FF:+*+Ghoonghat Main Tera Chehra+*+:NEW SMALL PG50

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Congrats! GTMC FF made 5 months!! PM me for questions or suggestions
+*+ Characters +*+
Rani: Rani is a sweet natured girl who loves her family and wants to reach very high goals and never wishes to leave her family....she is a soft spoken,confident 19 year old who has also wished that her dream prince will take her to his Kingdom.....
Prince Yudhishthir Shisodya: the Royal heir of Shisodya Vangh...a handsome,strong and pure man who is as well very serious.....he respects his family alot and would have never thought he would give up something not for his family...a confident man who's father has always had high expectations from him which he completes before his father can think of them...26 yrs old
Raja Saheb: a man of high standards the current King of Shidodya Vangh.....very tough and strict man.....very over confident but loves his children...58 yrs old
Choti Rani: a evil and cruel woman.....Second wife of Raja Saheb and her sister is the first wife....she hates Raja Sahebs kids over that Raja Saheb plainly ignores her kids.....she only wants good for herself and her children...hates her elder sister aswell...wants to get Yudhishthir out of mahal so her son can take over the buisness empire and be the next King...48 yrs old
Prince Rudra Shisodya: a man who lives in the world of modernety....his life consists of going out,drinking,dating etc. 20 yrs old...Choti Rani's son
Princess Bhavtya Shisodya: a common 16 yr old who is definentily mean and over confident...she is the daughter of Choti Rani...loves to taunt her Step-sister and just hates the traditions of mahal..
Princess Niharika: Loving,caring and kind woman....she had been widowed at a very young age....she is always wearing white and never gets out from her room....loves her mother and elder brother....thinks in equality for all people....22 yrs of age..
Badi Rani: the mother of Niharika and Yudhishthir. a very kind loving and stroing woman.....currently is in such a state she has lost her memory.....she is suspicious over her sister who is the reason she is in this state......loves her children alot...50 yrs old
Rajkumari Bhumi: the 21st century princess who's life is just like prince Rudra's. Purely spoilt and is very over confident.....thinks girls are better than guys....19 yrs of age..
Saksham: Yudishthir's friend councellor.....never lets down anyone....
Bhanumati: the female head of the servants hates Rani but loves her niece....
Kalli: a silly girl who is the niece of Bhanumati.....hates Rani too....works as maid..
Deno Kaka: the eldest servant in the mahal he is the father of Saksham....
Sohni: Rani's friend in the village....she is like Geet in Jab We Met...
Sukhiya: the male head of servants and CR's employee.....is with her plans to kill Badi Rani..
Sumitra: Rani's mother....quiet soft spoken woman who believes her daughter will reach heights noone has never reached...
Dadi: rani's dadi.....sweet elderly lady
Munna: Ranis younger brother 8 yrs old...loves her sister alot and loves to hang around and play pranks...
Sakshi Bua: Raja Saheb's tectless sister....widowed and a gossip queen....attached alot with CR....evil lady
Chandarkala: Rani's mean chachi.....she only likes people with money and fame..
Chacha: Chandarkala's wierd husband...
Chandu: Chandarkala's son.....
Champa: ....... daughter..
Chambaili:.........daughter
Aditi: Female police officer.....nice yet strict woman...
Karishma: Bhumi's friend....
Zeenat: Bhumi's friend...
Karan: Bhumi's ex-boyfriend....
Ajay: Yudhishthir's university friend in USA.....nice religious guy who married niharika then died in a car crash...
Mini: Real name Minnisha....daughter of Sakshi bua...over modern and rude
Bhushan: evil truck driver....drunkaro and a guy who's life is all about money
Jhuma bua: Rani's evil bua..runs a pan stand in village...very cheapscale chats..
Pam: Sakshi's daughter real name Parminder....attitude queen
+*+ Map +*+
*Kahin To hogaa / Page 1
Rani is introduced as she is leaving for the mahal to give CR some traditional clothes she bought from agra...
Mahal Kuchh Iss Tarah / Page 2
Rani gets in mahal where sukhiya takes clothes but her purse is in the bag sukhiya is taking....After following sukhiya Rani gets in RB's room and because of some problem she dresses as RB......Yudi hasnt seen RB before....
Yeh Ishq Hai / Page 2
Rani scatters away from mahal and reaches her village.....where she thinks she is in love....
Rajmahal Visiting / Page 4
Shidodya Vangh visiting Rani's village where Rani dances in a ghoonghat infront of Yudi and Shisodya Vangh...
Baarish Ki Rhim Jhim / Page 6
The rain begins and Rani's ghoonghat falls off....Yudi runs after her in the rain and catches her and has some unanswered questions....
Nokraani Factor / Page 7
Chandarkala Chachi and her husband send Rani to mahal for working where Yudi comes to her room and she confesses she loves him alot...
Tumhi Ho / Page 8
Yudi gets his answer and leaves....Rani feels scared as well as happy she told him the truth...CR decides that Rani should be raped by one of her secretary so then when Yudi goes there hesaves her and when they come back RS will kick out Yudi from the Palace...
Goonda Galore / Page 8
A gurard kidnapps Rani and Yudi gets to see him kidnapping her....he saves her before she gets raped and his car crashes and they go on foot...
Chaand Jalne Lagaa / Page 9
Rani and Yudi stop at some unknown place as Rani was feeling very scared theyre they get very close in their love making relation...
Raja Saheb / Page 11
Sukhiya had made the full video of YuRa during their love-making....he puts it on DVD player and shows RS....bhanumati is near slapping Rani infront of whole Shisodya Vangh but Yudi holds her hand backwards and confesses he will marry Rani infront of whole parivaar...
Pyaar Hai Yaa Sazaa / Page 11
Rani tells Yudi he should marry bhumi if he loves Rani....Yudi is heartbroken and Rani is also...
Jaag Soona Laage / Page 11
YuRa very depressed and Rani feels so bad she could kill herself.....Bhumi has to come today as RS and UD are in office...
Bhumi's Entry / Page 12
Bhumi comes in her vulgar clothing and CR changes that...she meets RS and Yudi later on and she and UD walking in garden where she is holding his hand tightly which makes Rani cry...
Fiery Love / Page 12
Rani feels she should go for suicide but when she hears the Palace is on fire she decides this is her chance she stands infront of the Fire...but Yudi saves her but they both lay unconcius due to the fire....
Love Will Find The Way / Page 13
YuRa finish argument and finally Yudi thinks he will tell Bhumi about YuRa's love story......But he needs time....
Mahal Lautana / Page 13
UD gifts Rani a beautiful locket and CR had decided she is going to kill BR on RS upcoming birthday....Yudi asks as a joke that does Rani has a gift for him and....
Gift of Love / Page 14
Rani gifts UD a ganeshji statue.....Rani also hears laughs in CR's room....she gets confused and....
Worthless Laughs / Page 16
Rani gets confused over those laughs she heard and decides to spy on that room but when Sukhiya comes out she gets confused as they were female laughs....
Return to the Village / Page 16
Rani returns to the vilage where she finds out her grandmother has got cancer...UD still unable to tell RB the truth.....
The RB riot / Page 16
UD suspects on RB as she had crushed something under her shoe.....Rani calls him to come immediatly to the village....when he gets there dadi maa had DIED of cancer on which he decides to bring sumitra devi to palace.....where RS stops him but in the end he agrees and lets Sumitra Devi stay...
Bhari Mann / Page 17
Niharika becomes Rani's close friend and shares her secrets with her....she feels relieved after telling her secrets to rani....
Inn Lamhon Ke Daman-I / Page 17
Niharika gifts rani a sari which she wears the whole day until she meets Yudi in his room and they have some moments to remember....
Inn Lamhon Ke Daman-II / Page 19
......They continue those moments....Rani leaves and remembers that moment.....
Navratri / Page 20
On Navratri everyone is having fun exept for nikki who accedently bumps into Saksham.....Rani was looking beautifull....Everyone ready for RS birthday...
Killer Birthday/ Page 20
Symptoms/ Page 21
Pehli Nazar Main/ Page 21
"Saksh Nikki special"
Saakshi Bua/ Page 22
Mini and Pam/ Page 23
Dil Kya Kare/ Page 23
Saas,Bahu aur Saakshi/ Page 24
Yudi's Arrival/ Page 25
Tere Liye/Page 25
"Special YuRa date"
Lake of Love/Page 26
"YuRa date Part 2"
Ajay's Ghost/Page 27
The Story Begins/ Page 28
"YuRa leave palace...new twist,new life"
Saat Phere/ Page 29
*Updated Every week
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Chapter 1: Kahin to hoga....
Rani fixed her braids as her friend was yelling 'rani ab aao naa, aaj humnain yeh samaan mahal puhanchana hai!' Rani smiled with a cute grin 'dekho abhi tau sirf das bajai hain, humnain to gyara bajay jaana hai' at once her friend says ' mughe buhat jaldi hai....maine suna hai keh jo shidodyawangh kay bade kunwerji hain naa? suna hai woh tau aaek dum masst hain šŸ˜†' Rani laughs as she sees her friend dreamily thinking of kunwerji.....at once clock tings 11:00 and the both girls rush to the 'bail ghari wala' where they exitedly cant wait so see the beautiful mahal...when they get there Rani and her friend's eyes shine brightly the beautiful mahal was looking like heaven! Her friend held her by the hand and they went to guards at gate...
guard: aapne kis se milna hai?
friend: ji humnain choti rani ji say milna hai..yeh riwaiti kaprey unho nai humsai Agra se laane ko kaha tha...
guard: Jaiye
He says as he opens the doors as the girls look at the beautiful garden where they slowly walk to the back door.....
friend: Rani, main to bhai kunwerji ki dulhan banu gi..
Rani : (gently laughs) theek hai ban jao dulhan.....
friend: waise rani....aek baat pucho?
Rani: haan pucho..
friend: tumhare kunwerji kab aye gaye?
Rani: woh kahin to honge....kuch pata nahin shayad woh yahan hi hon....mughe dekh rahe hun.....
More Later.....
Edited by Princezz8 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ooh nice idea. Love the start...šŸ‘
Update with the rest soon pleasešŸ˜
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Yes for sure rakhie thnx for liking my silly story chapter 1......happy reading!!! also luvin ur story rakhie......
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Posted: 17 years ago
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comon yaar that is not silly i am aiting for the next part it is very nice
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Aww dunia!!
thnx!! well maano ya na manno its silly but soon im adding more masala and saazish stuff etc ti it!!
Happy Reading!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Princezz8

Aww dunia!!

thnx!! well maano ya na manno its silly but soon im adding more masala and saazish stuff etc ti it!!
Happy Reading!!

honey don,t forget to bring them together we want to see YuRa romance 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ofcourse!!!
i will surely add some romance!!
More later on...
Happy Reading!!!
Edited by Princezz8 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Rajeshwari - the Eesha 'drama' is closed. Could we not bring all that up again.
If you want to post an FF please do so. I think the users of this forum are wise enough not to tar everyone with the same brush.
Give us no reason to 'hate' you and we wont. Simple as.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Chapter 2: Mahal....kuchh iss tarah Rani and her friend went to back door where they find sukhiya...Sukhiya holds the clothes and goes....while leaving ani sees her bag is missing (handbag) she thinks sukhiya took it accedentaly so she runs after him.....then she gets lost in Rajmahal corridors where she goes in Bhumi's room finding sukhiya....bhumi is not there who is taking a shower unknown of rani being outside where her new gharara is ready to wear, sukhiya has not seen bhumi before....rani hears sukhiya coming to this corridor and instead of getting in trouble she gets in bhumi's clothes and gets safe....then as she just thinks of getting them off Yudi comes inside....with a plain face he looks at her fiance and says " suna tha humnain badi maa say keh humari hone wali patni buhat khoobsurat hain....yeh sachh hai...." rani confused and and doesnt know that she is dressed as bhumi who is Yudi's fiance " ji woh aapki hone wali patni kahan hain?" yudi thinks she is joking....he just sligtly holds her shoulder and whispers " aap " Rani's eyes open widly and her face flares down as she is now stuck with someone who thinks she is her fiance.....and no ordinary but kunwerji!!
More later....

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