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Kripa Sharma the exact replica of her mother Mahi Sharma who died four years after giving birth to her only child, the child who she considered to be the symbol of her love , the child who was considered to be a mistake by her father and the child who was considered to be illegitimate by society. After her mother's death the middle class Sharma family did not accept her , they called her a stain on their reputation refused to bear the burden of their daughter's ( whom they disinherited) sins. Her father was unknown to her and the Nanital society where her mom lived and gave birth to Kripa. The innocent four year old Kripa was left with no one to call her own, with no family or friends who could accept her. She was left in this cruel world thirsty for love. With no other option left she was put in the poorly maintained orphanage of Nanital where she was forced to do hours of labor, suffered the harsh and brutal beatings of the head of the orphanage Vasu, who hated Kripa due to her beauty and innocence.

She lived fourteen years in that orphanage in vain, no one adopted her because of her "history" and none of the orphans claimed her to be their friends because they could not look beyond the image society made of Kripa. Kripa lived alone within a crowd of fifty girls suffering every moment of her life but regardless of all the hatred she faced, all the taunts she heard, all the beatings she suffered it was never enough to snatch the kindness from Kripa's warm heart and steal the innocence from her chocolate brown eyes. She grew up to be a beautiful lady with innocence, elegance and kindness. She was sanskari always worshiped God regardless of all the pain God had bestowed upon her. She never complained to God about her cursed life, her pain , her loneliness and wished for only love but who knew what life had in store for her. Will she ever get love ?

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It was the day May 5, 2003 that changed the life of innocent Miss Sharma , as Kripa walked through the streets on Nanital coming back from college, as rough hard caught her slender wrist and trusted her against the a factory wall causing her bump her head against the wall. Scared Kripa tried to scream for help but a other hand of the scoundrel Manik pressesd against Kripa's soft lips suppressing the sound of her endless cries and then removed his hands and aimed his rough, alcohol coded lips towards the soft , pink lips of Kripa , he said in a seductive voice " hey darling don't scream I am just having a little fun, just like your father had with your mother" as he said that Kripa struggled in anger to get out of his grip and finally said using her soft scared voice "Don't … you dare say anything about my mother " and slapped Manik across his dirty face using her fair hands. Angered from the slap Manik grabbed a handful of Kripa's hair and brought her beautiful face towards him and forcefully place his rough lips on her; As Kripa felt the alcohol on his lips transferring in her mouth she shook vigorously trying to loosen from this demon's grip and soon she was successful and ran towards the shabby orange a block south from where the molester stood .

After running as fast as she could she reached the orphanage and ran towards her bed and cried her eyes out . She felt so helpless and used but she couldn't do anything about it, if she told Vasu Aunty what happened she would end up siding Manik and accuse Kripa of being a sl*t which would only make things worse for her. After crying for ten minutes Vasu's screeching voice commanded the girls to get back to their chores as all of them returned from school or college. Soon Kripa suppressed her tears and started cleaning the worn out wall of the ancient orphanage and as she worked hard on cleaning the wall Vasu stroked the huge belt on Kripa's delicate back leaving huge scathes on her back and then she barked " jalidi karo, I don't have all day , get that" and before leaving she struck Kripa's bruised back with the belt once again causing her to wince in pain. Once she was done with her endless number of chores she walked to her bed and touched her bloody back and cried in pain once more as her cotton kameez kissed her wounds. As she nursed her bruised back Vasu's voice screamed " Shrama pack your bags, tumhe koi lena aya hai".

After hearing Vasu's command she was bewildered that who had come to the orphanage to get her. She was pretty sure that her grandparents had not come, since they left her as soon as she was born, remembering her grandparents rejection a tear fell from Kripa's chocolate brown eyes but she instantly wiped her tears and continued packing her back and ran down stairs since she knew how impatient Vasu can get. When she got downstairs she saw a man in his fifties dressed in a black Armani suit with a silk black shirt ; his eyes the name chocolate brown color and black gelled hair with a hint of gray talking to Vasu. Then as she walked to Vasu the man saw her with surprised and bewildered eyes. Seeing his facial expression Kirpa was confused and wondered who this rich man could be and why is he here?

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey great jobb...it looks very interesting....im eager to read more....poor kripaaa....i feel so bad for her...but hope the man whoever he is.....helps her get to angad....lol....i loved it...continue soon
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ooo and welcome to IF...jus saw ur new....ur gonna love this place...im devershi...u can call me hershi 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8 intro
feel so sorry for kripa
continue soon and plz PM me
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh wow!!! i feel so bad for kripa
but i love your ff...
im very curious to read more..
please do continue soon
as always
sukhi :)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part...alredi in luv wid dis fanfic....awww poor kripa feel so sorry 4 her...hmm wonder who has cum to get her..cont soon plz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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The first part is awesome...really enjoyed reading it. Wonder who the man is...probably Kripa's father? cont soon.
Sana
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Smileyface

ooo and welcome to IF...jus saw ur new....ur gonna love this place...im devershi...u can call me hershi 😊

Thanks for the comment and the welcome i really apperciate it
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: iamsmart

The first part is awesome...really enjoyed reading it. Wonder who the man is...probably Kripa's father? cont soon.

Sana

Thanks and i will cont. as soon as possible
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet honey

awesome part...alredi in luv wid dis fanfic....awww poor kripa feel so sorry 4 her...hmm wonder who has cum to get her..cont soon plz

Thanks I will post the new part soon.
Love Rose

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