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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

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Posted: 17 years ago

#221

awwsome⭐️ ur a brilliant writter👍🏼 i hv no word😊😳 such a touching one😭😳😳 it is awwsome ur superb👏👏 plz update it soon😊

A heart dies whn it is not able to 2 share its feelings.... But a heart kills itself whn d othr heart doesn't understand its feelings...!!

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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: x-Ridzzie-x

hey kat di

awwww Esha's funeral made me cry....

specialy wen dat song came up....**di, i dont like u....u make me cry**

hahhha....buh i luv readin yur ff....its lyk watchin a film

wen armaan came at ridz apartment nd he said somethin *i 4gt* it made me cry....

nd ridz holding Esha's dresss as if she was holdin Esha herself....

da last part was soo cute...

*cud u kiss me goodbye*

awwwww....

buh i hope dis isnt goodbye

plzzzzzzzz update sooner

cant w8 4 da parts

luv ya

ridz,

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awww ridz did not meant to make u cry😭..... and if you can see them then honey that your imagination😛

I just pened what i felt i could see in the apartment... and if that come across then i am happy..

Love Kat😳

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saira

@.x.Saira.x.

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#223

omg😭

esha's funeral made me cry😭

it was a v.emotional part and well written too👏👏👏

and the kiss goodbye was so sweet😳

plz update soon😳!

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Avanti

@forevercharmed

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#224

awwww that was sooo sad.. the last line was fantastic though!! i loved it! pleaseeee continue soon! 😳

Avanti

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Fahima..

@SillyAngel

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#225

kitty!!

That was just soo emotional...and to top it of ..she is leaving?!?

she is pregnant with his child...2nd time lol

and how will take care of herself?

continue soon without any delay thank you

love

afifa

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Ananya

@_Ananya_

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#226

OMG....I really don't know what to say...This part really has struck a chord in my heart....It was bubbling with emotions which were all beautifully described....

The sheer sorrow which Riddhima felt was really sad..The way she held Esha's dresses,the entire appartment scene and ofcourse,the funeral itself, were heart wrenching...Really...I had tears in my eyes...U really outdid yourself with this part...you proved your versatility as a writer.Right from humour to romance and now emotions,you excel in all aspects....

armaan's father's life story was also well written...It was sad but sweet....

OMG the end!! She asked him to kiss her goodbye!!! Poor girl...She sounded so broken!! honestly though I hope this is NOT goodbye....

Do continue soon...Can't waaaaait for the next update... :)

Love,

Ananya

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#227

aawwwkat that was so touching...the emotions were stunning.....loved reading the flow of the story i wonder when any of this gona get fixed n how......waitng util the next one!!!

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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: spln
aawwwkat that was so touching...the emotions were stunning.....loved reading the flow of the story i wonder when any of this gona get fixed n how......waitng util the next one!!!

cheers NJ...i to am😲 about the whole thing😆

Love Kat😉