FF: Pyar Ki Manzil Epilogue (Pg 91) 10/08 - Page 70

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Posted: 17 years ago

Epilogue


2 years later….

All the kids were fighting!! And it was crazy again!!!… everyday….. same old thing….

Jigs: Arre why are you guys fighting?? What happened???? See this is why… I don't bring Ranveer here……. u guys always……

Sahil: But Bua… ranveer is getting mad at me!!!!

Jigs: Ranveer why?? Why are you yelling??

Ranveer: Look at this!!… Look at what he did!!

Sahil: He did it!!!!!!

Ranveer: No you did it!!

Sahil: No!!!

Ranveer: yes!!!!……

Sahil: No!!!!

Ranveer: Yes!!

Sahil: no! Bua.. tell him na!

That went on… and Jigs stopped their fighting!! These two… they were always at it!!

Sahil: It wasn't me bhaiyya!!!!…

Ranveer: Then???

Sahil: Who else would do it??

Neha: I know!!!!!

Neha was in her little dress!!!! With her little 2 pigtails………..and holding her teddy in one hand!!!

Sahil: Who??

Neha had pointed!!!…..

Sahil: Uff!! I shouldve noticed!!!!

Ranveer: Yeah!! Always!!!!

Sahil: chachi?????…… Chachi????

Ranveer: mami????

Jigs: Bhabhi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bani had come out!!!!….. seemed like she was popular today! everyone was calling her!!! she had come wiping her hands from the kitchen…..

Bani: Whats wrong???

Sahil: Look at this mess!!!…

Bani was looking around!!!!.. she was like oh god!!!!

Bani: again?? not again!!!

Sahil: Yes again!!!….. Chachi…. Every day!! All of our toys are always scattered all over the place!!!!…

Bani had gone to Atharva!!!!…… …

Bani: My naughty boy!!! What is this?

Atharva: Momma!!…..

Bani: Don't u momma me!!

A: Momma… I wuv vu!!

Bani: No!!!!….

A: Yesh!!!

Bani: Nope!!

A: Yesh momma!! I wuv vu!! Muah!!!!!

Bani: Why are you troubling ur brothers and sister???

Atharva was just giggling!!!!… He had gone to Sahil and ranveer… and he had given them both hugs!!! And they were looking at each other!!!!

A: I wuv u bhai!!!!!

Atharva… was life of the party!!!… He was very loud and hyper little fella!!!….. Everyone loved him!! and he went by everyone!!!….. He wouldn't even leave the others!!!…. He loved playing with is older 2 brothers and his sister!!!.. Sometimes Neha was a little too much with her tea parties….. but he would get over that!!!……. Neha would always be kissing A on the cheek!!!…..

A: Yucky!!

Neha: No yucky!!!! U luv me!!!

A: ish!! Yesh!!!

Neha: See no yucky!!!

Bani was always behind him!! sometimes he was a little too much!!!….. but he's the best thing that has ever happened in her life after marrying Jai!!!!.….. Atharva was a copy of Jai!!!……. He would sometimes walk like Jai….. and it was the cutest little thing!! Jai was very attached to him!!!…..

Jai had come home from work and Atharva wasted no time and he would leave what he would be doing and he would run to Jai giving him a big tight hug!!

Jai: Hey champ!!!

Atharva: Papa!!!!!! I wuv vu!

Jai: really?? I love you too!!!

When Jai would come home….Atharva would never leave Jai!

Would always follow him around like anything!! That's the only time he would be on his best behavior was when Jai was there!!!!!! And that's the time when the kids would rat on him and everything and tell Jai what he was doing through out the day!!!…. Jai would ask this to A and A would just stay quiet!!

Jai would end up putting him to sleep and everything and taking care of him after he would come home from work!!…. He knew that Bani would be tired….. after taking care A all day she needed time for herself….. As another bundle of Joy was on its way!!!……. Bani didn't want to be surprised this time.. so she had gone to the doc and found out that it was another boy!!!……

Bani was on her 4th month….. and she was trying to take it easy… but with A… she couldn't really take it easy!!!… Purva had given Birth to another baby girl!!… Natu had 2 little angels… he was def happy!!!….Everyone was looking at her!!… She was sooo cute!!!.. Neha would sometimes be jealous…. Becuz she was the only girl…. but with another girl…. Everyone was giving the attention to her!!….

Karuna and Nakul had ended up moving!!…. They had moved… as Nakul got a better job!!…. They were both happy…… They wanted to enjoy life a little bit before settling down…. And having kids of their own!!!.. they were going to wait!!!

Bani's life had def taken a huge turn and it was all for the best!!….. From everything that happened in her life.. after Jai had come….. nothing had gone wrong!!!….. She was blessed!!…. She couldn't ask for more!!!..

With the kids… things were hectic… but when she time to really think about it….. she wasn't complaining one bit!!!! God had given her a 2nd life… and this life was for the better!!…..

Jai had never thought that his life would turn out like this after marriage!!! After Bani coming into it….he loved it!!!!! He couldn't be more happier!!! This family was now complete!!!…..with Bani on his side…. He didn't need anything else!!!!! He had an awesome son…. And another one was on his way!!!…He was a happy husband and a proud father!!…. Bani was a great wife… and an awesome mother!!!……

Jai had put A to sleep!!!… And Bani had walked inside and kissed him on his forehead….. They had both closed the door.. and left from there…. they had gone outside in the garden…. And looked up at the stars….. She had rested her head on his shoulders…. And together….. they were both enjoying the night….. as well as the many more days to come!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Thats it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was the last of it!!!!!!!!!! Haila it came to an end!!!!... Well some things just have to!!! I do have another FF in mind!!! But i need to start on it!!! I will update it like how i did to this one...... every couple of days!!!.... not like PNM which is like everyday!!!!!....

Thanks you guys!!!!...... For all the comments!!! They meant a lot to me!!!!! This was the very 1st FF where I didnt write like my old style!!! Its rubbed off i dont think i can write like that anymore!!!!!.......



THE END!!!







MrsKhan-Sobti thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey u ended it.😭..
i rly liked it..
but it was awesome.....👍🏼
looking forward for ur nex FF...
lovelyyrose thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏👏👏 that was a cool end
enjoyed the most
thankyou
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Posted: 17 years ago

Guli that was an awesome ending to an awesome FF! 👏 I'll miss this FF alot! Hope I'll be able to catch your FF before I'm gone!

btw, I think that you've forgotten about mine FF too! 😉😆😆 jk! 😳😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awww...such a cute ending. JB had a little boy...and another one is on the way too. 😳
Sad to see this ff end...u did a great job with ur new style of writing. I know i made u try something knew..never thought u'd forget ur old style altogether though!😆 And remember u were saying u could never write like this? Well surprise surprise! 👏 Fantastic...bas ek shikayat...guess champu will agree on this...smileys gayab kyun hogye! 😡😆

Great stuff

Tazoo
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Posted: 17 years ago
great story
waiting for the next ff
sadsunzarsum thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
i loved it thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
KS_addict thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
This FF was really good!! Enjoyed from beginning to end!!!
You never disappointed!!! Awesome job!
Auditi thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Guli 😃 🤗

Sooo u ended the FF..... Really liked reading it.... 😃 👏 😉 😛

Sooo JnB had a son & anotha on the way.... Chooo ChweeeeeeeT!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

It was really a nyc ending to a nyc FF... 👏 😃 👍🏼
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Posted: 17 years ago
ok babe...i finally caught up...

loved it...all of it...cant make the comment too long because my battery is about to die...😔...i have 10min left and i have to print something...so ill make this quick...loved it...totally loved it...especially pregnant, hormonal bani 😆...the shopping...too much...loved it...

ahem ahem...someone needs to update the other ff too

JAZ

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