FF: 'Khamoshi' - Chapter 14: Pg. 82 {Jan. 2}

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Kiran

@kimmu

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Posted: 17 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: pooji123456789
awesome amazing
loved prem heer meher preet scene
keep it up
can't wait for next update

Thanks so much Pooja! Btw it was your b-day right? Happy belated birthday, hope my wish still counts... 🤗
I'll try to update some time soon. But I'm not sure about it... 😳

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Kiran

@kimmu

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Posted: 17 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: sweet_charmed
omg hilarious update👏👏👏...i love the whole preet/meher war idea :D.... can't wait for more romantic cute scences btw prem and heer.. i hope manmeet doesn't cause too mch problem... can't wait for ur next update😊

Thaanks! Glad i could make you laugh.. hehe.. Yup i love war's too, so i'm gonna be having loads of fun while writing this.. 😈
Hmm.. well that i can't garuntee, its Manmeet! But I'll try to keep him under control... 🤣
I'll try to update sometimes soon.. 😳

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@shabo24

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Posted: 17 years ago

#303

Well I'm not first, but w/e......! I'm still the best!!!!😳

OK Kimzie....this is for you!!!!👏

Sometimes, I can not believe you are only 14! (Actually I can🤣) That was one AMAZINGLY written part....finally seeing some progress with the story....very intruging ot read!!!!😃

Awwwww the Teji mothery love was nice....sweet, but so affectione...I was like "Woah dude, you just met these guyz and they are cuddling on your shoulder? I mean ok if you were like 6 or something.....🤣"

HAHAHAHA this Meher-Preet war is soooo jks! OMG....I lovve reading how you describe thier emotions and all that!!!🥱Get my drift?🤣

AWWWWWWWWWWW! The lil Prem-Heer scene wass shhhhoooo shweet!!!!!!! I was AWWWWWWWWWWing thrught the whole thing.......kaash vikki yahan hota! hey that remindes me!!! SMEXY!

Ughhhh now we come to the disgusting part....Balwant, DJ and MM. I SO LOVE Ash here....she is such an AIRHEAD.....omg.....her character was soooo funy! I loved it!!!!!!! and the way she was battign ehr eyelashes at Preet......you HAVE to bring Sukz in soon.....we need a Preet war!!!🤣🤣🤣

Ughhh I hate this dowery thing....sooo stupid..... losers!!!🤢

HAHAHA when prem offered his room i was like.....INTRESTING!!!!!!😃

As always....Meher-Preet pranks.......always funny......Now it's war...!!!!😈

Iss MM ki toh mein 🤬What a @*$&(@*$&#($^(#*&$*#^$! UGHHHH! Please......PLEASE PLEASE...make prem not think that heer loves this fugly man!!!!!🤢thats disgusting!!!!

ohhhh precap...very intruging kimmi!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃

UPDATE SOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!

*impatient muh*

Shabz....

PS PS...You so HAVE to use SMEXY somewhere!!!!!😆

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Kiran

@kimmu

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Posted: 17 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: jdots
hey nice part...Loved meher and Preet.

Thanks so much, glad you liked it. Yea Meher and Preet are just awesome. There like the masala to the fic.. thanks for the comment once again! 😳

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Rinki

@~Rinki~

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Posted: 17 years ago

#305

Originally posted by: kimmu

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Lady_Impala

@Lady_Impala

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Posted: 17 years ago

#306

great update kimmu sorry for the late comment.but got to say loved it.the war is on for sure between preet and meher and meher has even got herself a helper ;ash though doubt she would help him.and manmeet got to say this guy has got the guts to lie as a matter of factly about heer being in love with him(dream on dude).hope prem finds out soon ki manmeet is lying.cant wait for the next part ,all about prem-heer falling in love to the war between the two pranksters(jeet kiski ho gi).update soon

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guju_angel

@guju_angel

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#307

hawwwwwwwww.. interesting update kimz!.. lol.. omg.. i hate dj n bat-face n stupid manmeet.. arghhhhhhhhhh.. hope prem n him have a wrestling match and *BANG!* manmeet gets smacked on d backside n is kicked out of the house!.. arghhhhhhh.. i hate him shoooooooooooo much!.. lol.. k enuff of tht.. i'll b waiting for d nxt part curiously lol.. hmm.. woner wat prem's gunna do.. lol

x. Radz

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Sunayna

@x.sunayna.x

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Posted: 17 years ago

#308

Preet and Meher's war cracks me up!

but i hate Manmeets lies!

Looking forward to the update!

?xXx?

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Rinki

@~Rinki~

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Posted: 17 years ago

#309

kiru!!! weren't u supposed to update yesterday??!!! -stric rinkz- hmm?? well wen ARE u updating!!? me is wanting to know what will happen.. that little punk mm needs to get pranked remember?!

rinkz

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Kiran

@kimmu

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Posted: 17 years ago

#310

Originally posted by: Ghia
It was awesome...just loved the update.👏 I just hate manmeet...😡hope prem doesn't listen to him and asks heer about it. Preet and meher are hilarious. I wonder why teji keeps ignoring meher...I mean she is the youngest one so shouldnt she be more pampered than heer and her brother. anyways update soon 😊

Thank you so much, i'm glad you liked it. Don't worry, there's lots of people behind you with that. Manmeet.. grr.. hate him too.. Prem's gonna be a smart detective in my fic, i'm really fond of detectiveness so i'm not letting Manmeets lame lie affect Prem, well sort of.. tehehe...
Yea Preet and Meher, the names are just enough to get me laughing... if you think there funny now, then just wait till the next prank.. side-affects = Manmeet. 😈 (Rinks I know your waiting for this one)
Your right on that part, but Mehers the most rebelious too, so Teji tries not to mess with her. And well eventually ends up ignoring her, which is kind of sad. I'll try to update soon.. can't really garuntee it.. 😳

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