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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nisha_07





Thanks Simra! BTW I'm a Bones fan too..David Boreanez....😍



No Problem Darling! and yes he does make my heart go a flutter! ☺️
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That was such a beautiful read, I loved it. It was mesmerising and I don't know if it's the right word to use but it was so 'soothing' to read.
You've got a great talent there, keep bringing it out here!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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So a perfect Yudi-Nisha scene, right. 😉

Nisha, it feels so nice to read such a beautiful romantic scene. Today when I get out of my work, which will be pretty late too, like in your scene, wearing gloves, cap, jacket, walking on the streets of Chicago, I shall keep your scene in mind, hoping that chalte chalte, aur kuch nahin toh atleast koi lift toh mil jaaye. LOL. Anvi, dream on. 😆

But seriously, wonderful scene and I just loved it. As usual you were very good in expressing your thoughts.

My favorite part is:

It's beautiful

Yes you are

She turned her head to look at him. He was looking at her.

I mean it's just stunning, gorgeous.

Keeping his eyes locked into hers, he tightened his hold on her.

Yes, you are.

I'm talking about the cabin

And I'm talking about you.


😳

Yes Jenifer, I think, 'soothing' is the right word. Even I felt the same. 😊 After whole day's work, reading something so romantic, is definitely soothing and relaxing.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Jenifer -- thank you. Soothing is what I was going for, something to wash away the week (it's been one of those weeks for me too). I will surely try to bring more as inspiration strikes.

Anvi -- we live in hope! Thank you...Glad you liked it, considering you were part of the thinking behind this!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hmmm nisha i have been to lake during spring though it was very cold outside and cloudy but lake was not ffrozen.........
and it was not snowing but drizzling...........and it was really beautiful atmosphere.............but now iwant to go in winter..........and want to feel the excat feeling that you have written
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
So when do we get the next part😒
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Im speechless......dazed......wow, its beautiful , its like im living it.....its as if its ME........Nisha, why dont u write more??? Dont hide urself plz.........write more n pm me the url plz.....thanks :)))))
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Holy smokin..jumpin...smakeroons!! ...Nish....what was that???/

I thought if ur techi ur always a techi...and we arent usually very good with our literal skills but u have proved me wrong....wow...but will only add to this to say you cant top that Nish...this is a piece in itself....just so moving...and how descriptive.
Hats off and a graceful curtsey to you Nish....well done. I cant even say encore....its a piece in itself....please write another piece if you can. But holy smoke..woman...a very well written piece indeed.!!
👏 all round applause...

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