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Posted: 17 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: d@niy@

hi.. additi.. sorry i m late.. anyways.. heer in prem office...😳 waiting for the next part....😃

oh its ok😳thx for the comment😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: heer hann

wait wait till u die!😆😆😆
To lolo di😆😆😆

that means u r not going to update next part or what😲
no dont do that lala i'm waiting here
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: 12345xxx

that means u r not going to update next part or what😲
no dont do that lala i'm waiting here

😡when i said i m not gona update it just a sentence😡😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: heer hann

😡when i said i m not gona update it just a sentence😡😆

then its ok 😆i'm waiting for ur update..........when u r going to update?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi everyone I m back😉Thx for all ur lovely comments so here is my Part 3😉
Part 3
Prem went to his father's cabin and tole him everything that there will a new assistant for him
Lalit=Thik hai beta tu nu bohot accha kiya ab tera baap bhi bura hone laga hai kash tu jaldi se shaadi kar leta pata nahi aapne beta ke baccho se milne ka moka mile bhi ya na mile
Prem=Phir se wohe baat maine kaha na aap mujhse bhi jyada jiye ge ab ye sab baat bon ke jiye ghar chalte hai(angrily)
Lalit=thik hai beta chale
Next Morning...........................

Heer quicky woke up and get ready for the first day of her job
Heer=MAA!!!!!!!!!!!!
Teji=kya hua beta????
Heer=maa jaldi nashta di jiye mujhe job main jana hai
Ridhima and balraj=Itni jaldi utha diya hum ko heer di bhi na!(sleepily)
Teji=Baap bete same hai mere bete ko job main jana hai na is liye woh chilla rahe thi samjhe?
Heer=accha maa lagta hai nashta kare bina hi jana pare ga bye mom!
Teji=samhal ke jana............................
Here Prem and Lalit was in their way to the office lalit saw sweet shops n get out of the car prem follow
Prem=Bauji kya hua???
Lalit=beta tujhe toh pata hai tere maa mujhe meetha khane hi nahi dete is liye aaj thora kha leta ho na tere ama ko mat bata barna woh pura khar ko aapne saar aapne saar par le lege!
Prem=accha baba chale???
Lalit=Nahi prem tu car ko dekh mai ja kar a jao ga
Prem=thik hai bauji

Lalit get some sweets n when he was in his way to come back to the car Heer saw lalit in the road and a car was coming from the back!!!!!!!!!!
Heer Quickly push lalit and safe him!
Heer=uncle ji aap thik toh hai na???
Lalit=Thx beta main thik ho
Heer=bhagwan ka lakh lakh shukar hai
Lalit=bete tumhara naam kya hain?
Heer=ji woh mere naam Heer hai
Lalit=bohot pyaara naam hai tum kahi jarahe ho main tumhe chor do???
Heer=ji woh main Juneja office jarahe thi.
Lalit=KYA!!!Juneja office kya tum koi assistant ke job ke liye ja rahe ho
Heer=aap ko kaise pata???(confussed)
Lalit=are beta woh juneja office mera office hi toh hai awo mai tumhe chor deta ho
Heer=thik hai uncle ji
When they went to the car Heer saw Prem and again shouted(dunno why)
Heer= PREM!(dunno why shouting)
Prem=HEER!(dunno why shouting)
Lalit=tum dono bech raste par aaise kyun chilla rahe ho jaise tum ne koi bhoot ko dekh liya ho(confussed)
Preemer=kuch nahi bas aaise hi
Prem=aab chale office deer ho rahe hai
Three of them get in the car Prem and Lalit sit in the front sit and Heer sit in the back sit.While Prem was driving he was just seeing Heer from the mirrow on the car and lalit was noticing and smiling
Lalit=PREM!samhal keeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Prem just break the car
Lalit=prem tum hi nazar nahi aata waha kisi aur ki car hai
Prem=oh sorry dad woh galti ho gaye
Heer was just laughing n both dad n son stare at Heer
Prem=Tum haas kyun rahe ho???
Heer=ji woh jab se mai aapse mile ho jab jab mai aapse milte ho hamesha aek hi word sunte ho sorry😆😆😆
Pem also join heer and laugh than lalit also join them an d laugh😆Soon they reach the office Prem show Heer the cabin of lalit and ask her to take care of him nicely heer agree.Than prem went to his own cabin.
Lalit was eating the sweet that he brough
Heer=Sir woh dara saal Prem sir ne kaha tha ki aapko meetha khane ki ijajaat nahi hai
Lalit=aree bete yeh toh maine prem se hi poch kar khaya ho aur yeh sir sir kya laga rakha hai mujhe uncle kaho plz
Heer=ok uncle maaf karte jiye
^_^ ^_^ ^_^
Hi everyone thats it😭I know i m lazy i type so little😭again sorry for the mistakes😭
How was it bad or nice???😃Hope u all lyk it do comment😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
me stupid
sorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyy i did not read the 2nd part also.......
sorry ..........
reserved for 2nd part and 3rd part commnets
let me update my FF first then read ur parts
okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk sorry
i will edit it so soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

awesum
loved it
premeer shout

hehe thx for ur comment😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: anushka10

me stupid
sorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyy i did not read the 2nd part also.......
sorry ..........
reserved for 2nd part and 3rd part commnets
let me update my FF first then read ur parts
okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk sorry
i will edit it so soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

di!i read ur update it too good👏👏👏uff stupid me commenting about ur ff in my ff😆😆😆but di it was to good sare jaha se accha anu di hamara😳anyways no need to say sorry😡but thx for ur lvoely comment😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
😆 cute update...loved the way premeer shouted at each other...post the next one soon...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: munam_13

😆 cute update...loved the way premeer shouted at each other...post the next one soon...

yea i also love preemer shouting for no reason😆anyways thx for ur lovely comment will update soon!😛

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