel,montex,cello ,lexy sab company ke pens honge voh bhi red ,black aur blue . Pencils dekhne honge .. ek dozen tho honge uske bag main pen-pencil ,normal pencil, extra dark' , zotter pen,ink pen,ball pen with different ball points .. itne dewane haina pens aur pencils kii muje hassi aathe hain uske collection par .. mera pen dekha he showed the Reynolds 045 calibure sirf yeh wala usko na pasnad hain isliye choothe nahin

As the driver pulled the car in front of CHANAKYA APARTMENT which was on the way he got down saying thank you and disappeared into the building

"Paggla kahi ka" was what his driver had muttered and pulled the car towards walia mansion

Jai also heard the entire conversation.He couldn't believe there were people like him who gave cent percent to his child. Nishikant didn't marry after his wife death during her labor .

Jai Walia himself had seen his father spending his night daily with different woman even when his mother was alive..He was deprived of parental affection and when he saw Nishikant, he was jealous of that girl bani ..

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The day he met bani for first time ....


so how did u like this ss ? positive and negative comment welcome but do comment 😃

Edited by lovelyreddyrose - 16 years ago

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MrsKhan-Sobti thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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since i already read it..no savings here to😃
its a rly interesting start rose...me waiting for the nex part
do continue asap
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Posted: 17 years ago
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mee second
will be back iwth my comments
hey rose
that was a gr88 start
and loving the new story of yours
do cont soon
so bani is not married to JW
then y is hse faking all this to media
only to save JW property
plzzzzzzzzz cont soon
Edited by jeenal20 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I read it finally
Liked the starting waiting for next part
So cont soon warna samjhloo tum gaee kaam se 😆😆
Edited by YOOUSHA - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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are wah alekhya babu naya SS, nayi story, aur naya nothing ((i wanted to say pati😆😆😆))
yaar its sooo good😛...me loved it👍🏼....
omg!! i loved nishikant also😛...especially the pen scene....it was sooo ((i don't know wat to say))...
awesome😃....but how, when and why did he die??😕...
well yaar hope u will update it fast...and not make us wait for ages😆
and yeah i forgot....i just loved ur title😛😳😛
plzz cont.soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Very good Start. So what's the deal. Why is Bani pretending to be JAi's wife. is it to save his property from Jigs. Bani Gf of Pushkar🤢. Can't be.
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey rose!
an ss!
cant wait to read!
will read soon!
need to go and cook dinner now!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank u all for the coments and here goes next part
and then gm next part is so early see hehhehe


part:2


The day he met bani for first time ....

Bani woke up on the hospital bed to find an elder handsome man standing in front of her talking with a white coat man moving his hands in air holding some instrument that could be termed as stethoscope by her dizzy mind. She closed her eyes and opened her eyes clearing the blurry vision and shaking her head vigorously to suite to the sunlight in the room and yes its doctor in front of her standing at the end of the hospital bed
As she remembered that she was in disco partying with her friends as it was birthday of one of the members in her gang. and she sneaked out of the her double bedroom apartment silently at night 11'oclock. while her father was sleeping in his room .and she had for the first time tasted the wines , one of the variety vodka by her friends encouragement and then the effect of it was on her body .she was dancing like a fool among those other fools of hers with such enthusiasm and energy levels that might have created an mild earthquake of 4 on richter scale .
As the two men saw her awake the doctor moved to once again check the condition of the patient and bani looked at him
"what happened to me doctor, why am I here?" she was feeling dizzy
"Nothing happened to u miss. Just u had drunk last night and fell unconscious on the floor"
"I want to go home "she said looking intently at the man who had probably rescued her .as she saw him with her lids downcast on the tiled floor of the hospital .black polished shoes that were shinning as if it was done by the cherry blossom polish with the Charlie Chaplin smiling at the cover, long black color pants and then his black shirt top three buttons open showing his white vest and his neck. bani gulped looking at the thick gold chain with huge mata rani locket it would have weighed a ton .i would never have put one in my neck and as her eyes traveled from the adam's apple in his throat to the chin, lips, slight moustache not moustache really it was just an overgrowth of his beard due to not shaving. And then as she watched his nose it was big ,could enjoy pulling it out and then his eyes bani stopped there looking into his eyes staring at him as his eyes showed nothing but anger for her. Her eyes traveled to his forehead and then his head where a lock of hair was white. his handsome features made her guess his age to be just 30 but the white color made the guess to forty but at forty most guys are ganjas na .she smiled to herself at that thought how would he look ganja she imagined his face and started giggling .
The man in front passed a look to doctor to check whether she was fine .
The doc was about to touch when she said " I am fine doctor . don't need to check me."
"then why r u laughing girl" as he raised his brow and looked at her with quizzical look
"just picturing this handsome man if he would have a bald head "
As the doc chuckled along with her, the eyes of the man looking at her grew sharper and dark .seeing his expression the doc excused saying
"sorry mr.walia . u can take her home "
"mr.walia . ohh is that ur name . hi my name is bani " she offered her hand for hand shake with a smile but the man didn't give his hand in response
'come along with me miss dixit .i drop u home"
"I can go myself uncle .thanku "
Jai was shocked when she said uncle .the look was priceless. He said harshly "I am not ur uncle"
"sorry" bani mumbled looking at the tiled floor .
"come with me "
"I said I will go myself sir .thanku for helping me yesterday "
"no more arguments miss dixit . " she stared at his back how did he know her last name . bani sat uncomfortably in the front seat of the huge black car .as he started the engine of the car with the key that had a small plastic teddy bear doll as the key chain.
It doesn't seem to be his choice may be his daughter's ….
The funny mood of her's turned serious and intense as she remembered last night how she sneaked away from her home. This she had been doing from last two months or so and then would come back by 2 before her dad would wake up and find her missing. now the time was mostly 10am or more seeing that sun was shining and the temperature was high such that it would make her skin tan .ohhno! I should apply the sunscreen lotion once back home and then she noted the list that she would apply to take care of her skin .she concluded.
"dad subah jagne ke baad muje nahin dekha tho kya kehenge ? ab pata nahin main kya answer karoongi ?unke questions ka ? kaise handle karongi unke kaunbanega crorepathi questions ko ? uffo bhagwan pls save me pls save me .papa naraz nahin hona chahiye.zyada nahin. Bus thoda datha tho chaltha hain…
Bani looked at jai as he took the left turn from the highway to her house. Aajeb aadmi hain bhai ,mere binna bole hi mera ghar jaantha hain ? Shayad jassoos hain sherlockholmes.. hehhe woh tho ladki hain …par acahe jassoos hain jo bhi hoo..
As he brought the black air conditioned BMW car infront of the gates of the building and honked continuosly , bani looked at her surroundings .the gate were closed but the watchman missing .
"yeh watchman kabhi gate par hota hi nahin. humesha tunn hota hain" said bani
"jaise tum" he said harshly but true
"aapko kya problem hain ? maine thanks kahan na " she was equally rude
"jisse dekho rule kartha hain college main lects ghar mein dad aur ab yeh" she mumbled to herself but that could be heard to him
Bani closed the door with a force . Jai got down muttering "dammit " and walked behind the girl who had crossed the car and now opening the gate no she wasn't but climbing the latched iron gates giving him a chance to look at her long s**y milky white thighs through the mid thigh tight jean skirt .And she got down otherside and walked away .jai slowly latched the huge latch from the otherside muttering
"nishikant had spoilt his daughter rotten"
Seeing people standing in front of her apartment itne bheed kyun ? She cleared them to go inside to see a body laid on the floor covered with white sheet in her home at the center bani looked around to find her father
"kaun marr gaya? Papa kahan hain?
"papa " bani called out
The lady beside bani consoled her "beta tumhare papa chal basse . ab tum anaadh hogaye hoon. Iss barre duniya main akele " and she started wailing loudly
"aap pagal hogaye kya ?" bani called out "papa, papa ….."
One of the man in the group took hold of her hand and guided her to unveil the sheet
Seeing the face bani was shocked she grew pale papa,uthiye na yeh kaisa mazzak hain main maafi mangthe hoon sorry pls . aayendha kahin nahin jaongi aapki baat manungii plss uth jayeye
Bani shook the body trying to wake him up from his slumber . She looked helpless seeing no movement as she moved back hitting the wall she sat down on the floor just staring at the body . jai watched her siiting at the corner of the room with a pale look
As time passed , people made the arrangements to take the dead body to the grave and took the body to cremation grounds and cremated it as nishikant didn't have son .an unknown person was about to light the pyre .jai took it from his hands and did the job. Afterthat all the people went to there homes
Bani sat there whole day and night still under the shock .women of her neighborhood had come to console her but she didn't say anything they offered food but she didn't take any. Jai watched her lifeless at the corner of the room. he knelt beside her
"bani bani u have any relatives"
"no" was the answer given by one of the women
"will u stay here or come with me " she nodded NO for this
Jai saw her .he couldn't bring her to speak like before. "aap inka khayal rakhenege " he asked the woman beside her giving her money to take care of her . He left.
It had been three days no improvement was seen except that she had taken bath perfunctorily. Her frds had come to offer condolence .past few days some or the other people would drop offering condolence
Bani would just remain quiet while they spoke "bahut aache aadmi the,heart attack hogaya. "
As everyone left bani found the house extremely silent everything spoke about her dad she couldn't bear and started crying feeling alone at night in the house. The next thing she did in the morning was she had vacated the house and took her luggage and then shifted to a hostel . Jai had come to pay a visit but saw the lock and when asked the person informed that bani had left the house and shifted to hostel
He couldn't feel sympathy or pity for her his angriness grew no bound. He didn't try to trace her but left to attend his business deals.
It had been a month from the incident
Jai walia was in a pub again with a drink when one of his ex flames miss meera khaanna had come was giving him company as the night grew dark outside and rush in the disco tek increased and the music changed he found her again splaying her hips with the music sensuously in her skin tight blue jeans skirt and short red colour top with her eyes closed
Jai felt bad a tug in his heart to see her among a group of boys who surrounded her and were touching her waist ,her bossom her private parts but she was least concerned . jai was stunned she had grown more shameless than before …
His attention was dragged by meera . pulling his chin to look at her and her halter neck blouse that revealed more than it concealed and the mini skirt which showed her s**y long legs . As she shamelessly ran a finger on his face and nibbled his ear taking hold of his hand guided it to her waist and took him to the dance floor. jai danced lightly with the rock music going on and then abruptly left from there….



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Posted: 17 years ago
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meee
ohh noo rose
what have u done
bani killed her own dad
ghosh and this made bani go into a shell
and become more shameless
and she is foll dancing like this
and taking out her pains in drinking and dancing shamlessly at a pub
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
Edited by jeenal20 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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helllooo rose
must say ur rly inspired by mah srk...pehle title ab kbc??
seriously i also wanna see jai's expression wen bani called him an uncle
so her dad died coz of her careless behaviour...
i think jai shud hav taken more care of her
dekho abhi yeh laadli kitni bigad gaayi hai
dancing in a pub dat to in a mini skirt
so is jai jealous or wat
n meera bai is his ex
waiting for the nex part
do continue soon

luv,
teenu

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