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Zahra

@Pyari_Zahra

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Posted: 17 years ago

FF: Mera Dil Tumhare Liye Dhadke

Hey guys, for many days I had this idea in my head about writing an FF- I hope u all like it, I'm a bit worried as this is my first FF so don't know what kind of reaction to expect from you guys, but anyway I hope you enjoy reading!! The story is obviously about Prem and Heer- there are NO evil characters in this story as it is the love story of Prem and Heer and I don't want to ruin it with negative characters!! The first part is quite short but hopefully just as a brief indication of what's going on and then my other parts will be longer, hopefully I get a good response then I will continue... Love Zahra xx

PART ONE:

Heer sat admiring the pretty flowers that adorned and decorated her bed, an unknown fear filled her head. He would walk in any second and she did not know what to expect and what he would say to her- after all she hadn't known him for that long. For her parents happiness she had agreed to marry Prem, a guy who she had met and talked to only a few times- her parents chose an extremely handsome boy for her and he seemed like a decent guy from a respectable family, but would she really be happy spending the rest of her life with him?? She suddenly felt very anxious but tightly held on to her Mangulsutra that hung around her neck, as if never wanting to let go of the precious symbol of their marriage- on one hand she didn't want him to walk through that door, but then deep down she couldn't stand the idea of being alone in her new room.......in her new house!! - she was still trying to get used to the idea of this being her new home. To try and rid herself of the fear she brought the flowers close to her nose and took in the beautiful aroma. Suddenly the door opened, making her jump. HE walked in........😳

I thought I'dd add a picture of Heer and Prem's wedding 😃😳!! xx

PART ONE: Page 1

PART TWO: Page 2

PART THREE: Page 2

PART FOUR: Page 4

PART FIVE: Page 4

PART SIX: Page 7

PART SEVEN: Page 8

PART EIGHT: Page 9

PART NINE A: Page 11

PART NINE B: Page 12

PART TEN: Page 14

PART ELEVEN: Page 17

PART TWELVE: Page 19

PART THIRTEEN: Page 22

PART FOURTEEN: Page 24

PART FIFTEEN: Page 27

PART SIXTEEN: Page 29

PART SEVENTEEN: Page 30

PART EIGHTEEN: Page 32

PART NINETEEN: Page 34

PART TWENTY: Page 36

EPILOGUE: Page 39

Edited by Pyari_Zahra - 17 years ago

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Ash

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey Zahra!

love the start of this story pls do cont.i love the fact tht there r no villians in ur story!!! cant wait 4 the nxt part

ayesha

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Amerra

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Posted: 17 years ago

hey zahra

love the 1st part and continue on.....

do check out my two fanfic they are:

love is all around

Hamari Kahani

😃

Edited by Penzee2007 - 17 years ago

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Zahra

@Pyari_Zahra

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ~sweet Ash~

Hey Zahra!

love the start of this story pls do cont.i love the fact tht there r no villians in ur story!!! cant wait 4 the nxt part

ayesha

awwh, thank you, I will update tomorrow!! yeah I din't want any villains trying to seperate Prem and Heer it's just simply about their arranged marriage and how they get closer!! 😳😳

Originally posted by: Penzee2007
hey zahra
love the 1st part and continue on.....

do check out my two fanfic they are:

love is all around

&

Hamari Kahani

😃

Thank you for reading my first part- I will update tomorrow, and I will surely read your FFs too!! xx

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Sonali

@sonali09

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Posted: 17 years ago

hey zahra....awesome update!!!!!!!!👏 luved it...ooohh so prem-heer married! cant wait....plz continue soon! 😳

luv sonali

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Zahra

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sonali09
hey zahra....awesome update!!!!!!!!👏 luved it...ooohh so prem-heer married! cant wait....plz continue soon! 😳

luv sonali

awwh, thanks for the lovely comment!! Yeah i wanted to write something different and had this idea in my mind for the past couple of days so thought what the hell, might as well write it and see what people think!! 😆 I will continue tomorrow!! xx

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purplestar22

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Posted: 17 years ago

'Hey that was great!!! I also liek teh concept of it its kinda different from the original one...... cant wait till the next update

also if ur gonn have a pm list can u add me to it???

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-Garima-

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Posted: 17 years ago

hey zahra!!
nice part...i liked the idea...continue soon!! 😃

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Zahra

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Posted: 17 years ago

Part Two

He entered the room having been pushed in by his two younger sisters Kulraj and Veera. Heer could hear the sound of childish giggling from behind the door, and though embarassed, she bit her lip in order to hide her smile.

'ummh...sorry...woh....yeh dono bhi na...these two will never grow up....' said Prem whilst smiling and scratching the back of his head in awkwardness.

'no..it's ok..' replied Heer, gazing at the floor in her shyness.

Outside Kulraj and Veera were joking about what their Bhaiya and Bhabhi were upto inside!!

Words failed Prem, as he was mesmerised by her attractiveness-it was as if she radiated beauty. Breaking out of the trance he made his way to the bathroom after telling her that he needed to freshen up after the long tiring day.

Without realising, Heer closed her eyes and fell asleep. As he came out of the bathroom, the water dropped down his jaw and he grabbed the towel from the side of the room. He suddenly noticed that Heer had fallen asleep. Smiling to himself, he thought she looked like an angel- innocent and delicate. He moved towards her as if being pulled, admiring her - his parents had chosen a diamond for him- a diamond whose radiance and shine lured him.

Slowly, making sure he didn't wake her up, he pulled the blanket over her. After staring at her for a few more minutes he went round and slept on the other side of the bed with his back towards her, yet continuously turning around to steal cheeky glances of her. Before falling asleep himself the last thing that he thought was 'I didn't get the chance to tell her how beautiful she looks!' 😳

Hope u guys liked the second part- I will update again tomorrow!! As always your comments are greatly appreciated even if they are negative- Every type of critique will help me improve my writing skills!! Thanks for all the lovely comments I have recieved so far!! Love Zahra xx

Edited by Pyari_Zahra - 17 years ago