FF - Destiny (Ch-51, Pg-178: Jan 7th)

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sonia

@cute_bear

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1131

superb di , excellent, mindblowing what else can i say and i can jus imagine heers dress and prems clothes awww and di when heer came prem was acting a bit protective because he didnt want anyone to see heer in that dresss because then they will keep on looking at her superb di

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Thapanee

@Thapanee

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1132

wow interesting update so another 2 parts with their date 😃 cant imagine wht will happen??? prem was straightforward abt his desire....interesting....well heer is giving prem tough time i guess.....coz prem is losing touch......wating for tomm

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Anu

@DMGanuthika

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#1133

This was an amazing update. I love Heer's witty replies. I love prem because he is so frank and can admit anything. So I guess it wont be long before he admits to Heer that he loves her. I am also waiting to know who is going to admit that they love, first? Heer or Prem??????

Also wondering how the rest of the date is going to go???😊😊😊 You have heard this many times but I have to say this: You are such a goooooooooooooooood writer. Eagerly waiting for the next update and I am so glad it is tomorrow.

love

Karthika

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Rehana Kazi

@Rehana86

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#1134

First of all I-hate-you, I-hate-you, I-hate-you, I-hate you **out of breathe**, I----hate----you.....**breathing heavily**.......guess what??!!!....I was writing the last part of Blackmail and in stead of writing "neev", one of the characters, I WROTE "ATUL"😲😲....because, erm---i---thinking-----was----well-🤔---honestly i don't know.😕......watch out!! i'm not in love with him😛.......cause i'm already in love with you☺️☺️☺️......"destiny" i meant😳.........i gotto know from fatima di and angie di abt it as they pointed it out😳........ yeah yeah go ahead and laugh at me, however for your kind info, I already put the blame on YOU🤪........**sigh**😳......back to the story...

"You are going to knock his eyes out," ......my infinite amount of cents on this one🤣🤣🤣

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"Why are you wearing that'thing?" 🤣.....this is called a dress beta prem, D-R-E-S-S, seems like i have to do some review with you.......🤣🤣....hilarious diii🤣

"Not to mention that I will be spending the rest of the evening, in misery knowing I can't make love to you'yet."😲......wait i'm still trying to recover from it.....**sigh**, maa da ladla bigad geyaa!!!🤣.......you KILLED it diiii🤣

🤣.......i swear i didn't teach him that🤣🤣🤣....

"That's not really my problem is it?" bingooo!!! go Heer go!!!😃

"Don't say I didn't warn you," ...☺️ no words needed☺️☺️☺️

Heer just hoped that her smart comments would not land her in trouble tonight. .....being his mother, I don't take any guarantee beta Heer **backing off with hands up**.........YOU said it and YOU deal with it.😉......however, GOOD LUCK!!😛😆

"Yes'much more beautiful," he said softly and Heer looked up to see him watching her.☺️

"You are not good for my ego at all." .......🤣🤣......good one....

awwww I loved every bit of it.....NO DOUBT😊........you have explained the settings wonderfully as well as their looks😍😍 **sigh**......thanks for the wonderful story di😊

luv

rehana

Edited by tania86 - 16 years ago

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ashpush

@ashpush

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#1135

*sigh* *double sigh* *triple sigh*....i ll sigh any no. of times n still it wont be enough smithsie...

why is it that every time i read ur ff my epe/ephe goes really high? I HATE U! I HATE U! I HATE U!...

My god, Prem actually said that ?? he actually said " i cant make love to u"???? sheesh!....this line had my heart ramming!!!...And heer's reply to that....omg!!🤣...

And his corny line..lol...Even prem has observed that heer is a lot more comfortable around him n doesnt run for cover on hearing each n every comment of his....n heer has acknowledged it too..i like that...

and i forgot to do the dancing!! so let me dance now..

Yay!! the date has come!!😆..

Hope i ll be able to read all of the the date before i go....

Will miss u n ur ff a looot smithsie.....n ya, will try to keep epe/ephe really low.......gosh! if only that prem death n all those boring episodes had taken place now, wen im going....

And yes of course smithsie, i will come and read ur ff wen i come bak...it ll take loads of time to read them though...but will read n will comment for sure.....hope u dont complete ur ff by that time....

Cya on monday!

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jennie

@*angadkripa*

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#1136

i've been a silent reader for quite some time now lol soo sorry about that but its an awesome fan fiction and i love it ! update soon 👏

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ruexangel

@ruexangel

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#1137

Hey smita d, both ur last updates were awsome.

haha more prems bare torso yay! lol 😳

& lol Prems reaction 2 Heers dress..wow lol very shockingly bold, lol.

im eager 2 read more bout dre date, plzz contt soon :))

~Rue

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iqra

@Snoopy-

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#1138

Awesome update like always!!!!!!!!👏.👏👏....... will bewaiting for the next one !!!!

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Anu

@DMGanuthika

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#1139

Wow that was awsome! i mean I cant believe prem said something like that and guess what I really liked it ....ALOT but anyway i just wanted to say that you were an xellent writer and keep it up 😊

Love Anu:D

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Magpie

@Magpie

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#1140

That was a great start !!! Glad to know that there are 3 parts altogether..tnk U Smitha...it's worth the wait.

So he's gotten to the point of re-scheduling his business trips...Good. Aww..a lovely dress for the lovely evening. What ?? He'd be spending the evening in misery coz he can't make love to her yet !!!!! 'Honesty is the best policy'..right Prem ?? Wonder where this is heading...how did we get so lucky ?

Good that he forewarned Heer. Aha.. Heer seems to be having such thoughts too deep down. Loved the ambiance at the restaurant. Prem did sweep her off her feet by his compliments.

Can't wait for the continuation..is there going to be an update this weekend ?

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