*~*Escaped*~* AK- Fanfic Part 5 Page #14

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I have decided to write a Fanfic...this is my first one actually, I am new member and never had an account before but I have read fanfics that are so awesome I am inspired.

*~*Escaped*~*

Promo 1

"Ughh!" I moaned. The last thing I heard before slamming my door
is my dad's command to go to military school. I could not believe it. All because of a stupid reasons like "school, and how you are getting out of control" quoting dad. I mean I do not get why dad could not get over the fact that I am not school material. Ok, maybe I could try harder but come one it is not as if I needed to learn that kind of stuff like, algebra. I mean who uses that. No matter what, I have to face it; I mean how hard could
military school be?


--- Kripa Tanya Kapoor <3

Ok so sorry I changed the title because I just realized the story doesn't match the way I want my story it doesn't really match the way i want. So sorry I was in a hurry when I made the title up.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey its ok....wen u gna contt 1st part
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Promo 2

Ok, so I wake up and I'm in a backseat of a black car. Wait what the h*ll is going on. Last time I checked I was in a club with Mandy. I immediately get the hell out but only to see the one and only...

Edited by Elana* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet honey

hey its ok....wen u gna cont 1st part



ummm... i dont know but it will probably take me a day i'm almost finished i just need to add a few perks!

---<3 Elana*
Edited by Elana* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 1- Bad Day

"Kripa baby, you're up" Prithivi said with a smug look on his face opening his arms. "Prithivi, what a great surprise" faking the best smile I possibly could. Oh yeah, Prithivi happens to be my arch nemesis other then a form I have just created with my dad. Anyways Prithivi and I have known each other since little and Prithivi just so happens to love me while I find him rather a clingy little a**hole So, I go ahead and say, "Ok, I'd love to stay and chat but I have to take care of things, so see ya!" Fluttering my eyelashes. "You see, you cant leave. As, you can see we are stranded in the middle of a road where we have no transportation." Did I hear right? "So, u and I are stranded, in the middle of nowhere, with no help, no food-" he cut me off. "Actually, I have a pack of gum-"My threatening glare cut him off. "Gum? That's all you can say. I am stuck-" I was cut off again. "Actually we are stuck." I looked at him with my threatening glare again.

I leaned in closer with my neck and I harshly grabbed on to his neck and squeezed it tight and then started banging on his head with my hand, then I pushed him down on the hard road then started jumping on him and started bashing him up. At least that's what I wanted to do. Instead I just raised my hand in the air and shivered and walked away while screaming, "Ahhhhh!!!!!" I opened the car door and took out my phone, which was luckily inside my purse. I flipped it open and waved it around to see if I could get a signal, which I couldn't.

I walked away from Prithivi and started walking to see if I could get signal or if lucky a ride. I walked around for an hour I got so tired I walked back. My hair got wet, awesome rain what else you got. I generally asked god. My response- Thunderstorm, Lightning and heavy wind which caused a leaf to land in front of my lips. "Plthhhh. Ah gross eww!!!" I jumped up and down and waved my hands franticly in the air. Just as it seemed too impossible for the day to get any worst my hair started frizzing. Oh. My. God.

I got to Prithvi's car then I started to fall asleep. I finally woke up. It was dark and cold and why was the heat not on?!!!. I got of the F***ing car and screamed to Prithivi. "Yo! Prithivi where the F*** are you, I'm freezing to death. Turn the heat on. He came up to me, smiled, and answered, "It's broken." Clearly, he did no understand what I've been through today. "Ok, you listen to me you little a**hole, I have gone through a lot today. Then when I finally start to fall asleep and get cold, There's NO HEAT?!!!!!!!" He answered back, "Well we could snuggle close together to keep warm," he said as he put his arm around me. "Don't even think about it!" I said slapping his arm hard enough for him to squeal "Ow!"

Oh god I was starving. My stomach grumbled. Prithivi was sleeping and snoring I couldn't sleep at all. I remembered about the gum. I smacked his head. He woke up shockingly. In which I screamed at him for the gum. "Umm... you see when you were sleeping I was err hungry... so I just atethelastpeiceofgum" WHATTT?!!!! "Hmmm..." My lips curled up into a smile. Prithivi responded with a gulp. I wasn't that scary, what did he think I was gonna kill him or something. "huh" I let out a sigh. "YOU ATE THE LAST PIECE OF GUM!!!!!". I let out a pause. "Prithivi, Prithivi , Prithivi, you clearly didn't seem to get what I said probably because if you did you wouldn't dare have eaten that gum. But I forgive you." He smiled. I was still hungry.


Next Part:

Part 2/Things seem to get better

Note- Hey guys, since I am a new writer I'm not that good. If you want any information feel free to PM me. I am a writer and i would feel a lot more better if i got more comments. Any ways i will post the next part probabably by tommrow.


---<3 Elana*
Edited by Elana* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowo good one thx update soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part Two will be posted soon!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8 part! im excited to read more of ur fan fic!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow definitely a differant storyline i'll be followin it eagerly
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great ff. quite intereresting. coul u om me when u update plz :)

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