Kya Yahi Pyaar Hai(AR ff)-part17B-pg34(AR meet-US)

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dolly_sweety

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Posted: 17 years ago

hiee guys.....just thought of writting a fanfic on armaan-ridhimaa........plzz dooo comment..

well it goes like this....

Arya:here....maharaj has sent this dress for u.....nd he wants u 2 get ready as soon as possible.....he says he can't wait 2 make u his any longer!..

The girl whome she was speaking 2 was stunned!!....tears falling off her eyes....she said....

Girl:par muhurat to kal ka tha...phir vo mujhe aaj hi tyaar(ready) hone ko kyun keh rahe hain??

Arya:maine kaha na...he cannot wait any longer 2 make u his!!......by the ways.....wat did u do 2 get all this....kuch dinoo pehle tak to humaare saath hi rehti thi ridhi...oh....i'm sooo sorry....MAHARANI RIDHIMAA!!!

ridhimaa:plzz....don't say that..tum to jaanti ho na..ki mein ye shaadi nahi karna chahti hoon!.

Arya:oh....is it??....mujhe to kuch aur hi laga tha!!...

saying soo she leaves.......nd ridhimaa is still sobbing..

she falls down on the floor nd is still crying..as she does not know wat her fate will bring 2 her the next moment....

FLASHBACK........ridhimaa is one of the girls in maharaj .Vivek's mahal.......not exactly a servant..but works fr him.....nd he is mesmerized by her beauty..nd wants 2 marry her.....but...this innocent girl...who was told about all this just a day ago..was crying the whole day....as this was not she had dreamt of!.....she dreamt of her soul-mate...but...maharaj was not at all the 1!!...she did not want 2 get married 2 him at ny cost!....

PRESENT.......

ridhimaa is still sobbing.......nd thinks..."nahi ye nahi ho sakta...i don't wanna get married 2 vivek...!!...noooo...not at all...he is definately not the 1 i have been waiting fr!!....mein ye shaadi nahi kar sakti.....mujhe yahan se jana hi hoga...kaise bhi!!..

thinking this she runs away frm the mahal..par mein jaaon kahan...vo log to kaise bhi mujhe dundh lenge.....

she is wearing a beautiful lehnga....with a net dupatta.....dressed as bride...asking fr some1 to give her lift.....2 help her somehow get out of that place...she knew all men r not nice...but still she had 2 take the risk....she just wished someone good at heart meets her..some1 who could understand her....

ok guys..plz tell me how it was..nd whether i should continue it or not....plzzz do comment....

dolly..

Edited by dolly_sweety - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

wooooooooooooo dolly sweety

i loved it alotttttttttttttttt

like the concept a lottttttttttt

plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooon

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123abc123

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Posted: 17 years ago

wooow greta concpt

lkin 4wrd to readin more

really nce

updte soon

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dolly_sweety

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet-niz
wooow greta concpt
lkin 4wrd to readin more

really nce

updte soon

thank u sooo much....will definately continue...

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dolly_sweety

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: swansea
wooooooooooooo dolly sweety
i loved it alotttttttttttttttt

like the concept a lottttttttttt

plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooon

thank u very much......i'm planning 2 continue tomorrow.....till then i hope i get some more comments!

Edited by dolly_sweety - 17 years ago

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nyla

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Posted: 17 years ago

hey nice concept plzzz continue
n can u plzz pm me wen u cont 😳😃

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harshadislove

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Posted: 17 years ago

hey plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon

desperatly waiting for it

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harshadislove

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Posted: 17 years ago

n can u plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz pm me

wen u cont

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dolly_sweety

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Posted: 17 years ago

hiee pple......thank u fr the comments.....nd would appreciate suggestions2....... well i'm continuing...... . . part 2... . .

ridhimaa ran away from tha mahal...nd is alone walking on the quite road...theres no1 to b seen around her......she quite scared...

"hey bhagwan ...plzz....aaj ki raat aur koi khel mat khelna mere saath...mein thak gayi hoon is sab se!.....meri life ko pehle jaisa bana do.....kitni kush thi mein jalandar mein....mumbai aane ki zaroorat hi kya thi mujhe!!....papa ne kitna mana kiya tha mujhe...."

meanwhile.....a group of pple r going for a vaccation.....there r 2 girls along with 3 boys....in their innova.....

girl:are yaar rahul jaldi chala na....yahaan koi restrurant bhi nahi dikh raha hai!..mujhe bhook lagi hai....

rahul:haan baba...chala raha hoon na....ab yahan koi restrurant nahi to ismein meri kya galti hai??

girl:haan...haan..meri hi galti hai...is chuhe(mouse) ko gadi chalane ko kisne kaha.....hum kal tak bhi panvel nahi pohoochenge!

rahul:are koi iska muh bandh karao....

girl:tu muh bandh kar!....

rahul: muskaan!.....bohot ho raha hai tera ab..chupkar aur mujhe gadi chalane de....

muskaan:mein ch....

anjali:shut up u both!.....kab se dekh rahe hain...ghagde hi jaa rahe ho....laga tha ki ab chup ho ge....par nahi...u'll wanna fight!....

atul:haan....ab chup karo...dekha anjali ko gussa dila diya na....ch ch ch... gusse se kitni laal ho gayi hai beechaari!....hehehe..

anjali:atul tum mujhe kyun chida rahe ho??...mein to inhe ghagadne se rok rahi thi na...

atul: accha baba..tumhe kuch nahi boolta.....(to himself:warna phir lecture chaloo ho gayega!)

muskaan:are armaan tum chup kyun baithe ho?....kuch to bolo...

a guy wid blue eyes....a total hunk....is shown.....he is really handsome....1 for whom girls r ready 2 do nything...but he is least bothered about all that....a very sensitive guy....he is our very own armaan!!.....

armaan:kuch nahi...bas bore ho raha tha....rahul mujhe gadi chalane de...

rahul: theek hai..waise bhi mein is stupid ki baaton se distract ho raha hoon...aa ja..

nd they change their seats....now armaan is driving...

on the other side.....ridhimaa sees...a car coming.....she waves her hand...asking for lift....its the same car in which the 5 of them were travelling....

atul: wo kaun hai wahan pe.....koi to lift maan raha hai...armaan dekh to zara...

muskaan: nahiiiii.......nahi armaan .....gadi mat rookna...meine suna hai ki yahan pe bhoot ghoomte hain.....

anjali: shut up muskaan.....aisa kuch nahi hota hai..ya bas tumhara vehem (intution)hai....

armaan: mein dekh ke aata hoon.....

muskaan: rook armaan..pehle uske pair(feet) dekhle ....kahin ulte to nahi hai na?/..

rahul:are armaan tu jaa.....aur u keet quite muskaan!.....chup kar ke baith jaa....

armaan: k guys..u'll wait...mein dekh ke aata hoon....

armaan gets out of the car...nd he is stunned 2 c ridhimaa in front of him...she was soo beautiful he thought....he just stared at her.....not even moving a bit....

ridhimaa was quite shy as she did nto know wat she should tell him....at last she spoke up.....kya aap mujhe lift de sakte hain?.....

armaan:haan...sure..plzz come.....

both of them go 2wards the car..nd armaan tells every1 that she wanted their help to get out of that place....

all of them agreed 2 help her out.....

ridhimaa nd armaan sat in the car nd they drove off....

atul:mera naam atul hai...aur tumhaara?

ridz:hi..mera naam ridhimaa hai...

atul: accha naam hai...yeh sab mere friends hain.....(pointing out 2 all of them....)...ye muskaan hai,ye anjali, rahul aur isse to tum mil hi chuki ho...ye armaan hai...

ridz:hiee....nice meeting u'll....

muskaan: same here......waise tumhe jaana kahan hai?

ridz got tensed as she did not know wat 2 tell them....they cud make out frm her face that she was tensed...

rahul: kya hua ridhimaa??...tum itni tensed kyun ho??

ridz: kuch nahi...bas aise hi...

armaan: are ...aise kai kuch nahi...ab tum humari friend ban gai ho....to hume batoogi nahi ki kya problem hai??...

ridz tells them all wat had happend wid her........

ok guys...time 2 go...hope u'll like it.....i know its somewat boring...but i promise the next part will b interesting.....plz comment..

bye...cya...

dolly....