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Jas

@Jaslove

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Posted: 17 years ago

#261

you finally updated😃

man what a surprise for ranbir, being blamed for something he didn't even do.... hope rahil gets better soon....

anand shows up, being supportive of kanya now, what happened to you then when she was pregnant & disowned her.... talk about forgetting stuff....

really loved the update salma👏

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salma

@Sallu-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#262

recap:::
ranbir is in the corner listening to every thing.

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the doctor has been taking quite his time on rahil..

kanya was worried sick..she sat down right next to her dad..

A: im sorry betta yeh saab meer vajese hee horaa haan hain..
naa meh tujje akehle chor jaatha naa tu itni buree zindaagi nah jeethi!

H: no dad aap naahin..kanya dee ki yeh halath sirf or sirf woh kaamina hain

A: paar? meri baachi ko chor diya maine..meh bura baap hoon

K: aap kese bura baap hain?? bura hote tho abhi thak mere paas naahin athe..
mujhe sambal the naahin..yeh app naahin..koi naahin..saab kismat neh kiya..
kismat neh aap ko mujhse door kiya..aab kya mere bette ko??

she cries harder..harry and anand consoles her

the doctor comes out and starts talking to naina..

as soon as kanya hears his voice she gets up and interogates him not giving him time to breath.

Dr: Ms kanya shant hoye..mujhe mawkaa dije meh saab batha tah hoon..

K: jee boliye..

Dr: aap kee beeta rahul

naina: Rahil

Dr: haan rahil ko bohod bruising hui hain aur saar se bohod blood loss huwa hain..

H: blood

Dr: haan blood loss. aur..

K: meh blood dungi..mere bette ko kuch naahin honna chahiye..

Dr: jee haan aur ek baath usse jaal se jaal koon jahiye naahin tho bohod loss
huwa hain naa uski body aur kathre meh jaa sakthi hain.

K: meh dungi mere beete ko ..abhi aayeh..

Nurse: sir theres none that could be found through the whole city branches..

Dr: what?? yeh kessa..abhi hee chahiye!

Harry: what?? kya??

Dr: Ms kanya..uhhr..ek problem hain..rahil kee blood O'negative hain aur sirf O' negative..

K: KYA??

Dr: haan O' negative blood..

kanya was in shock she moved back slowly..

K: yeh naahin hosaktha..doctor phir se check kije koi tho koon hoga jo mere beete ko..

she cries

Dr: i take it that you aren't the type...ummm koi family..

Anand: naahin hum meh se koi naahin..aur kuch naahin karsak the kya??

the dr shakes head no..

kanya rushes into rahils room and crys touching his hand...

K: mera baacha..

anand: kanya..kuch naahin hoga!! kuch naahin!!meh vaada kartha hoon..meh kuch kartah hoon

anand gets out of the building to make phone calls whilst harry and naina comfort her

ranbir saw from outside rahils room how rahil was unconsious..he looked so peaceful..

he saw kanya and his heart cried in pain..he cared about rahil..

he remembers that he is the perfect person to give blood as his matches rahils type..

he rushes to the doctor who was on his way to enter rahils room..

Dr: aap kaun..?

ran: uh doctor meh meh..i overheard your conversation with the people inside the ward ..

Dr: yes..

ran: aur...i.i'm O'negative..i mean my blood is the same type you are looking for..

Dr: what..really

ranbir nodds..

doctors has a big smile on his face..

Dr: please come to my office right away

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ranbir and the doctor in his office
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Dr: are you related to this uhhr rahil??

ran: umm haan samji yeh door kee rishteh daar..

Dr: aap blood denge usse??

ran: haan..meh doonga..

Dr: umm okay i've got a few forms..

ran: excuse me i also heard that its an emergency..
you as a doctor should be doing things right away!!

Dr: yeh but sir we need to kno who is giving the blood and

Ran: that isnt important its what his life that matters..please get on with it

Dr: okay your right i suppose...but please tell me your name...

Ran: ranbir nanda..

Dr: well at least i'll know what to tell the patients relatives

Ran: no please doctor you mustn't say anything about me ..please

Dr: huh?

ran: i want to help him..rahil..but the rest of the family dont accept me..
uhh i just want nothing to be said please!!

Dr: ermm..aap insaan bohod ajeeb hain..you want to help but don't want the credit

Ran: please

Dr: okay..sure..

Ran: now please...take my blood

haan come follow me...

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45minutes later
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Dr: yeh ..?? bohod ajeeb..

Ran: kya?? mera koon haga naa??

Dr: haan ofcourse ofcourse!

Ran: tho phir?? koi problem?

Dr: bilkul naahin..paar

ran: paar?? what dr what?

Dr: yeh blood ..

ran: is that mine..

Dr: no this is rahil's ..this is yours..as far as i can see its..hmm nurse.
.please send this to the bio medical room..say its an emergency

ran: kya.. huwa..

Dr: aabhi paatha chale gaa..

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15 minutes later
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Nurse: doctor sir here are teh reports..

the Doc takes a minute to read the file..

Ran: doctor aap yeh kya kara hain.hain..rahil needs blood immediatly..

doctor smiles..

Dr: yes ofcourse...

ran: the blood is okay right?

Dr: its more than that..

Ran: mathlam?

Dr: well Mr nanda..rahil and your blood matches exaclty..

ran: well yes ofcourse it should shan't it? it is the same type..

Dr: yes but

ran: what?

Dr: mr Nanda stop being so tensed..

Ran: please tell me..you're taking your time.!

Dr: well mr nanda..the DNA found in the blood..in rahil and your blood matches.

ran: what? but that ..DNA..from parents right..? so.? urrh what?

Dr: Mr Nanda aap koi door ke rishte naahin hain rahil kee..balki your his biological father!

them room was silent for a minute..ranbir still couldnt take it in

Ran: hmm.wha..what.. i don't get it? what..what do you mean..

Dr: your his father. you Mr Nanda are Rahil's father! it shouldn't be Rahil ..Go..Goh

doctor check the file..

Dr: it shouldn't be Rahil Godbole..his name should be Rahil Nanda!

ran:...how..what??

Dr: Mr nanda..i can't explain it even simpler! Mr nanda you are rahil's father..

ranbir sat down on the chair..

Dr: aap yahaan betiyen meh rahil ko blood ..i'll be back soon..be here..

the doctor left..ranbir felt suffocated all of a sudden..he went out..

he bumbed into anand on the way

anand didnt see him as he was busy on his phone but ranbir did..

images popped up in his head as if he's seen that man before and he was shouting at him..

ranbir had to know more..what was the doctor on about being the biological fatehr of..rahil??

he went backt o his office and found kanya's file..

gosh how could he though..he never touched a women except kanya..but he hasn't known her that long

so what does that mean that kanya isnt the real mother? but how..he hasnt touched anyother!

he had to know more..

he found kanya's file..

it had her old address there..right in the heart of mumbai.

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The doctor came back to his office after an hour with kanya..

kanya was begging him to know who was it that offered and saved ehr child..

she had huge debt to pay..she cried thinking of almost losing her child

she had to thank him personally..so the doctor brought her to his office to meet him

he thought it was important..something was going on here..

kanya ran in first but was disappointed when no one was there..

doctor came in

Dr: what? but i told him not to move..

K: what?? i have to see him..i have to thank him i have to..

Dr: why did he go? he needs to be here its extremely important

K: i need to thank him i need to..do you have an address ?

Dr: no dear nothing..its like the man was never here..
where'd he go.he tells me to keep a low profile off him...but disappearS

K: huh?..Dr yeh aap kya kehrahain hain ?

Dr: well.. i suppose he has a reason..he was so shocked..

K: why what happened..

Dr: oh i forgot..well it turned out that he is the biological father of rahil..

kanya looked as if someone had just slapped her.

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well i did this within an hour..
am pretty pround of this part..i think i made it upto your expectations..
thats all for now..
please comment i really appreciate them..
i will continue soon!
salma...x

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Shreya Patel

@spate22

Sparkler

Posted: 17 years ago

#263

This is an awesome story!!!!!👏I love it!!! Thank you sooooo much for updating!!!! I'm glad Ranbir found out that he is the father!!! Now he needs to remember his past!!!😉 I wonder what Kanya's going to do now?!!!😕 Please update soon!!! 😃

Shreya

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#264

aww great update

plzzzz continue soon!

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Fatemah

@KC294

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#265

i loved it....
finally ranbir will remember his past
pls continue soon

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#266

The plot thickens. Salma U really leave us wanting more. Hurry up with the next update.

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Maha_Sid-dewani

@Maha_Sid-dewani

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#267

it was totally awesome.. it was soo well built... loved it soo much....

keep upp the good work. n alsoi thanks for the pm

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Gayathri

@GGG3

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#268

Salma, you have every reson to be proud of this part. It surpassed my expectations. The turn of events are amazing. Very very well done. Can't wait for the next part.